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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gina24

Can't wait for the next update



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

He came out of the office and the car stopped infront of him, the driver opened the door and he sat down with a file in his hand and the car zoomed off in to the darkness.

He entered the Singhania Mansion and he entered finding the lights were already out. After all it was time for his mother to go to bed. Once again he was late, once again he missed there dinner. He felt bad for the old woman, his mother but he couldn't do much. He was neck deep in work and it was all for her... he trailed off, it was not true. It was not at all, all for her. It was for her, the girl who betrayed him, the girl with whom he fell in love with about five and a half years ago, and for whom he was mad enough to propose for marriage and who outright rejected him, who without once thinking broke his heart who betrayed his trust. No he would not think about her. She was that wound of his life which he kept green so to remind him that he's still far from what he aimed at.

While he was deep in thought, his trail was broken by the lady of the house, his mother as she came towards him saying, "So you got time to come home finally. I thought once again you'd spend your night in your cozy cabin." She said sarcastically.

"Mom... you know I am really tired and I don't have time for this right now... please." He said and started to go towards his room when again was interrupted by his mother.

"Now I have finally decided. You are getting married by the end of this month. " When Raghav tried to protest but was stopped by one stern voice.

"Raghav, I am not asking you, I said that I have DECIDED. And that means you have to follow it, even if you are against it." She said with finality and left to her room.

Raghav sighed and slumped down on the couch, he rested his head on the head rest and brought his right hand to rest on his forehead and slipped into deep thoughts. A smile escaped from his lips and he suddenly straightened up and searched his inner pocket of the coat and took out a small transparent envelope and stared it and again rested his head on the headrest while his eyes were fixed on it.

***

In other part of the world, a girl was hurriedly walking towards a building that stood a few feets away from her now. She entered the building and walked towards the lift and pressed the button. She was waiting impatiently for it and then lift opened and she hurriedly entered and pressed the button of 5th floor and after few seconds the door opened declaring that she had reached the desired floor and she got out and moved towards the 3rd apartment on which the number plate read- FLAT NO- 24. She knocked and waited for it to be opened. When It didn't opened she rummaged for the duplicate keys that she kept in her purse, and opened the door and entered. The lights were Off and some sounds were coming from the room adjacent to hers.

She moved towards the door and slightly opened and what she saw shocked her to bits!

***

It was morning in Mumbai. Raghav woke up fresh and for the first time with a smile on his face. May be this day is lucky for him.' And moved to get fresh and get ready for the office.

It was on the breakfast that he remembered his little conversation with his mother who was avoiding him. He sat beside her on table and took her hands in his and kissed on top of them and smiled and said in a soft tone, "Mom, Please. You know I can't take your anger, It ruins my day."

"Only one YES from you would bring my smile back, Raghav Please trust me." His mother pleaded.

"Okay. I think about it." He replied quite serious. While her mother smiled and asked servant to serve Raghav the breakfast.

They ate in silence. And then he left for his office.

***

While on way he was way to engrossed on what his mother said when his trail of thoughts were broken by an application of sudden breaks.

Raghav was moved physically and tackled the sudden force by holding the front seat and prevented his head being collided by the seat's headrest.

Before he could say something or let out his anger on his driver, his car door opened and a girl hopped in and closed the door behind.

Raghav was shocked by her audacity, but he couldn't see her face as it was covered by her wavy long hairs. All he could manage to say was, "What are you doing?" and then he knew that she was one of the girl was might be one of his crazy fan, and he was also amused at her length of craziness but he never liked it and thus he asked a rudely to leave immediately... " but before he could continue she cut him and said.

"I know you are busy but please help me." And then she looked up towards him and left him astound.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
amazing... can't wait for more 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
cliffhanger😡
loved update
who was tht girl in rags car????
whats the mystry behind room no.24
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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tmorw?? promise??...will be waitg...thk u so much... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
what happened in room no 24?
who is in raghav's car?
who was the girl raghav loved?
how and when will ragna unite?
Cliff hanger dear with lot of questions revolving around my head...🤪
Any ways loved it buddy👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
oh god this so awesome cant hardly wait for other chapters
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
interesting update..nice...continue soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Interesting update with full of .suspense 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
who s d grl in d car??? nd who broke his heart nd why?? plzz update soon...

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