I deserve better- Kalpana (OS) Part III updated on page 4 - Page 2

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nice update ...continue soon😊😊
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who is tht person???
amazin update
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice! 👏 do update soon, and do pm me plz.
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Amazing!! I love!!
Edited by Yellowdiamond - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Uss Stranger person ka kuch naam toh hoga...?😉
Curious to know it...

Very Nice Update 👍🏼 ❤️Loved it

Update next part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved both the updates...:) and agree " Person : Sometimes not knowing someone is a boon.As
we can share our pain with strangers as they don't
know us." so he is the one... wat is his name? loved how raghav was still part of her prayers :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS..I hope Kalpna & stranger meet again..
waiting..
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Part III:

Kalpana signs deal with Singhania Industries as she does not want to disappoint the person who gave her a chance to prove herself. Kalpana had visited Raghav's place many times in this duration to take care Gauri tai and to help Pakhi at her mother's insistence.But She is careful enough not to face Raghav. Today she is facing Raghav first time after resignation. The memories of past are continuously haunting her while signing the paper. Mr. satyanath garewal notices everything . He sensed the tension between Raghav and Kalpana . He wanted to know everything about Kalpana. After the deal, Raghav asks Kalpana for a coffee infront of everyone so that she can't reject. Kalpana accepts reluctantly.
In Cafe.
Kalpana : Just tell me what u want to say?
Raghav : I am very happy for u.U have achieved great success in such a small time
Kalpana : Thanx. Can I leave now.
Raghav : I am sorry Kalpana. please forgive me.
Kalpana : I can't forgive u Mr. Singhania.
Raghav : Please Kalpana.
Kalpana : Just start Ur life with Pakhi. she had forgiven you after ur betrayal. be with her. you had
taken a decision and now live with ur decision.I am sorry. I am not so great that I will forgive u.
I have signed this deal as I know it is good for my company and I don't want to disappoint the person who trusted me when I did not have anything.Saying so, she leaves from there.

Kalpana again goes to beach to find solace. she have said Raghav to accept Pakhi but that words are piercing her heart.
Stranger : u are here again. I think, u will come after 6 months and I have to wait for 6 months to share my heart breaking love story.
Kalpana : Ok, Ur girlfriend rejected ur apology.
Stranger : No, she accepted it.
Kalpana : Then what is the problem.
Stranger : Now she wants me to marry some other girl.
Kalpana : what ?
Stranger : Yes, my girlfriend aka grand mom can't see me happy and want me to get married.
Kalpana starts laughing.
Stranger : you look good when u smile. Meet u tomorrow.
Saying so, he left from there.
Kalpana shouts after him : I am not going to come tomorrow.

But Kalpana meets him again next day and day afte next day and so on. She needs strength to face Raghav everyday in office and the stranger with his mischievous and nonsense talks provide her that strength. She can't believe that he is the same person who was so gloomy and sad 6 months back.Now his eyes are bright and so full of life. He is all serious and give motivational speech in one moment and next moment he makes her laugh. She has found a best friend in this stranger.

The day passes by and They grew closer to each other though they don't know each other's name. They have found solace and companionship in each other. Their relationship is not a romantic one but something that word can't describe.

after 1.2 year, Kalpana is 40% partner of two sister concern of Sambhav Industries. She and her parents stay in chawl only as her parents do not want to move from there and she does not want to live without her parents. Everything is going smoothly when satyanath grewal comes to meet her parents as he thinks Kalpana is perfect for his grandson Sambhav. Her parents get happy but Kalpana does not know what to do. She is not ready for marriage.

Kalpana goes to meet her stranger friend on beach and finds him staring at the sea.
Kalpana forgets her problem and asks him about his problem.
Stranger : Marriage, My girlfriend has selected a girl for me and want me to meet her.
Kalpana : what is the problem, meet her ?
Stranger : But I don't want to marry.
Kalpana : Make the girl understand it and she will break the alliance
Stranger : Wah, great and now tell me what is your problem.
Kalpana : Same as you and solution is also same.
Stranger : is this just a coincidence or god have connected our fate.
Kalpana and stranger laughs but they are unaware that god has interlinked their fate.
Next day,
Kalpana gets Ready as Mr. Sambhav grewal is coming to meet her with his family. Her family is very excited. Kalpana and Sambhav come face to face. They are shocked to see each other. Her stranger friend is non other than Sambhav grewal. Sambhav gestures her not to say anything and she compiles. Their family leave them alone to talk.

