RagNa SS: The Sins of Innocence - Epilogue Updated 9/15 *COMPLETE*

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TheLifeDiaries

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Awesome di and the best of 3 is SaRa.

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Dee (Daisy)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Oh my loved the update, it was so emotional. Thank goodness Kalpi found a guardian angel in Aira, I too have fallen in love with this character .

Also glad that Sammy has stood up for Kalpi, I agree Aira will be perfect for Sammy & I too like the 2nd option for their jodi.

Please do update soon, you've got me hooked & I can't wait to read further

Dee

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Gudiyalovesguru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Fantastic chappy yaar...
very very intresting concept...
continue soon...
and i guess sara will be apt fr sammy and aira...

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Aria is an angel that came in Kalpi life
I love the way she took care of Kalpi and made her comfortable
Kalpi sharing her story with her was sad
Hmm... The great Raghav Singhania is remembering his memories with Kalpi
Pakhi 😡 that 🤬 I want to strangle her with my bare hands
She is such desperate witch, her kissing Raghav was terrible
I like that he push her away and warned her as well
How delusional of her to think she can take Kalpi place in Raghav life lol
Kalpi staying with Aria is wonderful, I love their interaction
I don't know why but I feel like Aria has a past that still affect her sometimes
Sammy was spectacular with his out bursted at Raghav. He so badly needed that reality check
And I love the way he spoke to that witch lol
It's an impressive update, I love it
Impeccable writing skills
I chose 1 for Sammy and Aria

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-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: babydolll
res

Originally posted by: babydolll
res 2

Originally posted by: babydolll
gng to sleep... unres after 17th

Waiting waiting, ab toh 17 pages bhi ho gaye.

Originally posted by: Honey2007
res

Waiting ji...

Originally posted by: Autumm
no 1...its grt darling...plz update soon...thk u...🤗

Thanks! Will update soon!

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96
Amazing Update 👏

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Pookhi
Res
Unres
I feel bad for poor Kalpi.😭
And only Sammy seems sensible right now.
Lovely story..continue soon.😊

Don't feel bad, have faith in me. Sammy only? No Aira? 😆 Will continue soon.

Originally posted by: amy.r
wonderful update as usual!!Glad Kalpi found a frnd!!feel like killing that vampire,,,,😊BTW I like jodi name 2...

Thank you! I know, same here. You're not the only who who wants to kill her. Your vote has been noted.

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-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: manikarnikaa
hayee hottie 🤗🤗🤗
thanks for update
wow razz beautiful amazing
dat brute rags grrr stupid idiot 😡 and
plz razz kill pakhi somehow
aira sammmy wow ...i choose second one sara
abh tum jaldi update kar varna spike will be on mission
chase razz😆

Monu, thank yous! Ahaha, you know I won't kill Pakhi...let's just see what happens to her later on in the story. Ahaha, I love their jodi even though it doesn't exist in reality. Baap re, nahi, Spike ko mission pe mat bhejna...will update soon! Vote noted!

Originally posted by: Anjinie
beautifully written!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: chahat4u
Liked the update. Interesting, loved Aira's character. I'll go for "SaRa".
But hating Pakhi's character even more, and Raghav too,for being so stupid!😊

Glad you did. I love Aira's character too and Pakhi..well, that's no surprise. 😆, hating on Raghav as well? Oh well, just have faith in me. Vote noted!

Originally posted by: ragna575
2..
Update soon..this update made me cry

Vote noted and thank you so much but why crying dearie? Have faith in me.

Originally posted by: vasishna
Awww.. d way kalpi s feeling d pain.. u almost made me cryy😭
Thnxx fr d beautiful update..😳
And I would choose 2..😆

No, don't cry, just have faith in me. Thank you for such a warm reply and your vote has been noted.

Originally posted by: sha6611
wow its beautiful...liked Aria...
i liked 2. option for sammy and aria

Glad you did, she's my favorite too. But it's "Aira" instead of "Aria", lol. Your vote has been noted hun!

