FF: Unseen Love :) Part 21 PG 74

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@HappySmiles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Anjinie
as usual kamala is so selfish, at her friends are trying to evidence to prove Kalpi's innocence,

Thank you for the comment.

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Thanks for updating. 😃 Enjoyed it so much and the first sentence of the update, Raghav's thought itself surprised me. n Kamla is so selfish.

Can't wait for the girls to find evidence of Kalpi's innocence and Raghav-Kalpi becoming best friends again. 😊 Please update next part soon dear. 😃 ⭐️👏

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

awesome update dear🤗..Kamla as usual selfish n idiot😡
hope Tani and group finds evidence soon and reveals d mystery..
but plzz dont take too much gap😭 n update soon😊

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premap

@premap

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Thanks for update. I am always waiting for the updates of esp, This FF, Has a special interest in this. But it is beyond my imagination ,that the burnt building is left 'high and dry' for the last 15 years or so. It would have been vandalised! May be I am wrong.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: premap
Thanks for update. I am always waiting for the updates of esp, This FF, Has a special interest in this. But it is beyond my imagination ,that the burnt building is left 'high and dry' for the last 15 years or so. It would have been vandalised! May be I am wrong.

You are absolutely correct but I just wanted to use this building in my story & I don't really search for too much logic either.😆 :)😳 (I'm kind of filmy🤣)
Thanks for your comment!!!😛

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Rakapaul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

hi dear I'm raka i am new to this forum & I love ur stories but i am just asking when will u update ur you are a star ss i am missing it a lot pls update that also it's just a request.

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rani214

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Superb update

Loved dat Kalpi's best frnds on mission to free kalpi

Hope dey find more clue soon n kalpi is proved innocent

Kamla😡

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Part 11

"Mr. Singhania try to understand!" Tani yelled at him for the fifth time. "I'm telling you na..the security guard would know!"

"He would know nothing and by now he's probably some old budda" Raghav said face palming himself.

Paakhi whispered to Maya, "He doesn't even have any respect for the elders." "Sh" Maya told Paakhi and pointed at the arguing duo.

"Mr. Singhania, if you feel you are right then prove it" Tani said angrily.

Raghav shook his head and stood in his spot stubbornly.

"Look Raghav.." Tani tried. "We know for a fact that Kalpana can't have murdered your parents, but at least we can figure out how the factory actually caught on fire.."

Raghav turned to look at Tani in disbelief. "Does all this sound like a game to you?!" he asked incredulously.

"But Ra-"

"Just leave!" Raghav said waving his hand at her.

Mr. Sehgal who was standing at the back and observing the girls said, "See Tani? I told you that this stubborn child won't let go of his zidd, what are we here for? To get insulted?"

"Pa when I told you to not come with me if you can't bear insults then you should have understood me and stayed back home, but don't tell me what to do and what not to do when it is my best friend's case" Tani told her father in one breath.

Mr. Sehgal's eyes widened but non the less he chose it best to remain quiet.

"So Mr. Singhania, are you going to figure out who that security guard was or not?" Tani asked for the final time.

Raghav looked at the three pleading girls but shook his head, mumbling, "This murderer didn't even go to jail without snatching her friends' happiness, who are now so busy with this case that they don't even think twice about themselves."

"Maya go get my friend's five year old daughter" Tani said to Maya who nodded.

Raghav looked on curiously, wondering what was going on.

When Sophia, the five year old girl came in with her mother, Tani murmured a silent thanks to her mother.

Tani took out a box of matches from her pocket and handed it to Sophia. "Here hon, it's a present for you, won't you take it?"

"What the heck-"

"Shut up Raghav" Tani said dismissing him.

They all watched as Sophia turned the box over in her hands, wondering what to do.

"Well?" Tani asked.

Sophia just pulled apart the box and the matches dropped on the floor. Sophia grabbed a handful of matches and looked at Tani confused.

"Look Raghav, this five year girl has no clue whatsoever about what to do with these freaking matches."

"Maya take them away" Tani said indicating Sophia and her mother.

"A five year old Raghav, imagine" Tani told Raghav. Raghav raised his eyebrows.

Tani took a match herself and lit it. "I have no other option to explain this whole dumb idea than this" Tani said to Raghav.

She stepped up to him and glared at him; holding the match between their faces.

And then she dropped it.

"What are you doing!" Raghav snapped, but he looked down.

"Oh look Raghav!" Tani exclaimed sarcastically. "The match is already burning out.."

Tani went and hi fied Maya. "Great Science Lesson for Mr. Akdoo, ain't it?"

"Look Raghav" Tani told Raghav as she stepped onto the the match, and pointed at him. "This is the last time I am telling you this, my friend is totally innocent and you are a bloody fool."
"Your parents had died Raghav" Tani told him, her voice calm this time. "Anyone would be upset over it." She took Raghav's hand. "And you needed someone to blame..so you chose the most illogical reason in the world to satisfy your needs."

"You get what I mean?" Tani asked Raghav.

"What we can do, Mr. Singhania, is find the real culprit, okay?"

Raghav pulled his hand away from Tani's and turned around in shame.

"Mr. Singhania?" Tani asked him. "Raghav?" she finally said.

Raghav spoke up. "Fine then miss, do what you must to... prove Kalpana innocent. I will try my best to help you."

-*-

"Haan Tani, we'll do what we can to save Kalpi, don't worry.." Paakhi said that night as she walked downstairs to the kitchen to grab a glass of milk. "Haan Baba-" "Hey, I think I hear voices, talk to you later" Paakhi said quickly hanging up.

As she got closer to her parents room, she heard the voices get louder. She stood against the wall and peeked in.

"Sahil, you know this Kamla Bai.." "She does what she wants!"

"She's not only greedy but also chaloo, she gets what she wants" Sahil agreed.

"You wait and watch Sahil, if you don't do anything asap, then Kamla Bai will read our black book aloud to everyone."

'Black book?' Paakhi thought curiously.

"We paid Kamla to kill our rivals: the Singhanias but now we really will have to pay, and not just some itty bitty amount." Neetu went on. "Sahil, we need to do something.."

"Oh just shut up Neetu!" Sahil blurted out frustratedly. "For the past half an hour you have been continuously mumbling do something, do something, remember all three of us were in this together."

"Oh please Sahil.."

Paakhi tuned out all the voices as she walked back into her room with a heavy heart. She had always known that her family was shameful, but she had never thought that they could stoop this low.

She gulped, as she sat down on her bed.

A few moments later, Tani's text appeared. 'Paakhi, meet u tomorrow, we will have 2 contact tis security guard'

Paakhi's hands were shaking as she texted back. 'C U 2morrow'.

-*-

"Thank God you guys are here on time, now we can investigate further before the court case" Tani said.

"Raghav found out the location and texted me the address of the guard" Tani told them both. "Maybe we can figure something out."

"Yeah sounds good.." Maya said.

Tani turned to Paakhi. "Hey Paakhi, you seem lost, you alright?"

Paakhi gave a false smile in return. "I'm fine.." she told the girls brightly.

PRECAP:-) SaTu and Kamla Bai meet. Someone standing behind the closest tree takes out his/her phone with shaking hands and uses their video camera to record their conversation.

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Resss

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heyyllooo dear..

it was nyc n good update.. at last tanya has made raghav realise dat kalpi s innocent.. n pakhi heard d truth I jus hope dat she ll help her frnd.. and I was expecting more of ragna moments as its been many days since I have read it in ur ff.. and make dis case get over soon na.. then v ll have a lot of ragna moments Lol..

Edited by vasishna - 11 years ago