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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
awe, super cute update. even here Kalpi is awesome, she went back the same evening to bring the watch, yet Raghav was only making his way to that place for his watch the next morning.
Loved the update

Cannot wait to read more

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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
Aww Raghav can't see his Kalpi hurt
He give up his most precious watch for Kalpi
Kalpi getting the watch back for Raghav was amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Ashish91

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashish91

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 13:

After dressing Natasha comes down she is looking stunning in blue gown given by raghav, she is looking beautiful in that dress

This is the dress she wore I hope u all like it.

When she step down everyone in the party turn & look at her all are mesmerized by her beauty & start gossiping about her how she look bla bla where raghav is looking at her with his mouth open.

Sammy come near him and close his mouth & say stop this raghav u know her she don't like this & plz control urself & be in ur limit don't behave like Casanova men

Raghav: yes Sammy I know I don't need ur advice, I know how to handle my hot headed beauty now plz me.

And raghav moves towards Natasha he raise his hand & ask here shall be dance.

Natasha can't say no. And they both start dancing.

[Tere naina hass diye,
Bass gaye mere dil mein,
Tere naina..] - 2 times

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They are dancing too close everyone is staring at them & their passion of dancing.

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[Mere dil mein jo armaan hai,
Paas aake zara dekho naa,
Dekho naa dekho naa dekho naa,
Dil ke taar mein hai sargam,
Chedhe hai ab koi anjaana,
Anjaana anjaana anjaana] - 2 times

*****

Where raghav is lost in her beauty he dancing so passionately and he is totally behaving like her husband. Forget everything that she doesn't have even remember her past. He twirls her.

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Yeh pyaar ki hai baaten,
Kuch ankahi mulaqatein,
Ho aise hi milte hai, mil ke machalte hai,
Do dil jawan..

Tere naina, tere naina hass diye,
Bass gaye dil mein tere,
Mere naina..
[Ab dekho mil gaye ho to,
Fir se naa kahin kho jaana,
Kho jaana kho jaana kho jaana
Aankhon mein hi rehna,
Bahon mein tum mere so jaana,
So jaana so jaana so jaana]- 2 times
Ho mere paas tu jo aaye,
To khuda mujhe mil jaaye,
Hoo hothon ko hothon se milne se,
Silne de door naa jaa..

Ha ha ha ha..
Ha ha ha ha..

Tere liye chaaro ore doondha maine,
Mil gayi jo tu mujhe mil gaya saara jahan,


Saara yahan ab chahu mein kya,

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They are dancing too close there is no space btw them to pass air .

Where Natasha is not comfortable. She wants to move but raghav is not allowing her.

Where Sammy is seeing all this and start making face and in his mind he say I told him not to behave like Casanova man but he is raghav singhania if something happen then this time I'm not going to help him.

And pakhi comes there & say what he is doing Sammy don't he know she is doesn't even remember anything.

Sammy leave him come darling we will dance and they join them in dance floor.

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Mere liye sapna tha yeh pyaar tera,
Kholi aankhen saamne tha mere liye yaar mera,
Pyaar mera, ab chahu mein kya,
Hoo aise naa mujhko saza de,
Paas aa naa ab tu saza de,
Hoo sabse chura lu mein,
Jag se chupa lu main itne paas aa,
Mere dil mein jo armaan hai,
Paas aake zara dekho naa,
Dekho naa dekho naa dekho naa,
Dil ke taar mein hai sargam,
Chedhe hai ab koi anjaana,
Anjaana anjaana anjaana,
Na na na paas aake zara dekho naa,
Dil ke taar mein hai sargam,
Chedhe hai ab koi anjaana,
Anjaana anjaana anjaana,
Yeh pyaar ki hai baaten,
Kuch ankahi mulaqatein,

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where raghav is lost in her beauty and he buried his head in her hair & whisper in her ear I love u.

And after hearing those magical words from his mouth natasha is shocked and she run from there.

After some time raghav come out of his trance & realize what he done .he then moves from there he is irritated with him he is cursing what he done now.

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Ho aise hi milte hai, mil ke machalte hai,
Do dil jawan..hoo hoo..

Tere naina..tere naina..
Tere naina...tere naina..

In their room:

No one is feeling sleepy raghav is cursing himself for what he does. Where natasha is turning & tossing on her bed he's word is echoing in her mind I love u.

Suddenly she stood up on her bed & start jumping in excitement that she is in love,

Natasha: in her mind yes I'm in love but can this possible I mean I know him few days only I don't even know his like & dislike, but why my heart is raising why I am feeling nervous when he is dancing with me is this love , no how can this happen , but he said I love u to me no no no Natasha it's not like means ur looking to sexy today may be he said all this becoz no no but what should I do. Means i did really like him, no I think I should behave with him the same way which I used to , first I should find out if he really love or this all becoz of that dress.

While thinking all this she fall asleep.

In morning:

When she comes out from her room she find raghav is standing there with red rose.

When she sees him there she becomes so happy but she behave that it didn't affect her.

Then she comes near to him

Raghav: (nervously):hii kalpi .

Natasha: ohh in one night u forget my name I'm not kalpi , I'm Natasha.

Ragahv: ohh sorry wo actually.

Natasha: It's ok raghav.(pointing towards the rose)is this for me or 4 ur kalpi.

Raghav: no it's 4 u actually I want to say sorry to you for yesterday night, actually I didn't mean that wo I don't how I love come from my mouth . wo

Natasha: (disappointed):it's ok raghav lets go I'm hungry.

When she go from there raghav is also disappointed when he said sorry to her, her smile fade ,and she become sad.

Raghav in his mind so this mean that she like me, or it's something else, why she is sad what happen to her, ohh god when she gain her memory back.

Natasha is waiting for him for breakfast then they both eat their breakfast.

Then mr. oberoi come there & asked his daughter to come with him as they are leaving for delhi now there work is completed here.

Now Natasha is more sad while thinking that now she has to go home, now what ohh god my love story is end before start.

Where raghav is also sad by thinking that's she is leaving.

In evening Natasha leave with her dad for delhi & bid farewell to raghav & his family.

Where ragahv is sad Sammy come & place his hand on his shoulder & say ohh mere devdas I have back plan for u & ur lovestory I can see that she start liking u, before her love die we are leaving for delhi as I already signed an deal with MR. oberoi And we can meet him & her anytime.

Raghav hug Sammy and say thanku Sammy , u r the best.

Sammy: I know I'm the best how can I see tears in my best friend eyes.

And guari , kamla & pakhi leave for Mumbai where raghav & Sammy leave for delhi to bring kalpi back as mrs. Ragahv singhania.

Precap:

Natasha is sitting in her cabin she is sad then she hear a knock on her cabin door when she turn to see she is shocked to see Sammy & raghav there & then they go out for lunch but Natasha want to eat panipuri know what happen when Natasha aka kalpi comes face to face with prem . what will prem do when he comes to know that she is alive & don't remember anything.

Now prem plan to impress her & then marry her for her property.

Sorry for the short update

But kripa kar comment or like button jarur dabae

And iam welcome 4 ur tomatoes & egg.

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