THE GLASS WALL : RAGNA(Ashna) FF, Part-24, Pg 141, 14/12/15

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Mihika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

beautiful update dear 👏

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Awesome update.👏👏

Loved the way u explained Kalpi's inner turmoil..Her hiding her pain and telling Raghav to go away from her life.. Beautifully written.😊

Continue soon.

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rani_indira

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Charu dear...The way you ve.narrate it is superb... The lehenga chosen for Kalpi also very cute n it is sure, Our kalpi would be sooo beautiful in that out fit. A woman may be so strong mentally than a man , but when it is her man to touch with pure love . she ll be like snow dew touched by sun rays only. You ve proved it thro' Kalpi. IT IS JUST EPIC. It s a "POEM" ie "KAVIDHAI" in Tamil. Charu your post is like a "stream" . Thankyou dear... Update soon Charu..

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Anjinie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

I think Kalpi should Raghav hint as to what happened, lovely update,

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Amazing update
Very emotional...
Kalpi trying I stay strong and tell those lies to Raghav was awful
Raghav grabbing Kalpi and kissing her senseless was superb
I love it ;) maybe now Kalpi will tell him the real reason behind her weird behavior
I can't wait to read more

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shikha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Sorry not able to like the post
but beautiful update
loved raghav and kalpi emotions
pls continue soon

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Minnie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

awesome update. the way u have explained Kalpi's dilemma n Raghav's reaction is just beautiful.

i cud imagine Rach n Ash in you ff.

gr8 job. dnt keep us waiting. update soon.

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Thanks dearies...love you all. I am sorry, am not replying individually, but I wanna thank you all dil se. 😃 I'll try to update soon. 😊

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sarusmiley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

"I'll never let you leave my heart, even though I'm leaving your life. Your love is my life, and I'm not letting go of that life's memories.

every molecules of my body is urs..oh my god..charu..i fell in love with this ff...mark my words..its the best ff i have read ever..lovely..i could feel each and eevry moment..and the pain and love..its written very beautifully..though i m late..i loved it charu..i could see..u write with ur heart...feel good one..lovely..and love u loads..waiting for the next one..its more than awesome re..loved it like anything🤗

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: sarusmiley
"I'll never let you leave my heart, even though I'm leaving your life. Your love is my life, and I'm not letting go of that life's memories.

every molecules of my body is urs..oh my god..charu..i fell in love with this ff...mark my words..its the best ff i have read ever..lovely..i could feel each and eevry moment..and the pain and love..its written very beautifully..though i m late..i loved it charu..i could see..u write with ur heart...feel good one..lovely..and love u loads..waiting for the next one..its more than awesome re..loved it like anything🤗

🤗 Saru...Thank You sooo much for your precious feedback. 😃 I feel on top of the world. 😃 ❤️ 😊 muuuaaah. 😃😊