OOhooo ... update so soon !!😳
Sorry for not commenting on the last 1 ... having all kindda merit lists coming my way & some decisions to be made! But ... yet couldn't resist reading the updates !
I like the way the story is proceeding ... but i was just wondering ... aren't things going too smooth ?
Hope u have some twists awaiting in the future😊😊
Part-11 --> I have always loved those om shanti om types meetings of theirs wherein either of them is in the darkness 😆😆 . I yet remember their 1st 1 & now it is this ! Such a beautiful transition in their equation from then to now.
Had thought of writing more but 'the awesome part 12' took over !
Part 12 ---> For this 1 ... Bravo 👏👏👏
I am missing the clashes but i'm loving this also 😃
He was getting quite used to this kind of cardiac activity BY NOW.
That line is pakka original as atleast i had read it for the 1st time ...& i simply loved it & its timing was bang on.It complimented the track very nicely. Couldn't help but smile like an idiot when i read it with the ppl around me who had come for admissions staring at me as if i were some alien !!😆😆😆
Sammy is really an ideal friend ... uske bina toh raghav kuch nahi !
And then came the mind blowing super romantic encounter ... u have used ur language & story telling skills thoroughly in that part 😃
At first I thought it was a dream ... but then at the end i realised it wasn't !!
& then the line "I hate liars" definitely has something more to it ...right??😳😳
Waiting to know what ... & try and update aise hi ... ekdum regularly😃
MARUSHKAA
Edited by mariee - 11 years ago
Anupamaa
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