Punishment of love-part 7 updated in page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys,
It was the first story I had ever thought and I did not pen it down yet. I want to share it with u all. It is not typical love story. It is story of patriotism and duties. It is story of powerful love which surfaces in Raghav's mind and heart when He was not in senses. A love that grow in Kalpana's heart for the person who is not in his senses. But then what is the reason that Raghav is jailed for murdering Kalpana. It is punishment of love.

Teaser:
Court Room is full of reporters and curious people. Mr. Raghav Singhania, India's one of the richest man will be convicted for the murder of his mere PA Kalpana Yadav.
Raghav is proved to be guilty for murdering Kalpana. Raghav is waiting for the verdict. He is hoping for death sentence which will free him for this cursed life.
But to his surprise, lawyer from Kalpana's family side pledges mercy for him and asks the judge to give Raghav life imprisonment instead of death sentence.
Raghav looks at the girl who is sitting on the front raw. She is smiling mercilessly to him.
Court announces the verdict.
In jail,
Hawaldar comes to Raghav and says that one girl has come to meet him.
Raghav knows that finally she has came to meet me, to mock me.
In meeting room,
Raghav asks the girl : you hate me then why did u pledge mercy for me, Pakhi?
The girl smiles . A smile that is sad and full of hatred : Do you really think that you can go away so easily after murdering my sister. you are wrong Mr.Singhania. you have to bear it every moment. You have to live with this guilt everyday. You will die every second remembering her last words. Don't u and it will be your punishment of love.

Raghav remembers the moment Kalpana dies in his arm uttering ' I still love u'. He self thinks If he gets to know the truth one moment before, his life will be different. But he is unaware of the fact that everything was planned this way only so that he could get to know the truth at the moment she wanted.

Index :
Part 1 - Page 2.
Part 2 - Page 3.
Part 3 - Page 6.
Part 4 - Page 9.
Part 5 - Page 10.
part 6 - Page 13.
part 7 - Page 16.


Do u want me to continue?
I will continue if u people want me to continue
Please comment.
Criticism and suggestions are welcome.

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Mehfooza thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Kalpana expired 😭
I would love to know the mistry behind this murder.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohh god raghav murdered kalpana, so sad but why he did this,
i want to know plz update this soon😭
angelpureness thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Can't wait to read more... Hope he finds the real murderers or her new identity
Autumm thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what happen? he luv her so much..it can be...ok need to read this ASAP...dun waste time dear...type fast..heheh😆
update soon...👍🏼


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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMGGG...amazing teaser, bring it on soon !! Cant wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Why am I having the feeling these r already planned? That Paakhi is none other Kalpana? Hope I am thinking too much.. Anyways good start...
Mimi
Saanjh26 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys,
This is not a typical love story . so don't expect a very lovey dovey love story. It will be different. Raghav murders Kalpana but there is something more in it. The story will continue in flashbacks. It is about duty and patriotism. It is about hunger of power and position. It is about love. It is about humanity and it is about punishment, Punishment to the love from the love.
DiVirgo thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's awesome!! Wud love to read more! Continue plz!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kalpana 😭😭😭😭...continue soon...

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