The Description of RAGNA's TRUE LOVE

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Posted: 11 years ago
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A POEM ON RAGNA- Joint Poem...
The Description of RAGNA's TRUE LOVE
Ragna..
How to describe it??
Their love-
Deeper than ocean...
Lighter than a feather...
Magical in night of full moon..
Can't live without each other...
The stars and moon became the proof of their love...
The passion keeping aside is tough..
Hovering by the bird dove..
Even the smooth pillows felt rough...

Everything goes numb be4 their true love...( By Mimi)


every deeds of you will bring you closer to me..
i don't to say in words to you
as words are run short for me to describe to you
my whole life is there for you to tell how much
i love and care for you...
i don't want to express to the whole world
as they don't know the depth of our love..
i want only you to be in my world...( By sasikalasriram)

The world becomes small 4 us..
We will continue in the heaven 4 thus.
The truth of our love should left unknown..
But in the book of forever love our names would be re known.
The kiss of the last breeze is ours..
The touch of my lips is yours..
The smile in your lips tie..
Will love each other till we die..( By Mimi)



true love cannot be explained with words
it can only be felt
they don't need any proof of their love
as nature itself is the proof
of their burning love..
their love is like the burning sun
whose warmth can melt all...( By sasikalasriram)




Melted everything with the heat...
There's no place in their relationship 4 the word cheat...
The trust that never could be beat...
The bond which became strong in their every meet...
The life is short if u consider it..
But they r satisfied being together as it is their treat...
Don't know till where it will lead..
Probably to the last of every deed...( By Mimi)

This poem is a joint poem written by me and sasikalasriram...
Hope u won't mind me 4 posting this..I guess our poem is really good...
What u guys feel..
Give us feedback and likes..
Urs Mimi😃
Edited by mimiunisha - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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good one...👏 for both of u...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: smile_san

good one...👏 for both of u...



Thanks my smilie😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Come on Guys Sasi and Me added more new lines.. Say how u guys felt? Sasi this post is urs also since we made this poem as partners..So feel free here in writing anything...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow!!!
mimi meri jaan
superb poem i loved it
sasi and mimi good job👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's awesome!! Great job both of you! Love it!! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

It's awesome!! Great job both of you! Love it!! 👏

thank you from both of them
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely👏 gre👍🏼at job

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