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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear but it was too short😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
That's not short that's super short but atleast u updated😃😃
Fabulous update and will be looking forward to other story's updates..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
im waiting 4 ur next update...im waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
after long break
update soon next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 13

sorry guys for delay :

character sketch:

after 6 years:

kalpana's daughter :
pihu she is 5 years old apple of her mother & father eyes

Edited by kanch1234 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 13 continued:

a lady is standing in balcony & writing something in her diary.
kalpi (POV): how things changes no body know what we desire we get & but in what cost no buddy knows.
from 6 years kalpi started writing her diary where she used all her moments of her life how pihu comes in her life & how her changed . now her daughter is her world.

form behind some come & offer her coffee.

coffee. so again u started writing diary. u know it's not good to write every thing.
kalpi:why, it gives me peace.
guy:really peace.
kalpi: yup.
just then pihu gets up & say mumma.
ohh my little princess u waked up so early.
pihu:really dad.
yes darling so today is sunday what u have decided where we should go for picnic.
kalpi:no we are not going anywhere u know na mom is not well she need rest , so we r not going to trouuble her.
guari: really beta . but see i'm fine & i'm going for picnic with my granddaughter & with my son.
kalpi: no maa we r not going anywhere u know na docter asked u to take rest ,
then & go do that.

guy: come on kalpi can't u see , she is ok & if she want to accompany us then what's the matter.
guari: oye chup bada aya accompany wala u r accompanying us becoz it's my & pihu plan to go for picnic.
kalpi: come on maa know stop being stubborn just go & do rest.
guari: no i'm going anywhere if u people r not interest them me & pihu will go .
pihu: yes we will let dad & mom here.
& they both leave that room.


Edited by kanch1234 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update kanchan! I hope this guy is raghav 😕 you didn't mention his name and it actually brought confusion.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ban18

Nice update kanchan! I hope this guy is raghav 😕 you didn't mention his name and it actually brought confusion.


come on yaar i already told u that now this a roller coaster drive :D 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update!! Who is the guy?
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Posted: 10 years ago
U didn't clear who is that guy...hope hes raghav...
nice update...buts very chhotu...

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