RagNa SS: The Sins of Innocence - Epilogue Updated 9/15 *COMPLETE*

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Treasures
OMG! This is amazing! I have goosebumps all over reading this! So intense, so powerful! My heart goes out to her!

Whoa, intense! Things will be alright, have faith in me.

Originally posted by: Pookhi
Nice update!:)
Poor Kalpi

Thank you!

Originally posted by: amy.r
Beautifully written...Gosh!! u made me hate khi more now!! 😡 Cant stand Kalpi shedding tears even in FF!!

Well I'm glad I did. 😆 I know, same here but there has to be some tears with what's happened to her. I hate myself for doing this but damn this muse for getting this idea that I just couldn't help but draft.

Originally posted by: diti96
Hey nyc story yaar
Gud 1
Loved it
Upate soon
Wat is pm

Thank you! PM is Private Message. It's like a subscription of sorts.

Originally posted by: jass1
kalpi😭😭😭😭... why she hs to suffer alws...😭😭... die GOB nd fam... 😡

awsum raz... i wished it wdnt end..😳 so nycly written...

dnt evr let kalpi forgive ny of dese charcters... plzzz... no frgiveness😡 nt evn rags...

plzz... update soon ... waitin eagerly...😳

luv yaa... 😳

It's not my fault. Blame the stupid muse for coming up with this amazing plotbunny that I had to adopt. Yeah, they have to die, but I can't as much as I wish. They are needed.

Thank you Jass hun!

Will try my best but what the muse thinks is what the muse will produce.

Will update soon.

Originally posted by: sona15
Awesome wonderful starting for a dark story waiting for next update

Thank you. Hmm, it's not really dark. Mostly angst but thank you for that. Will update soon!

Originally posted by: foram.
y always kalpi 😭
raghav 😡

Ahaha, that angry?

Originally posted by: vasishna
Nyc update dear.. feeling vryy sad fr kalpi😭😭 and dis stupid pakhi won't leave ny chance to insult kalpi..😡😡

Don't worry, have faith in me and things will straighten out soon. Yeah, well that's Pakhi for you.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96
Oh my this is amazing 👏 thanks for the pm 🤗

Your welcome and thank you for such a sweet comment!

Originally posted by: DayAndNight
amazing writing wid amazing emotions, 👏

Thank you, err, Ms. Night. Sorry, don't know your name.

Originally posted by: ForeverFabulous
RES! 😳

Waiting.

Originally posted by: babydolll
major saab aap late kaise ho gaye 🤣🤣

Shonu, pehle apna toh unres kardo meri jaan, 😆😆

Originally posted by: appyK
😭😭😭Bechari kalpi..please update next chapter soon..please pm me ..

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Newleaves
nyc start...

Thanks!

Originally posted by: ragnaishra123
Superb update...i didnt wanted it to end only...loved i. Sooo much ...plzzz plzz plzz update soon...

All good things come to an end. Will update soon!

Originally posted by: Mehfooza
awsume continue soon

Will do!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

update😡

Edited by babydolll - 11 years ago

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donwannaone

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

mera jawab kaha hia grrr

u too ignored me:((((

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

i hvent unresed my frst cmment yet🤣🤣

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#66

Originally posted by: rvarier
Very intersting loved it

Thank you!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
very well written...continue soon..👍🏼

Thank you and will do.

Originally posted by: drdee142
Oh my I got goose pimples reading this, it was so emotional & so beautifully written
I'm so looking forward to reading this SS, please do update soon dear.

Aww, thanks! Will update soon!

Originally posted by: marushkaa
A nice 1 ... pm me plzzz... wud love 2 read the next part

If you've buddied me and left me a not then PMs will come your way.

Originally posted by: incredible96
wow!!! i am again blown away!!! why dou always leave me speechless! that was a fab start to this story!!! i so hate paakhi!!! pplease yupdate soon and remmeber to pm me!! u nearly made me cry this time! nearly tho! lol

Speechless, oh lord sweetie. I'm not that good enough to deserve such words. Will update soon!

Originally posted by: priya_remix
uff emotional atyachaar on Kalpi! Loved the first chapter and yes do PM me ur lovely updates, I'll be eagerly waiting for them.

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: Anjinie
hope when Kalpi returns she must take revenge from all who turned their back on her. loved update please continue soon

Let's wait and see what happens.

Originally posted by: SARA4444
really amazing update
poor kalpi
plzz update soon
and pm me😃

Thank you! If you've buddied me and left me a note here then you will be getting PMs.

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#67

Originally posted by: Chin2_n
Nice start👏

Thank you!

Originally posted by: ragna575
Pm me...
Nyc one update soon

If you've buddied me and left me a note here then worry not about PMs.

Originally posted by: aryagr
Loved it but plz updt soon

Thank you and will update soon!

Originally posted by: lovelybubbly
Wow👍🏼
when r u going to update next part 😕...jaldiii karo 😊 loved it.

Will update soon!

Originally posted by: manikarnikaa
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
my poor kalpi
hel dis pookhi 😡😡😡😡😡😡kill her and even rags😡😡😡😡
...plz hottie update soon

Aww, don't be disappointed monu..have faith in me.

Originally posted by: 007jindal
awesome cont soon

Thank you!

Originally posted by: ragnaforever
Kalpi😭

Aww, don't cry. Relax an have faith in me.

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
I can't stop my tears from flowing
Poor Kalpi 😭
The people she love the most disowned her and Raghav the one person she thought that will be there for her said all those hurtful things to her...
It's heart-wrecking
That bit@h Pakhi 😡 I want to kill her
How dare she tell Kalpi to kill her baby and herself
I hope once Kalpi over come her shocked state to fight back and kick Pakhi 🤬
Beautiful update, love it although it made me cry like a baby 😛
I can't wait to read more. Plz pm me whenever u update

Aww, don't cry, Please don't. Have faith in me. I know, I know. Many are pissed off at Raghav and Pakhi but believe me, I'm more upset with my muse for picking such an idea. You're not the only one that wants to kill her. 😆 Let's see what happens next and once again, have faith in me. Will update soon and will PM you if you've buddied me and left me a note.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: dhanuli
oh its really good dear but I am hating this Raghav🥱

You're not the only one.

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#69

Originally posted by: manikarnikaa
😡arey razz plzzz update soon
am waiting here😭
🤢wait karke karke mar jana hai kya
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Kar rahi hoon baba, kar rahi hoon.