THE GLASS WALL : RAGNA(Ashna) FF, Part-24, Pg 141, 14/12/15 - Page 67

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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres

the song in the start ne hi dil khush kar diya
its after a long time that u gave a romantic wala update in glass wall...all thanks to chhaya & charu 😆😆
That auto rikshaw scene reminded me of the epi where Raghav had handed a heavy note to the marigld seller ...who was recieving apologies from his lady love. Mostly epi 147 ...
U have very well caught the readers' weakness & ur strength ...the smll lil romantic scenes u put in are so damn cute. Especially the photo frame 1 ...no doubt i am in love with all ur works 😳😳
& uske baad was the gauri-kalpi covo ...thank god atleast glass wall portrays a non-ehsaanfaraamosh gauri
Alll in all mast update ... 😃😃
continue soon

MARUSHKAA

Edited by mariee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Charu.
ragna spend some time alone..hope they reunite soon..
when i read update..only 1 thought come in ind that its not ema story..so kuch bhi ho ragna alag nahi honge and raghav fulfill his promise bcoz he is not ema's raghav singhania
and more then trust you..you not seprate ragna at all..like ema cv's..
they runie story like this and break promise always...
plz continue charu soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome charu!! I love how you brought rags in the scene ;) he looked awesome against his BMW;) can't get that out of my head now :)) loved their moments together in the car! And him carrying her into their home was awesome:)) loved their moments at home also! So sweet of him to put up an empty pic frame, that's the faith he has for them both! He knows they'll be married soon:)) and best of all they have gauri's blessings! Hope Prems doesn't get out! Love this action side! Protective rags, he knows what can happen if prem get released!! He wants to take all precautions for Kalpi!! Go girl;) loved this update!!
Edited by DiVirgo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update... will Prem get bailed? I hope not...
Happy that Gauri accepted RagNa.
Looking forward to RagNa reunion...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry.. was going to give nice long comment but my cell phone is driving me crazy.. this third i'm typing..
The update was really awesome.. RagNa scenes written by you really have a magical feeling.. Totally loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOaah!!!!!

Now that's amazzing and sooo beautiful..!! I was sooo much flowing into with music.!
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Posted: 11 years ago
So finally after long time i m reading ur stories chahat. Sorry for this. I will comment soon on other ff of urs. I hope u will pardon me.
Comment for chapter 17.
Just read it now. Wonderful update and as usual,no compromise with update. It was up to the mark as always.
Raghav treatment to sahil nd neetu was worth to do. They deserve this ignorance treatment after what they had done with kalpi nd gauri.
And pakhi was also agreed with raghav that she is happy but reality knows she herself.
So finally prem got a lawyer for himself nd that lawyer is his friend...situation is going to be tough for raghav. But raghav being raghav, he will definitely handle forthcoming situation.
Now vitthal is feeling guilty for kalpi...he has to..after all he did not trust kalpi. Nd this kamla will always be kamla who take favour of pakhi in every condition like pakhi is still raghav's wife nd blah blah..i hate her.

Feeling happy for kalpi...she is coming back to mumbai. Nd raghav concern for kalpi well being was superb. He is far away from kalpi but could not take it easy when it comes to kalpi...



Once again sorry chahat for not commenting on any update of ur ffs. Shall try to comment on them soon. Nd comment for part 18 of this ff will do tomorrow.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res for part 18
unres

amazing update chahat. lovely lovely lovely. i m feeling afresh after reading this update and the song u linked with update...omg..i was not aware about such song that existed in world😆 may be coz i don't listen much songs😆 but heard that song i immediately downloaded it 😳...maza agaya.

coming to update...
chhaya is such an amazing friend. every friend shall be like her but its not possible in real life. i love the character of chhaya...how she helped kalpi in every situation and also helping raghav for kalpi's sake and well being. i was aww of the moment when kalpi saw raghav standing behind her and the best moment was when raghav assured kalpi for their future together with sindoor.
the blue part sequence was awesome. after a long tme they were in each others arm feeling comfortable and getting strength for future obstacles in their life. what can be better than to be in arms of the person who is our life.

gauri -kalpi- raghav part was also nice. raghav pain looking at her mother in that condition and above that reming his own mom about his identity was been the toughest moment for raghav. its very bad feeling to feel. but kalpi is here to sooth him and his mom as well. on introducing kalpi as his would be wife, the trio scene was awesome.

vitthal's part was also nice, who is feeling guilt to not believing his pride cum daughter. but finally he has realized his mistake and want to rectify it. that was most important.



ok chahat, i will do comment on other ffs soon as i will get time. hope u don't mind.
celebration of fates...update..
marriage story update.
bonus track updates...i didn't read any of its updates
sorry for that😭

Edited by zindgidilse - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
heyylooo dear..
sryy fr the late!!
update was awesumm n superbb.. u always create a magic to ur updates dat would make the readers superrr happy n satisfied wtih ur updates😃.. no offense bt this style of urs will make u diffrnt frm other writers😉.. and the addition of song to it.. jus mindblowng!!! and the entire part .. especially in blue.. hayee hayee hayeee.. u wrote it in a beautifull way.. MAARDALA😆... and the simple gestures u used to express their trust and feelngs towards was amaznggg!! the whole update was wonderfull dear.. i loved it!! ❤️
Edited by vyshuu.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hahahahahahahahaha...I saw something veryy funny😆😆😆...seriously charu u rock👏👏
I can't tell u here whts amusing me ..once I m bk den v vl tell...

Hwz u...?? I hope everything is well
Omg feeling fresh after coming here (oyee 4 2hours only)...actually my 2nd exam got postponed to 2jan soo I came here I was free na...
Oops I 4got 2 give feedback ...
Update was really lovely...felt bad 4 vithal bt he deserve it,he shd trust kalpi...kapi gauri bonding toh mast hai,felt happy when gauri shared her past wid kalpi nd how she made kalpi embarrassed 😳...ragna ki toh baat mt karo blush blush...I was too when kalpi meet raghav...
Tata now hv 2 go now nd hv 2 sleep,today toh I vl take sound sleepp...nd sryy 4 tastless feedback bt kya kare time nhi hai... tata I m in hurry byee 😆
Byeee remember chiii thing na,lol...
Edited by aanchal57 - 11 years ago

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