THE ULTIMATE FOUR ..Chappy-2 updated...

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Guys this is gonna to be my second story..Thanks 4 the appreciations u all give me 4 my current running story Kalpana truely an Angel...So getting so much appreciation had made me to fuel myself 4 another story...The thought of this story came from BabyDoll's Supernatural story of Ragna..So this story of mine is dedicated to SHONA since she is my BabydollšŸ˜† Guys don't leave my two stories alone since they need readers like u all...
THE ULTIMATE FOUR...
RAGHAV...KALPANA
SAMMY...PAKHI...


Hope u guys will enjoyšŸ˜‰

Chap-1 pg-1
Chap-2 pg-4
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CHARACTERS-
SINGHANIA FAMILY-
NAREN SINGHANIA
GOURI SINGHANIA
RAGHAV SINGHANIA...
YADAV FAMILY-
VITTHAL YADAV
KAMALA YADAV
PRAKASH YADAV Urrf PAKYA
KALPANA YADAV
PAKHI YADAV...

RAIZADA FAMILY-
MEHESH RAIZADA
SANDHYA RAIZADA
SAMAR RAIZADA
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys do comment since this gonna be something different maybe 1st time u all explore...
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Chapter-01...
A small girl standing near the road carrying her little sister in her arms..
She is crying for help ..She need shelter..She is so helpless..The sudden turn of intervals made her to ask for a shelter for her and her sister..Suddenly a couple with a boy of nine came there...The couple's glowing face gave her relief!!! Yes! she got a shelter ..for herself and Paakhi...
"Kalpi...Kalpi..."someone called her loudly breaking her silent nap...
She opened her eyes to see that woman who gave her and her sister Paakhi a name..
K- Yes mum...!!!
Kamala- Dear today is Prince Raghav's birthday...Won't you come with us..
Kalpana-Us means?
Kamala- Us means me and Paakhi! Come we all citizens are heading for the palace...
Kalpana- No mum ...am not coming..Not interested in your Prince birthday..
Paakhi entered...
P- Di how could you say that..the girl who will be his will be the most luckiest one..
Kalpi-Yaa..Everyone says that..anyways you are not going ..I don't want you to be a victim of his..
Kamala- But beta one night with prince will give her the golden night...
P- Yes Di...
Kalpi-Shut up he is a womanizer...I can't loose my sister for him...You know naa today is the ritual after which he will choose a girl for one night and then after 1 hour she has to sacrifice her life...Cheap ritual cheap work..If you want him physically go and contact him on other day but not today ..I don't want his eyes to fall on you today I have to loose you for always...
P- Di you are very protective about me..
Kalpi- I am...
Paakhi- I always hear your words Di but not this time..I am going with Kamala maa..and I will feel myself lucky if prince wants to spend a night with me...
Kalpi- Mum explain her..
Kamala- Beta ..if someone sacrifice her life for the royal family her name is written with gold..
Kalpi- Mum that's not an excuse...
P- Mum its useless..to explain her..Let us go..
Kalpi- Paakhi..Paakhi..Mum don't take her...
Paakhi and Kamala left for the Royal Palace of Ellot...
Kalpi- I had never seen the Prince before only some lucky people get a glance of him but from newspapers I came to know he is a womanizer ...Oh! God she shouldn't fall in the eyes of the priest of the Royal family...
After three hours Kamala returned happily..
Kalpi tried to find Paakhi with her..
Kalpi-Mum where is Paakhi...
Kamala- Beta our Paakhi is damn lucky...the royal priest said she has golden blood..So now her name is written with gold..I love my Paakhi...she was my gem...
Kalpi- What ...so they got to know...
Tears rolled out on the cheeks of Kalpi...
K- Pakhi...my sis...
Flashback ends-
K pov- I cannot be weak..I have aim in my life so I kept myself away from society but time has came..Now I have to join Quora ...the school of fairies!..I cannot forget my identity..I have to bring back my planet in life..Once again ...Dragonet the Fairy God Planet will rule the magical dimension and I am gonna bring back my sister Paakhi..I can't forget the fact that I am still the Princess of the Magical Dimension the owner of the Creation Flame.

Guys how is it..? This is just the start more is coming...šŸ˜‰
Urs MimišŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What no one loved the chapter..Ok! I will not continue with it anymore...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update dear..liked it...continue soon...
Edited by smile_san - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow itz awesome plz continue dear i loved it sooo much now i cant wait for next part plzz update soon and plz pm me šŸ¤—
Lots of hugs n kisses for you dear šŸ¤— :-* :-*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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a fairy tale that too of ragna..its new fresh and marvelous...lovely dear šŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😃 šŸ‘ amazing first part! looking forward to next update. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Story of a Fairytale😊! WOW!!!
Loved the First Chapter šŸ‘šŸ¼ ā¤ļø
Do Continue !

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