RagNa SS: Demons [Last Part, Page 41 updt Dec. 16th] - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey, Shona, it's Kiara. Gosh, I missed this ff. Thanks for updating. It's been ages, but worth waiting. It's mostly from Raghav's pov. It exactly tells us how he feels, makes us understand him better. Sammy is such a devil! He is torturing Raghav, flaunting lunch/ dinner dates with Kalpi on his face. But he's doing it for a purpose, to make Raghav accept his love for Kalpi. Raghav doesn't know what's happening to him. He feels suffocated whenever he sees Sammy and Kalpi together. Part of him wants to be happy for his best friend but there's something that's stopping him from doing so. At first he tries to avoid Sammy but that doesn't help. Then slowly it dawns on him that he's jealous of his best friend, the one who will do anything for him. He knows he should be happy for them but his heart doesn't listen. Loved the part where he asks Kalpi if she's happy with Sammy. He wants to hear her denying any sort of relationship with Sammy but though confused she replies in the affirmative. That really upsets him. Now Sammy has another trump card up his sleeve in the form of Prem. Wonder what happens next. I know you are busy but do try and update soon.
I have sent you a buddy request, please accept it and send me a pm next time you update. Pleaseee.. send my regards to Jiya as well for the combined effort. Special wishes for your interview. All the best! You will do well.
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Posted: 11 years ago
This brilliant piece surely deserves long long commment but sorry I really am bad at that
Anyway.. Its really fabulous.. Loved the way you described Raghav's emotional turmoil.. Just fabulous.. Loving it.. Like always it was worth the wait..great job guys👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update, good luck with the interview
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi my dear this is a wonderful story but please forgive me for I really like to be honest and please I don't intent to hurt u my darling but reading this update I was kinda lost at certain points I really like long updates but I think you are prolonging the story, too many of Rags POV and thoughts, I think many is repeating I mean this chapter is good how u bring out Rags feelings but yet still it's too much and still Rags did not get to what he wanted to do. Now about the confusion I am having is Sammy and Kalpi really together or they are just friends because from my POV and Kalpi's answer when Rags asked her if she and Sammy are happy well I know u said "she had a confused look" but still in anyone's eyes if two people constantly being together so often as how u portray these two to be will think yes definitely they are a couple. Anyways I hope the next update will clear all my doubts and again I am really sorry if I offend u my dear 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow fabulous update..
all the best for ur interveiw
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...
raghav thought he is hallucinating.. but she was actually there 🤣
and now he started feeling jealous.. he better talk to Sammy rather then assuming things..

and pls. do continue and all the best for your int
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update😛
Good luck for interview👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg sammy u llittle devil...i wanna hear kalpi's pov too plz
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niru04

Nice update.i can see d different ragav in ur stry.cntnu soon.al d best for ur interview


Thank you! We're really glad that we could portray a different side to him. Hopefully you will like the progression. And thanks for the good luck too. The interview was fine!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Best of luck for interview

Waiting for ragna to start now


Thank you so much! My interview went fine!
RagNa already started long time ago, but Raghav just hasn't realized it yet lol.
Don't worry, their feelings would be more apparently later on since Raghav has finally sort of expected that he has feelings for Kalpi.

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