Originally posted by: sanjulee
Awesome Update
... 2

Thank you and vote noted!

Originally posted by: incredible96
wow! i eeu never fail to stun me with each of your updates!!i am just in awe! i love sammy for going against paakhi! and cant wait for raghav to get a silent slap for his mistake for not trusting kalps! i love this ss! update soon and remember to pm me! oh nand i vote 2! :D though all the names are fab!

Stun you? You never fail to stun me with your comments hun. They're so kind and I feel touched reading them. Will update soon dearie and your vote has been noted.

Originally posted by: baljodhdhanesar
Im loving this FF! Please continue soon dear!

Thank you! Will continue soon!

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

raz mera matlab tha after 17th june

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-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: jass1

awsum update raz.. so emotional nd dramatic .😭😭.. why its alws grls who hv to prove dere innocence😭😭

m glad dat kalpi met smone whos prtective abt her in aria.. a stranger cn see dat kalpi is innocent but nt her fam nd her luv😡😡.. dnt make kalpi frgt dis pain so easily..

sammy believes in kalpi nd I knw d reason why 😆😆😆

update soon,, 😳

luv ya 😳

Aww thank you. I know right, us girls are always facing the pointy edge of the sword. So am I, even though I made Aira. Lol. Let's see what happens later on in the story hun. Can't promise anything as of yet. Lol. Of course. He had to believe in Kalpi. 😆 Will update soon sugar! Love you more!

Originally posted by: aryagr
I liked sara. But plz go ahead with ur choice. All 3 r gud options

Vote noted and thanks for the comment sweetie.

Originally posted by: yuvaragna
I am also 2
Make kalpi strong she dont forgive anyone amd befenetly please don't make ragna ragav don't deserve her
Make some new entry hot and cute and kind and most lovable person to kalpi he always stand for kalpi not like ragav
Ragav only deserve that bloody pitch phaki
Please I don't cry anymore somehow make all know about truthi want kamlw die in guilty please reply me

Noted! I hear where you're coming from hun. But if I did bring in another entry it wouldn't be RagNa anymore. I know it's tough with everything going on and with this update but you need to have faith in me. 🤗 Here's a hug from me because I know how you're feeling. I wish I could bring in a new entry but unless if I'm really hating on Raghav, I won't stop shipping them. Just please have faith in me. I am no RaKhi lover but I'm not like the CVs either 😆😆. I do apologise hun but I really need your trust otherwise I won't have any confidence left to write and this will be left abandoned. Something that I hate doing with my stories.

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Yikes!!!!RaKhi kiss! Did Raghav go and brush his teeth and wash his mouth with Listerine after that horrendous act??
And that fool thinks Kalpi is characterless???? What the hell is wrong with him to believe what Puki said????

And I like the 2 option Sara for Sammy and Aira :)

Ahahaha, I knew I was going to be receiving a lot of chappals and joote for putting that in there but it seemed readers have let it slide a bit easier than expected. Ahahahaha, will have to ask him if he did. If he didn't then you have my blessing to kidnap him and disinfect his mouth. 😆 Yes, well it's Raghav. Haha.

Your vote has been noted!

Originally posted by: Mihika
beautiful update👏 and i like the second name😛

Thank hun and vote noted!

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
an amazing SS cont soon

Thank you! WIll defos continue soon!

Originally posted by: ArVi-licious
Just found ur ss and loved every bit of it, and aira is superb too, i'l go wid option 3 for the couple name, looking forward to the next chapter..
Do u any other FF's or ss? I'd love to read them..

Aww, thanks. She is, isn't she? Lol. Your vote has been noted hun, thanks for the comment and for the vote. As of yet I only have one OS posted here. You can check it out in my Index (link in the signature box) and you'll find it. But I hope to write more on this fantastic couple later on in the future.

Originally posted by: Shyamlu
Fantastic chapter, great job buddy and i love jodi name 2..

