The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10

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Rubina

@Rubz1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#401

Too good yaa charu...kalpi will make raghav realise what wrong he has done.. I loved how kalpi heared raghavs side of d story... Supporting him n still staying away from him... But still I'm feelin bad ki mere raghav kalpi ko alag kar Diya... I ko jaldi ek kar do plz plz plz...

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Thank you Ritu. Your detailed feedback is always a pleasure to read, and thank you so much for liking this particular update/track. I know this may not be of liking much. 😊

oye how do u know my name..did i told u😲

glad that u like my feedback...i always try to feel the character of story thats why i m able to give long feeback..

why u r saying that this update was not kind of liking.,u r wrong chahat...its an emotional one update..love the emotion u spread in ff...dont know how much i will be able to show this emotions love nd drama in my upcoming new ff..yes i m planning to write a ff on ragna..😲

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sharanya

@sharanya0011

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Posted: 11 years ago

#403

wow wonderful updates..

u suprises me every time with ur writing..

no words dear..

so beautiful update..

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: Rubz1234
Too good yaa charu...kalpi will make raghav realise what wrong he has done.. I loved how kalpi heared raghavs side of d story... Supporting him n still staying away from him... But still I'm feelin bad ki mere raghav kalpi ko alag kar Diya... I ko jaldi ek kar do plz plz plz...

Thank you so much for liking it. 😊

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: sharanya0011
wow wonderful updates..
u suprises me every time with ur writing..
no words dear..
so beautiful update..

Thanks Sharanya. 😊 This was a special and wonderful compliment. 😃 🤗 Thanks so-so much. 😊❤️

Edited by chahat4u - 11 years ago

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#406

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#407

Thanks chahat for a wonderful update..

you know i like every concern of ragna towards each other..

when raghav injured his thumb kalpi's concern was awesome.,she felt hurt not for herself but for her love raghav..nd scolded him for his carelessness..

love the way raghav staring to his kalpi during scolding session nd then kiss her nd again kalpi scold him.,it is such a wonderful relation of love as well as hubby nd wife..

as i told in my earlier comment that kalpi will become a support system to raghav..she actually had done that nd supporting his raghav but not in his bad deeds..this is a true wife..who show right path on time..i must say at this point our imagination works same coz i had also planned the same kalpi for my ff..😃

though it will not change my imagination...i will try to make it fantastic as much i can.

apart from this raghav statement in the newspaper was very nice..👏

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Eishwinder K Singh

@eishe10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#408

Great update!! lts lovely written. Continue soon.

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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#409

Fabulous update charu.. Loving this Raghav a lot.. The apology note was also awesome .. Paakhi would think that she is the special person while Raghav actually means kalpi..

Continue soon..

Edited by appyK - 11 years ago