my very first attempt!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is my very first attempt on this forum
all rottens are welcome for this !!!!!


where are you!!!!!

where are you!!!!

where are you!!!!!


when eyes don't meet

heart beat meets!

when words are run short

silence speaks a lot!

when you are not with me

your distance kills me


where are you

where are you


when i want near you

i cannot bring you in to my

world

but my destiny is always

with you

to find you to me

where ever you are

when you are miles apart

from me


where are you

where are you


you are my world

you are my destiny

you are my obsession

and you are my soul

where can i find peace

with out you tell me


where are you

where are you


deep in my thoughts

deep in my pain and sorrows

deep in my belongings

deep in my happiness

tell me

you are where there always with in me


tell me

where i can find you

as i cannot live with out you

tell me where i can find you you !!!!!!!



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HappySmiles thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Wow..what a beautiful piece of writing! πŸ‘
Great job!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
wat rottens
its amazing really wonderful one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow..!! It's very beautiful..Keep writing.πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
This was awesome.
Good try.πŸ‘
I loved it.❀️
Keep write more like this
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
thanks for all who have appreciated for my attempt
thank you

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