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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: sunyy
Like it sammy and kalpi is interesting. I m guessing rags is engaged to pak as you said something about his marriage

Thanks! And no, I am not sure how we caused that confusion but Raghav isn't really engaged with Pakhi and we hope to deal with Kalpi and Sammy in next part. Hopefully that clears things up. When we mentioned "marriage for convenience" in the chapter, we meant that Raghav thought that if he ever got married, then he thought it would be for convenience or profit and not really love. We were trying to show how Raghav had changed through the chapter. He went from being a businessman thinking person, to actually acknowledging he had feelings. Hope that cleared things up. Thanks again for the comment!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: snacky
it was a realization from raghav's side...hmmm interesting and nyc

Thanks! Yeah, we wanted to really emphasize on his realization because we personally felt that that should've been sort of significant in the show too since he was shown to be someone entirely different.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Hey, Shona, it's Kiara. Gosh, I missed this ff. Thanks for updating. It's been ages, but worth waiting. It's mostly from Raghav's pov. It exactly tells us how he feels, makes us understand him better. Sammy is such a devil! He is torturing Raghav, flaunting lunch/ dinner dates with Kalpi on his face. But he's doing it for a purpose, to make Raghav accept his love for Kalpi. Raghav doesn't know what's happening to him. He feels suffocated whenever he sees Sammy and Kalpi together. Part of him wants to be happy for his best friend but there's something that's stopping him from doing so. At first he tries to avoid Sammy but that doesn't help. Then slowly it dawns on him that he's jealous of his best friend, the one who will do anything for him. He knows he should be happy for them but his heart doesn't listen. Loved the part where he asks Kalpi if she's happy with Sammy. He wants to hear her denying any sort of relationship with Sammy but though confused she replies in the affirmative. That really upsets him. Now Sammy has another trump card up his sleeve in the form of Prem. Wonder what happens next. I know you are busy but do try and update soon.
I have sent you a buddy request, please accept it and send me a pm next time you update. Pleaseee.. send my regards to Jiya as well for the combined effort. Special wishes for your interview. All the best! You will do well.

Hey Kiara! Aww your comment made us smile soo big! I was nudging Jiya while we read this. I am glad that someone actually remembered this one.Your description of the part is very apt and we're glad that it was clear enough to convey our ideas. Thank you again for reading it with such attention. And yes, we are working on the next part and it will be up soon! For sure because we're almost done it too. I have received your request and already accepted it. Will definitely PM you when I update next time. Jiya is definitely glad to put this work forth. She's sitting beside me right now and she wants to thank you as well for reading this.

Thanks again for the wishes. The interview did go unexpectedly better than I hoped.

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Shona_Mayur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: appyK
This brilliant piece surely deserves long long commment but sorry I really am bad at that
Anyway.. Its really fabulous.. Loved the way you described Raghav's emotional turmoil.. Just fabulous.. Loving it.. Like always it was worth the wait..great job guys👏

Aww thank you so much for the lovely comment. The comment, if coming from heart, is all that matters. Glad that you liked the part so much. We hope to keep you glued until the end, which shouldn't be very far now.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Anjinie
amazing update, good luck with the interview

Thank you so much for the wishes and for the comment! =)

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Shona_Mayur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: Shivanie05
Hi my dear this is a wonderful story but please forgive me for I really like to be honest and please I don't intent to hurt u my darling but reading this update I was kinda lost at certain points I really like long updates but I think you are prolonging the story, too many of Rags POV and thoughts, I think many is repeating I mean this chapter is good how u bring out Rags feelings but yet still it's too much and still Rags did not get to what he wanted to do. Now about the confusion I am having is Sammy and Kalpi really together or they are just friends because from my POV and Kalpi's answer when Rags asked her if she and Sammy are happy well I know u said "she had a confused look" but still in anyone's eyes if two people constantly being together so often as how u portray these two to be will think yes definitely they are a couple. Anyways I hope the next update will clear all my doubts and again I am really sorry if I offend u my dear 🤗

First, thank you for the feedback. We appreciate any kind of criticism or comment so no need to be sorry for that. See, the point of the chapter just dedicated to Raghav was to keep him in character. We saw Raghav as someone who would be very very reluctant to admit his feelings. If you noticed from the very beginning of the story, he was in denial of his own feelings towards Kalpi. He didn't want to acknowledge it and chose to keep his distance. However, in this part, he actually admitted it finally that he was actually emotionally invested in her out loud to himself. With no excuses about Kamla Ma or any outside factor. Just him. We wanted to show his struggle in detail because Raghav is actually a very complex character. His first aim was revenge. Which he didn't completely let go of yet. His another aim was to be away from other peope he cared about because it may hurt them in return. So yes, it took him really long to admit his feelings and that's why we dedicated whole part to him. We know that some things may have been redundant. Hopefully the next part is a little more clear for everyone. The parts that left you confused were most likely supposed to leave you that way since we wanted that mystery. Hopefully we can clear all of that up by the end, which is pretty near. Again, no worries. I am glad that you felt you could openly criticize it. Feel free to do that.

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Shona_Mayur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: sharanya0011
wow fabulous update..
all the best for ur interveiw

Thank you! 😃

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Shona_Mayur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: foram.
nice update...
raghav thought he is hallucinating.. but she was actually there 🤣
and now he started feeling jealous.. he better talk to Sammy rather then assuming things..

and pls. do continue and all the best for your int

Thank you!

Yup, Raghav is slowly turning delusional from being too high on Kalpi's dreams 😆

Will continue really soon. And thanks, the interview was better than I expected! 😃

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Shona_Mayur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: Chin2_n
Very nice update😛
Good luck for interview👍🏼

Thank you so much! 😃

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Shona_Mayur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: Asyalover
omg sammy u llittle devil...i wanna hear kalpi's pov too plz

Haha yes, Sammy is definitely a devil in disguise. Will definitely highlight more of all of this in upcoming chapters. Hopefully that clears things up. Thanks for the comment!

P.S. - My Love From Another Star? Completely loved that drama <3

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