THE GLASS WALL : RAGNA(Ashna) FF, Part-24, Pg 141, 14/12/15

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#671

RagNa spending quality time with each other was a blessing for both as they needed it...
I love that Raghav took the sindoor from Bappa and give it to Kalpi but Kalpi returning it with the faith and trust that it will surely be given to her again and put by Raghav at its rightful place is amazing.
RagNa song is just perfect. Playing it while reading how RagNa feels make it so much more special and suited for their situation.
I just love the way you expresses RagNa unspoken feelings for each other. They are soulmates who understands each other perfectly. I just loveee their car scene
Aww Raghav taking Kalpi to her home and then carrying her was so romantic
Both cooking and feeding each other and having a great time was superb.
They both needed that... Gauri waking up to Kalpi was a nice scene
Shy Kalpi is so cute lol I like how she was at lost of words when Gauri asked them if they knew each other lol... Gauri blessing them both was amazing. Now everything will be all right ( I have faith 😉 )
Vitthal regretting his ways was awesome. I kinda feel bad for him...
Super duper wonderful update. I love it and you wrote this chapter brilliantly as usual

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#672

Wonderful update,Charu.

It actually brought tears on my eyes,

Such a beautiful bonding between the two friends,How well Chaiyya understands Kalpi and had been the powerful force of inspiration and motivation during her stay in Pune.And her sweet gesture of showing Kalpi's new office as the first thing,the moment Kalpi's feet touched Mumbai.

What emotional moment of Ragna were: When Raghav saw Kalpi in Mumbai after his marriage with Psycho,his cute antics forcing Kalpi to stay back,and going to the temple all alone to keep up his promise and then assuring their relationship by handing over her that sindoor box.They were beautifully written.

And the cooking part was awesome.Specially,the way you had mentioned," as the two love birds were actually having their time in the kitchen with lots of love and laughter ".

The way ,Ragna was separated,their desperation,their yearning for love and warmth of each other,

their pain of missing the loved ones actually brought tears on my eyes.

Inspite of all the sudden turn out of events,Gauri Singhania had recognised Kalpi and had accepted

her daughter-in-law.And Vitthal is feeling ashamed for not believing his own blood and supporting

her in that vulnerable moment and wants to clear all the mess by himself was really touching.

LETS SEE HOW RAGHAV'S PARTY TURNS THE LIVES OF THE KAPOORS AND KALPI.

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#673

Lovely update Charu! Chaya is an amazing friend. How nicely she informed Raghav about their arrival without letting Kalpi know.

Raghav's entry scene and the pose he strikes against his BMW. ... damn hot! The scene of him giving 1000 Rs to auto driver not to take her was funny.

Loved their romance in the car. 'Tum hi ho ' added to the effect, of course. Sweet of him to give the sindoor. Loved the gesture of Raghav carrying her over the threshold in true bridal style. They were enjoying the little moments together, like cooking , having lunch ...

Sweet of him to keep an empty frame for after their wedding. It's a sign of their trust , their hope to be together one day.

Gauri is so nice in this ff. Not pestering Raghav to take revenge and also she accepted Kalpi wholeheartedly.

Vithal scene was emotional. He's a loving father who is repenting on not trusting his daughter.

I know the comments are not up to the mark as I'm reading and commenting so many in one go. But I assure you that I will be back in full swing to read the next update. 🤗

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laavanya4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#674

CHARU DEAR,

WAITING FOR THE PARTY SURPRISE...

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#675

Originally posted by: sweet1308
😊
Really lovely update how kalpi felt returning t mumbai
N how they they spent their time feeling each other they were awesome rag bring her t meet his n vittal want t meet her daughter yet due t kamla he can't rag concern for kalpi was genuine
Lovely update
Update soon

Thanks dear. Glad you liked it. I'll try to update asap.

Originally posted by: sunyy
Omg awesome amazing wonderful magnificent. I LOVED it. U so made my day girlfriend. So Orem will be getting out of jail and rags gave kalpi a gun for protection. I m wondering when will rags ditch pakhi? Will pakhi be negative? I hope so. Can't wait for next update.

Thanks sweetie. 😃 Rags will leave Pakhi soon! After all it is a Ragna story at the end! hate saying this, but just a little more patience please. Shall try to update soon.

