RagNa SS: The Sins of Innocence - Epilogue Updated 9/15 *COMPLETE*

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Lolor

@lolor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#321

beautifully written...thnx for updating...loved ff...happy ending...

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singhania

@singhania

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Posted: 10 years ago

#322

Hi, first time I'm reading your story & I must say woaw hats off to you. I've read lots of FF & SS but this one is just super.It's the 1st time that I've seen a writer on Indian Forum Fan Fiction receives more than 60 likes from the readers after each chapter. I'm gonna read all the chapters today coz I've seen that it's been completed. BTW I'm from Mauritius. Plz PM me if you have written other SS or FF & let me have the titles. Thanks & keep on writing you are a born-writer.

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#323

I dont know if i have commented b4 or not, but let me do so now.

i am aware that it was the latter part of ur update, but i wud like to compliment it first. the lines which u wrote explaining ur title sins of innocence. They are so into my mind, that if i read them 2-3 times more i might just have them by<3. Or maybe i already have them by<.3😆

the updates were long but the super interesting story coupled with ut writing skills didnt make them seem so long. So lost in them, i used to sigh when a part used to get over. & then be happy all over again on reading " for next scroll down or next part on next page". i am mentioning all of it to let u noe how engrossed i was while reading ur updates.

Ur id name ' writer at heart' suits u perfectly. u surely are a writer at heart.

waiting for this writer at heart's next creation desperately

MARUSHKAA

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#324

Raz, Kiara here. I don't know what to say. I'm speechless. It was awesome, splendid and fabulous all rolled into one. I can't believe it's ended. I know you can't go on but I never thought it would end soon . You have taken us on a magnificent journey of love, innocence and a whirlwind of emotions and I never really wanted it to end. Alas, all good things end one day. We have bonded with each and every character in the story that we felt the hurt and pain and their happiness. What a befitting finale you gave! I thank you from the bottom of my heart for taking us through this amazing journey. Kalpi and Raghav were victims of Pakhi's obsession. Pakhi was so insane that she forgot Raghav was never hers in the first place. She wanted to kill Kalpi and her unborn child in the hope that maybe Raghav will accept her afterwards. It was Sammy and Aira's extreme measures that finally made Raghav realise the truth. Initially I thought Prem has a past with Aira but after reading about Aira's indifference it dawned on me that he's connected with her sister. Felt really bad for Prem . He was also a victim of another girl's obsession. He had to pay a huge price for that. It was really heartwarming to see him doing everything he can to save ragna , even going against his own sister for that. Because he understands what it feels to lose a loved one and he doesn't wish that even on his nemesis. Loved that along with Raghav and Kalpi , also Aira and Sammy are together. They deserve to be happy afterall. Really wished you could do something for Prem though, but somethings are just meant to be... Hope I will continue to receive pm for all your future works too.

Edited by ragna_luv - 10 years ago

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sumasridhar

@sumasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#325

Oye innocent bacccha ya baby keep bareme batahi nahi
Lek in kahani me bahoot dam thi yara super looking forward for one more

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dimple

@DimpleAggarwal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Finally, u updated...really , ur SS is superbbb
all d chapters are so gud nd emotional
its just awesome ...
w8ng for ur next writing on RagNa/AshNa and plzz dont forget to PM me 😉when u start new story

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Rakapaul

@Rakapaul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#327

Superb u ar such a great writer can u pls pm me when u start the next story pls .

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Priya

@priya_remix

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Posted: 10 years ago

#328

So FINALLY!!! you updated once I kept the guillotine hanging over your head!!!! Damn I should have done that earlier!!!😆

Anyways coming back to your story...

Paakhi trying to kill Kalpi was really wicked and horrifying. Finally Aria and Sammy drove some sense into the budhead and he sprung into action! Kameena kahin ka!

But then too Der aaye durust aaye! As far as Kalpi is happy I have no regrets!!!

The day Aria had told her Di's story I thought that it was somehow related to either Prem of Raghav! But then Raghav could not have gone to that extent and I thought it was Prem!

But here is what I loved in your story is where I thought Prem must be the 'bad' guy who cheated Akaanksha you showed him completely innocent!

aww! Poor Prem he lost everything in his life! To be lonely throughout your life is the greatest punishment for any man.

Hmmm Pssst did you let Sammy hurt because he loves Aria and you like Paakhi wanted to hurt him because you were 'J'😛😆 LOL

Bechaare ko goli lag gayi and he even was lying in the hospital!! hmmm Poor soul Sammy! But loved the ending and even though this was your first attempt it does not seem so!

A writer's ability is seen of he is able to hold the interest of the reader throughout the story! And yours certainly did!!!!

And now since you have derived all the sadistic pleasure in the world to see people begging for your update and yet were not compassionate enough to update it I had to give you the ultimatum!

Sorry abt that!!!

It is so not easy to write a gloomy story as it starts affecting your mood too! I have written a few short sad stories and trust me I myself went into depression.

Since then I write my stories with a tinge of humour as I know thought people love tragedies I want to make them laugh, smile, grin, blush and happy!

Good job dear!!!🤗 Sorry to comment last, I was busy cooking a feast the whole day for 6-7 guests at home. I was sooo tired that I even went to sleep then as if my subconcious mind woke up on its own I came to read ur ff!!!

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Foram

@foram.

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#329

loved the update...
loved the story...
felt bad for prem and aira...
but happy that now aira has samar
and this gadha raghav 😡
kalpi should not have forgiven him so easily...
but anth bhala to sab bhala

:)