Thank you! Your vote has been noted!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: mandu
Please add me to your pm list...I am totally enjoying your writing !!

Aww, thank you! I'm glad you're liking it! If you've buddied me and left me a note here then worry not about PMs

Originally posted by: ArlequinAJ
Reswa 🤣

oops i my first comment is still res .. 🤣 🤣

Jaldi unres karo na Anju! Lol. Varna Karnikaa se kehke Spike ko tumhaare peeche laga doongi.

Originally posted by: DayAndNight
i just luv ur writing❤️ plz add me 2 ur pm list

Aww, thank you! If you've buddied me and left me a note then you will be receiving PMs.

Originally posted by: marushkaa
That was such a great 1 ... simply luv ur writing !!
U surely are a 'Writer at Heart' 😊😊

Thank you! Oh lol, I never tire of hearing that phrase. Lol. Thank you once again.

Originally posted by: appyK
Super emotional update..these 🤬 kapoors are most pathetic people on earth..
Looking forward to the pairing of two awesome angels in kalpi's life..love the name SaRa for them..
Continue asap..thanks for Pm.

Ahahaha, calm down sweetie. They're pathetic but that's what makes it all the more fun! I'm also looking forward to it. Lol. Your vote has been noted! Thanks and will do!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
brilliant update...very well written...👍🏼

Thank you sweetie.

Originally posted by: Simran_malhotra
Awesome di and the best of 3 is SaRa.

Thanks hun! Your vote has been noted!

Originally posted by: drdee142
Oh my loved the update, it was so emotional. Thank goodness Kalpi found a guardian angel in Aira, I too have fallen in love with this character .
Also glad that Sammy has stood up for Kalpi, I agree Aira will be perfect for Sammy & I too like the 2nd option for their jodi.

Please do update soon, you've got me hooked & I can't wait to read further

Dee

Thank you so much Dee! Lol, she has that effect on people. Even though I made her, I'm mad about Aira. 😆 Sammy doesn't seem to have much of a voice in the show so I needed him to be projected more in my SS, hence him giving Raghav the reality check. Lol, I like their jodi for no damn reason, they haven't even met yet. Your vote has been noted!

Will update soon and thanks for such a wonderful comment Dee!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Gudiyalovesguru
Fantastic chappy yaar...
very very intresting concept...
continue soon...
and i guess sara will be apt fr sammy and aira...

Thank you hun! Glad you're liking it. Your vote has been noted my dear and will continue soon!

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Aria is an angel that came in Kalpi life
I love the way she took care of Kalpi and made her comfortable
Kalpi sharing her story with her was sad
Hmm... The great Raghav Singhania is remembering his memories with Kalpi
Pakhi 😡 that 🤬 I want to strangle her with my bare hands
She is such desperate witch, her kissing Raghav was terrible
I like that he push her away and warned her as well
How delusional of her to think she can take Kalpi place in Raghav life lol
Kalpi staying with Aria is wonderful, I love their interaction
I don't know why but I feel like Aria has a past that still affect her sometimes
Sammy was spectacular with his out bursted at Raghav. He so badly needed that reality check
And I love the way he spoke to that witch lol
It's an impressive update, I love it
Impeccable writing skills
I chose 1 for Sammy and Aria

Yeah well, some people don't understand reality even when it's ready to smack them in the face. You're not the only one that wants to strangle her, I do too but then the story wouldn't move forward. People are blaming Raghav for being insensitive but I needed to show that he isn't one to betray Kalpi even if he's angry with her.

Aira is an angel in Kalpi's life and my own too. I'm in love with her character to no wits end...as for the past...let's wait and see what happens. Like I said, I don't think Sammy has much of a voice in the show so therefore I gave it to him in this SS. Lol, I know right. Kudos to Sammy.

Thank you so much for enjoying it so much and for such a sweet compliment.

Your vote has been noted and stay tuned!