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96
OMGGG what an update...simply awesome😃 loved reading it to the core.
Thanks for the PM !!

Thanks dearie. 😃 Glad you liked it and no mention for PM. 😃

Originally posted by: shoonya9
Chaaaru u r on a roll with ur updates. Good going girl, superb update. Beautiful RAGNA moments in ur signature style and wat a reunion of mother-son and daughter in the form of DIL. Thank God u didn't make this Gauri stupid blind in revenge with Kapoors.
OMG rags so concerned giving gun to Kalpi for protection and ever innocent and simple Kalpi returning it back.
The lovebirds did Cook a khichadi of pasta and dal. And emotional meeting of FIL with SIL.
Now awaiting for the party and dhamaka, but please don't let Prem Kapoor out so soon.
So THIS IS IT Charu love ur style. And please now tht u r on roll update original TMS and concourse my fav COF too Asap.

Thanks Shoonya. Happy you loved RagNa moments and update. Yes, blind Gauri is enough for other FFs. 😆 Prem has to be out once, without him story cannot move forward, you'll know why!😛 Thanks for loving my style. 😃 I'll try to update Original TMS next week.

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: eishe10
Brilliant update😃

Thanks dear. 😊

Originally posted by: sampa79
Awesome update

Thanks. 😃

Originally posted by: Anjinie
awesome, loved Kalpi's and Gauri's bonding,

Thanks sweetie.

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Its been so long I read such a romantic and sweet update!!!! Loved it loved it so much dear!!!!! I was enjoying it!!!

Hey Priya, glad you liked it. I miss your comments on my updates.

Originally posted by: Asyalover
awesome update

Thanks dear.

Originally posted by: ariarai
Ohh i loved RagNa romance!! and Stubborn Kalpi and Raghav's Reactions lol awesome updated!!!!

Thanks Aria dear. happy you liked it. 😃

Originally posted by: charvi3
Amazing update charu ...u r fabulous writer dear...the update was simple &sweet& awesome dear...

Thank you dear.😃 Thanks for the compliment. 😃❤️

Originally posted by: Rubz1234
Wtoo good update soon dear..

Thanks dearie. I will try to update asap.

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi
dear, beautiful update..tq👏👏

Thank you so much dear. 😃

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
nice nd emotional update Dida... Ek ques dida kab mile ge ragna wapas... Means kab ye pakhi rags ko divorce degi... Aur kab ragna marriage hogi... Nd prem out of jail ...oh!! No!! Plzz dida save kalpi... Update nxt chappy soon...

Thanks sweetie. RagNa jaldi hi milenge!This was always meant to be a short FF. But unfortunately got dragged. So I will try to wrap it up soon. But is ki update ka number hi nahi aata! 😭 LOL, do you really think I can do something too sadistic? I dislike writing sadistic tracks. Can only say, all is well that ends well. 😉 Shall try to update soon.

Originally posted by: mariee
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unres

the song in the start ne hi dil khush kar diya
its after a long time that u gave a romantic wala update in glass wall...all thanks to chhaya & charu 😆😆
That auto rikshaw scene reminded me of the epi where Raghav had handed a heavy note to the marigld seller ...who was recieving apologies from his lady love. Mostly epi 147 ...
U have very well caught the readers' weakness & ur strength ...the smll lil romantic scenes u put in are so damn cute. Especially the photo frame 1 ...no doubt i am in love with all ur works 😳😳
& uske baad was the gauri-kalpi covo ...thank god atleast glass wall portrays a non-ehsaanfaraamosh gauri
Alll in all mast update ... 😃😃
continue soon

MARUSHKAA

Hey Marushkaa, so nice to read your comment and that too a long one! 😃 yes, glass wall has seen the least amount of romantic RagNa moments till now. but as it will progress towards end, it will see more romantic moments. Oh, that episode seems I'll have to re-watch it.

@Bold: Thanks for the compliment! Brought a genuine smile on my face. guess it is God's gift! Feels nice if I can make someone happy! 😃 Ha ha, yes Gauri ehsaanfaramosh, baki works k liye kaafi hai. 😛 Thanks, glad you liked the update. I'll try to update soon.

