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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
BTW, I am late in introducing myself. My name is Rekha and was a huge fan of Ragna.
It really breaks my heart to pair Kalpi with someone else, but I love Kalpi in the serial and I think she deserves so much better.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
I like this vihaan but being a flirt and falling in love with kalpi???? I still like rags... his love and loyalty to his mother made him marry poo but his mind heart and everything is only for kalpi... there can be 1000000 great guys for kalpi but there is only kalpi for rags...
he has suffered so much since childhood and he deserve this angel in his life... ragna forever😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: rvarier

Hello,

Require some feedback. I was just re-reading what I had posted in the last update.

I felt that I was over explaining Vihaan's feelings for Kalpana. Do you think I need to tone it down a little?

Please leave some feedback about this, as I am seriously confused.


No i think it was gud
No need to tone it down
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: rvarier

Hello,

Require some feedback. I was just re-reading what I had posted in the last update.

I felt that I was over explaining Vihaan's feelings for Kalpana. Do you think I need to tone it down a little?

Please leave some feedback about this, as I am seriously confused.


Just finished reading all the 12 parts together and I'm so loving your FF, especially love the way you've portrayed Kalpi.


I too was really getting fed up seeing how her character has been changed to a typical doormat. I'm actually such a big Ragna fan but I've gotta admit I'm quite intrigued by Vihaan.

I also would like Raghav to know that Kalpi is not an dispensable person but someone very precious & irreplaceable

I also wanna see Kalpi's self confidence increase not just in her work but also in her self.

Please do update soon Rekha, I can't wait to read further.

P.S. You are an amazing writer & please don't change anything in your writing, it was perfect 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
read all d 12 part in one go. Its awsm story.
Love d way u make kalpi. Confident, emotional, caring n bindas. Lv ur writing d way u potrayed each n every character
Want jst 1 thing kalpi need to acept vihan ful heartedly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Awesome update...
According to me its great that u explained vihaan's feeling to this depth coz it will help us to accept vihaan for kalpi even after raghav comes in the story..i personally am a ragna fan and think that nobody can love kalpi as much as raghav does but reading about vihaan's feeling is helping me accept him as the hero..
Sorry if this hurts u but i think that now u should cut it now and make the expressing thing a bit small coz the story is not moving much..till now it was necessary coz initially vihaan was introduced as an intelligent playboy businessman and now his image is of an intelligent lovestruck businessman..in short now on just cut on the expressing thing and really sorry for this super long pravachan😆
Continue soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rvarier

Hello,

Require some feedback. I was just re-reading what I had posted in the last update.

I felt that I was over explaining Vihaan's feelings for Kalpana. Do you think I need to tone it down a little?

Please leave some feedback about this, as I am seriously confused.

plz don't tone anything down...u r an awesome writer and I love this ff..in fact I stalk it...yupp I want KALVi as the end couple...I will never stand by what rags did to kalps..and even to poo...whatever..hoewer dreamy she may be..he led her on...and..though I love ragna...but I really feel rags need to be understanding and kalpi needs to move on...m in love with Vivaan ...and plz don't change ur storyline...just my POV..I love ur story coz if its different concept..and a diff pair up...it really looks like story of kalpi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aweee!!!! Awesome dear!! Please do continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read all the parts in one go...n must say really awesommeee ff
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loving this vihaan...& the way kalpi's character is portrayed by you..

please update soon soon..very soon..
cant wait to read more & yes please give long updates bcoz em really greedy u know😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Thanks everyone for your feedback and support. Thanks for your time invested in reading my FF.
This part is dedicated to my star- Kalpana, as I would want to see her in EMA.

This is not a chapter which is romantic, sorry. Lots of romance in next chapters, promise.

Part 13

As the day of launch came closer, the whole team was working against deadlines. Many days they had to pull all-nighters. Malhotra Industries had a huge palatial guest house in the office premises itself and he had made it available to the team members, in case they wanted to use it during these busy days. Many of the team, including Kalpana and Neha had left some of their clothes and other items in the guest house and would stay there overnight, if required.

Kalpana was really happy these days. She loved working these long hours , as she had no time to feel sad or think about her past. She enjoyed the company of all her team members, but she had grown very close to Neha.

Neha had taken Kalpi under her wing and had become an elder sister to her. Kalpi had told her entire story to Neha. Neha was the first person with whom she had shared her life-story, apart from people who were already involved in it. She felt lighter after talking to Neha, as Neha was totally non judgmental and very understanding. After listening to everything Neha had hugged her and Kalpi felt at peace.

Neha said " Kalpi, you have faced a lot in your life, but remember a relationship break-up is not the end of the world. When my husband left me for another woman, I thought my life had ended, but it was the best thing that happened to me. I have a great life now, my career, my kids and my friends all make me really happy.

Kalpi said, "My mind understands all this, but my heart still hurts."

Neha replied "Kalpi, you may feel the pain, but whenever you get a chance to be happy, allow the happiness to come into your life. Slowly happiness will erase all the pain. Also take responsibility for your own happiness. Don't wait for your mother, father or Raghav to make you happy, because it will never happen. Find your own happiness. Learn to be a little selfish, being selfish is not bad, it is human."

"My mom always told me that being selfish is wrong", Kalpi muttered.

"What I have heard from you about your mom, I can definitely say that she does not practice what she preaches. She has always been selfish and has always got what she wanted by hook or crook."

Kalpi finally understood what she always knew in her heart. Everyone always praised her mother as being a God-like character, but she always did what she felt was right, even if it hurt others.

It was as if a weight had been lifted from her heart finally. It was as if finally she had escaped from a cage of her mother's expectations.

She had previously decided that she would be successful for herself, but now she decided that she would be happy because she deserved her share of happiness.

It could be with Raghav or without him, she made the decision to be happy for herself.

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