U came back after such a long time ...mera 1st hona toh banta hai na?😉😉
Priti ... Priti ... u r back & must say with a BANG !!😊😊
DHOODOOM ... that update is yet exploding in my mind. It was 1 perfect example of perfectionism !! Apt usage of words has always been ur quality & this update was one of those. Infact i got my glossary back to enlighten me with new words... sad i had lost it on 18th july ! But today i got it back 😉😉 (I'm gonna leave no chance of taunting u ... afterall u kept me waiting for 2 long months😡😡)😆😆
Now commenting on the storyline ... what a lovely progression in it !!
Kalpi's fight with herself that she has moved on or not was beautiful. Evry action of hers was awesomely put in the ff like she trembling & rubbing her lips 👏👏that was so natural ... any girl like wud have done the same. But imagining those minute things & then being able to write it down is pretty commendable. I know the amount of efforts required to that !!
& now my fav 'Raghav '
Raghav was left standing alone, rubbing his stinging cheek. He could not comprehend what affected him more - the sting of her slap on his cheek or the zing of her kiss on his lips!!
He ambled towards his car quietly as he realized he had kissed her for the first time. He licked his lips memorising the kiss and her essence.
This line is the proof that he has fallen really hard for Kalpi. As the egoistic Raghav Singhaniya wud not have forgotten being slapped so soon! Instead he was rejoicing on kissing her ... that was sooo cute☺️ ☺️ ☺️
U r really obsessed with parties ...if i amnt wrong this might be the 4th or 5th one 😆😆😆 But parties have always done wonders to the ragna relationship ... so am perfectly fine if u put 4-5 more in ur ff 😆😆
The Prem kalpi part was also nice!! He recollecting the memories of their kiss & that "HE SAW HER " & " SHE SAW HIM" part. Then the shattering of his glass. Their eyelock ...Cud clearly visualise that scene...it was impeccable. Gosh Priti ... HAve u decided to drive ur devil crazy ??
Now comes their dance ... waiting for it desperately !! I know u have some super awesome emotions yet to be portrayed through it !
I so missed commenting on this ff 😭😭 ... Anyways, now im happy !!😃
The forum now seems completely alive ... afterall the clashes is back in action!!
LOVE, MARUSHKAA
Edited by mariee - 11 years ago
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