Originally posted by: Aru18
Awesome Charu.
ragna spend some time alone..hope they reunite soon..
when i read update..only 1 thought come in ind that its not ema story..so kuch bhi ho ragna alag nahi honge and raghav fulfill his promise bcoz he is not ema's raghav singhania
and more then trust you..you not seprate ragna at all..like ema cv's..
they runie story like this and break promise always...
plz continue charu soon

Thanks Aruhi dear. Glad you loved it. Yes, it was and always will be a RagNa story. They'll reunite very soon! At least I will try to.I'll try to update soon.

Originally posted by: lolor
awesome update

Thanks dear.

Originally posted by: DiVirgo
Awesome charu!! I love how you brought rags in the scene ;) he looked awesome against his BMW;) can't get that out of my head now :)) loved their moments together in the car! And him carrying her into their home was awesome:)) loved their moments at home also! So sweet of him to put up an empty pic frame, that's the faith he has for them both! He knows they'll be married soon:)) and best of all they have gauri's blessings! Hope Prems doesn't get out! Love this action side! Protective rags, he knows what can happen if prem get released!! He wants to take all precautions for Kalpi!! Go girl;) loved this update!!

Thanks so much Di!! 🤗 Rags entry scene is my own and some others' favourite also. 😃 Thanks for loving RagNa moments. prem has to get out one day, it is important for story. Glad you loved this. 😃

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_
awesome update... will Prem get bailed? I hope not...
Happy that Gauri accepted RagNa.
Looking forward to RagNa reunion...

Thanks dear. Glad you liked it. Prem has some role still left. RagNa union may happen soon. 😊

Originally posted by: appyK
Sorry.. was going to give nice long comment but my cell phone is driving me crazy.. this third i'm typing..
The update was really awesome.. RagNa scenes written by you really have a magical feeling.. Totally loved it

hi Arpita, and it is fine. you tried at least. Thanks so much for the compliment. 😃

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#678

Originally posted by: shahsb_26
WOaah!!!!!

Now that's amazzing and sooo beautiful..!! I was sooo much flowing into with music.!

Hey Sejal. Thanks a lot! 😃❤️

Originally posted by: aryagr
Lovely update.

Thanks dear.

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
So finally after long time i m reading ur stories chahat. Sorry for this. I will comment soon on other ff of urs. I hope u will pardon me.
Comment for chapter 17.
Just read it now. Wonderful update and as usual,no compromise with update. It was up to the mark as always.
Raghav treatment to sahil nd neetu was worth to do. They deserve this ignorance treatment after what they had done with kalpi nd gauri.
And pakhi was also agreed with raghav that she is happy but reality knows she herself.
So finally prem got a lawyer for himself nd that lawyer is his friend...situation is going to be tough for raghav. But raghav being raghav, he will definitely handle forthcoming situation.
Now vitthal is feeling guilty for kalpi...he has to..after all he did not trust kalpi. Nd this kamla will always be kamla who take favour of pakhi in every condition like pakhi is still raghav's wife nd blah blah..i hate her.

Feeling happy for kalpi...she is coming back to mumbai. Nd raghav concern for kalpi well being was superb. He is far away from kalpi but could not take it easy when it comes to kalpi...

Once again sorry chahat for not commenting on any update of ur ffs. Shall try to comment on them soon. Nd comment for part 18 of this ff will do tomorrow.

Wow, now that's some comment! Where are you girl, I miss you Ritu!!!! Thanks a lot for liking Part-17 and it is fine even fine you are late. but do try to comment when you have time.