Kalpana : Oh god, I had convinced u to meet me. but Now you don't have to convince me to break the alliance. Just tell my past to ur grand mother and she will break the alliance.

Sambhav : My grand mother already knew it. My grand father never kept any secret from her and he must have researched about your past before selecting u for me.

Kalpana : How can your grand mother agree to get u married to me. I can't be a good wife. I can't love u.

Before Kalpana can answer, Sambhav's grand mom enters.
Grand Mom : I will give answers to ur questions Kalpana. I had selected u as u are best friend of my grand son. Like her Grandfather, he also can't keep secret from me. He told me about his beach friend and oneday I saw u on beach with Sambhav and then his grandfather showed your photo and told me about ur past and I have choosen u for my grandson that moment only.

Kalpana: But I don't want to marry anyone. I have agreed to meet him becoz I respects ur husband a lot but I don't have courage to face everything again.

Sambhav : GrandMa, why are u forcing us to marry each other.

Grandmam : Because, I know you both are perfect for each other. Just give this relationship a chance for your family's sake.

Kalpana and Sambhav agreed to get married for their family's sake as they know that they can rely upon each other in their life.

Flashback ends.

Kalpana starts to get ready and thinks dadi is right, Sambhav is perfect for me. He know me so well.
Suddenly Pakhi enters into her room.
Kalpana : What are u doing here, Pakhi? U are in USA right?
Pakhi : Yes, Kalpana but I had come here to meet u so that I can tell u some truths.
Kalpana : What truth ?
Pakhi : I and Raghav got divorced.
Kalpana : so.. Why are u saying this to me.
Pakhi : because you both love each other.
Kalpana : Pakhi, I am getting married to a perfect person for me.
Pakhi : Kalpana, We can marry perfect person but love happens with most imperfect person for us. Raghav did not give me divorce but I did. first , I tried hard for our relationship as Kamla Maa told me that he will start loving me oneday and he started caring for me, he tried to give our relationship a chance but he was doing that as he had promised u that not becoz he started loving me. I could not spend my life with a person who loves someone else so much.He does not forget u for a single moment. Our divorce got finalised on the day you got engaged with Sambhav. I thought Raghav would have informed u that we are no more together but he kept it a secret so that u can start ur new life.
Kalpana : Pakhi, now all this does not matter. Tell Raghav that I have forgiven him today as I don't
want to start my new life with my past baggage and I will pray to god for his happiness.
Pakhi : Kalpi, your happiness is his happiness only.
Saying so, Pakhi leaves from there.

A tear escapes from Kalpana's eyes but she wipes her tears and gets ready. Her bhabi comes there to take her to mandap.

Kalpana sits in the mandap with Sambhav. Sambhav notices her face and he sees her staring at Raghav. Raghav starts to leave from there but a strong arm stops him.
Sambahav : Mr.Singhania, do you repeat same mistakes that you did two years before.
Raghav : What do u want to say?
Sambhav : You had chosen Rvenge over love once and today also you are leaving Kalpana alone.
Raghav : You are getting me wrong, Mr. Grewal. I just wanted to see Kalpana happy and you are perfect for her.
Sambhav : I know I am perfect but love don't see perfect or imperfect person, It just happens. Kalpana and I don't love each other. We are getting married becoz everyone says that we are perfect for each other but she loves u only.
Kalpana comes there and asks sambhav : what are you saying, sambhav? we are getting married today.
Sambhav : Please Kalpana, just listen ur heart today. Don't take decision from ur mind. Just follow ur heart. May be raghav is most imperfect person for u but u love him only. Just accepts this truth . Don't care about my family and your family. Just ask ur heart will u able to love anyone like this. and you will get ur answer.

Kalpana closes her eyes and she sees only one face i.e. Raghav's and she hugs him forgetting everything and everyone. Raghav can't control his emotions any more and hugs her back.

Kalpana and Raghav get married with blessings of their family and friends. Kalpana remembers the day she first met sambhav and told her father that she met life while running from life. Again Sambhav showed her right path.


Note :

I was planning to pair Kalpana and sambhav but I could not do it as I can't see Kalpana with someone

else.
Thanks for ur appreciation.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing part...

sambhav finally ,ade kalpi married to rags...

is it end???

p.s. me first😉
Edited by babydolll - 11 years ago
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#20
beautiful awesome mindblowing superb update👏👏
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago

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