FF RAGNA IN SUPERNATURAL WORLD**REMOVED** - Page 17

Originally posted by: sara-ayub

Woow great start loved it Will wait for next part 🤗

thnx fr d comment

Originally posted by: appyK

Wow its awesome..different and superb part 1..

Continue soon..

thnx fr d comment

Originally posted by: veeranu

Shona... I LOVE YOU... U just took me back to Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon and Pyaar Kii Yeh Ek Kahani Times... I loved the update.. Kalpi does not have the beauty of Pakhi !!!! 😡 Tht GODZILLA MOUTH... Self fascinating DUMBO Pakhi... I loved the first part.. Do OM me the second part... 😃

ll defo pm u

Originally posted by: Honey2007

A good start, lovin it, Arnav chota bhai of Raghav 😎 btw do u have Essen, Germany in mind kya😃

no brother... n no german logic here😉

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart

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Unres.

Omg, spooky spooky. Hmpf, Pakhi the Attention Seeker. Obviously. What else can she be? Oh and a believer of supernatural. No comment on that. 😆😆

Essen. That's a unique name for a town. I'm trying to figure out the reason behind the naming, an anagram maybe?

I don't understand why Pakiya is so hesitant to comfort her in front of anyone though. What's the story behind that I wonder.

Okay, why in the world would Kamla and Vitthal believe that Pakhi deserved more attention. Oh nevermind. I don't want to know. I'm more interested in how the story will develop.

So it's King Arnav and Queen Khushi. I love the crossover between ArShi and RagNa. It's going to be hell interesting to read on. They are one of my favorite jodis so it's fab to think they'll be incorporate with RagNa. Woot woot. You had me jumping up in down since I saw the CS for this FF.

The mystery factor is something that never fails to intrigue me and I'm loving the whole Raghav "Player" Singhania. Though the fact that every girl he bedded became pregnant made me a bit intrigued as to why the hell that happened and whether or not the women knew that it wasn't the right time for them to, erm, do the deed.

Well a promising beginning to this story! I am really looking forward to reading what will happen in the forthcoming chapters and how you will bring about RagNa romance in this mysterious world.

Lots of jhappis and why the hell am I not a bestie? 😆😆😆

❤️

i hope i ll keep yall's expectations in ths story 😳

Originally posted by: SONIA6702

👏 awsum shona... luv d concept... so differnt 😊 nd unique... 👏

i luv supernayural stories ,, so dis gonna b my fav one😳

cnt wait to read why grls die aftr bein wid rags.. 😕 .. nd hw rags nd kalpana meet😳

will b watin ...

luv ya😊

i hope the wait ll be woth fr d next chap

Originally posted by: DayAndNight

interesting start , waiting for the RagNa first meeting😊

may be in third chap they ll meet 😳

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

Awesome!! Interesting! Wow very few men lol!! Girls throwing themselves at prince lol too good!! Very different story!! Anxious to see where this goes!!

well its my story it has to be different naa 😆

Dear today is 19th june 😆
Where is ur update...
Teaser is awsume...
Continue soon

Originally posted by: dakshaavi

Wow Shona again Arnav an Khushi reminds me of those beautiful IPK days . Raghav womaniser 😲

I like kalpi part . Please continue .

glad u liked it 😳