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
Res for part 18
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amazing update chahat. lovely lovely lovely. i m feeling afresh after reading this update and the song u linked with update...omg..i was not aware about such song that existed in world😆 may be coz i don't listen much songs😆 but heard that song i immediately downloaded it 😳...maza agaya.

coming to update...
chhaya is such an amazing friend. every friend shall be like her but its not possible in real life. i love the character of chhaya...how she helped kalpi in every situation and also helping raghav for kalpi's sake and well being. i was aww of the moment when kalpi saw raghav standing behind her and the best moment was when raghav assured kalpi for their future together with sindoor.
the blue part sequence was awesome. after a long tme they were in each others arm feeling comfortable and getting strength for future obstacles in their life. what can be better than to be in arms of the person who is our life.

gauri -kalpi- raghav part was also nice. raghav pain looking at her mother in that condition and above that reming his own mom about his identity was been the toughest moment for raghav. its very bad feeling to feel. but kalpi is here to sooth him and his mom as well. on introducing kalpi as his would be wife, the trio scene was awesome.

vitthal's part was also nice, who is feeling guilt to not believing his pride cum daughter. but finally he has realized his mistake and want to rectify it. that was most important.

ok chahat, i will do comment on other ffs soon as i will get time. hope u don't mind.
celebration of fates...update..
marriage story update.
bonus track updates...i didn't read any of its updates
sorry for that😭

Thank You again! 😃 I am glad because of this update you found a good song. It is from Aashiqui 2 movie only. 😃 Thanks for loving Chhaya, RagNa moments, Vitthal part and Gauri part. 😃 Miss you. Do try to come once. 😃 🤗❤️

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#680

Originally posted by: vyshuu..
heyylooo dear..
sryy fr the late!!
update was awesumm n superbb.. u always create a magic to ur updates dat would make the readers superrr happy n satisfied wtih ur updates😃.. no offense bt this style of urs will make u diffrnt frm other writers😉.. and the addition of song to it.. jus mindblowng!!! and the entire part .. especially in blue.. hayee hayee hayeee.. u wrote it in a beautifull way.. MAARDALA😆... and the simple gestures u used to express their trust and feelngs towards was amaznggg!! the whole update was wonderfull dear.. i loved it!! ❤️

Hello Vyshuu dear. 😃 This is a beautiful compliment and I shall always, always remember it. Muah. 🤗❤️ Love you.

Originally posted by: aanchal57
Hahahahahahahahaha...I saw something veryy funny😆😆😆...seriously charu u rock👏👏
I can't tell u here whts amusing me ..once I m bk den v vl tell...

Hwz u...?? I hope everything is well
Omg feeling fresh after coming here (oyee 4 2hours only)...actually my 2nd exam got postponed to 2jan soo I came here I was free na...
Oops I 4got 2 give feedback ...
Update was really lovely...felt bad 4 vithal bt he deserve it,he shd trust kalpi...kapi gauri bonding toh mast hai,felt happy when gauri shared her past wid kalpi nd how she made kalpi embarrassed 😳...ragna ki toh baat mt karo blush blush...I was too when kalpi meet raghav...
Tata now hv 2 go now nd hv 2 sleep,today toh I vl take sound sleepp...nd sryy 4 tastless feedback bt kya kare time nhi hai... tata I m in hurry byee 😆
Byeee remember chiii thing na,lol...

Hey Aanchal!!! so sorry for replying late, but trust me I was so-so happy to see your comment my friend. 😃 🤗 Hope your exams are going on good. Glad you liked the update. Take care.

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
RagNa spending quality time with each other was a blessing for both as they needed it...
I love that Raghav took the sindoor from Bappa and give it to Kalpi but Kalpi returning it with the faith and trust that it will surely be given to her again and put by Raghav at its rightful place is amazing.
RagNa song is just perfect. Playing it while reading how RagNa feels make it so much more special and suited for their situation.
I just love the way you expresses RagNa unspoken feelings for each other. They are soulmates who understands each other perfectly. I just loveee their car scene
Aww Raghav taking Kalpi to her home and then carrying her was so romantic
Both cooking and feeding each other and having a great time was superb.
They both needed that... Gauri waking up to Kalpi was a nice scene
Shy Kalpi is so cute lol I like how she was at lost of words when Gauri asked them if they knew each other lol... Gauri blessing them both was amazing. Now everything will be all right ( I have faith 😉 )
Vitthal regretting his ways was awesome. I kinda feel bad for him...
Super duper wonderful update. I love it and you wrote this chapter brilliantly as usual

Natasha dear thank you so much. Glad you loved RagNa scenes and song also. 😃

he he, and thanks for loving Gauri part also, especially where Kalpi blushes. yes, everything will be alright soon. Vitthal and Kalpi may also reunite soon. 😃

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