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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abhita

this anticipation for your next update is killing me...

this is how i look now... 🤢 please make it fast... :)


patience is a virtue... young lady (wagging a finger as I say it)😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angelpureness


patience is a virtue... young lady (wagging a finger as I say it)😆


abhi agni pariksha to waise hi de rahe hain... kya faraq padtha hain... virtuous hone ka kya fayda... kuch accha to milne se raha... aap itna anticipation build karke itna tadpaa rahe ho!😭

*making cute puppy face* please please update post kado jaldi se...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abhita


abhi agni pariksha to waise hi de rahe hain... kya faraq padtha hain... virtuous hone ka kya fayda... kuch accha to milne se raha... aap itna anticipation build karke itna tadpaa rahe ho!😭

*making cute puppy face* please please update post kado jaldi se...


ten minutes more 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Dear Readers,

I am a little upset... knowing that you all are equally upset... I am forcing myself to write this update... apologies for a short chapter...

I want to shout a big thank you... your comments and requests are the only reason I am continuing... love you all... mwah

Now for our naughty readers... wanting more bedroom scenes... enjoy... hope it turns out tasteful😉

Chapter 21.

Ragav pulls Kalpi towards him, wanting to devour her, but alas, he has to wait for her to make the move because of the challenge he had issued. Part of him is curious, wanting to know what she will do, part of him is excited at the thought of her initiating their lovemaking (I blush as I write this... 😳😉 )

Kalpi gazes into Ragav's eyes with nervous excitement, blushing profusely. Ragav holds her gaze steadily, her blushes exciting him... not allowing her to look away, as she tries to burrow her face into his chest... he wants her to see and bask in the moment of what she is capable of making him feel.

Kalpi gazes into Ragav's eyes; eyes expressing his desire... passion... love... eyes telling her he is losing the battle of control... Kalpi blushes in nervous excitement, thinking she cannot blush any more... Ragav caresses her face, and says softly, "Please kiss me", making her blush even deeper.

Those very words, work their magic... they release Kalpi from her shyness and initial hesitance... instinctively Kalpi leans towards Ragav... wanting to fulfil his request... to please him.

What Kalpi lacks in experience she makes up for in passion... as she kisses Ragav... she pours her love... her desire into him.

Ragav tries to control his response; he does not want to frighten Kalpi with the intensity of his desire. It is their first time as man and wife, he wants Kalpi to lead the pace, as he does not trust himself... unable to endure for more than a few seconds... he flips her... reversing their positions... all the while kissing her, not releasing her lips... as he takes over.

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Kamla maa, Gauri maa and Pakhi are sitting in the lounge area, Kamla maa keeps glancing in the direction of Ragahav's bedroom wondering what is keeping them. Anxiously she gets up from the sofa and starts pacing, her desire to walk into Ragav's bedroom getting stronger by the minute.

Gauri maa watches Kamla pace and thinks that she has a good idea what is going on inside the bedroom... after all she had caught them in a tender moment just days ago. She smiles to herself and thinks, "After the unfortunate incident earlier in the morning, both would want to affirm their commitment to one another. Gauri maa decides she needs to distract Kamla before she does something foolish, like barge into Ragav's bedroom. She holds her stomach and keels over and yells softly, "Ouch... Ouch" Kamla maa turns towards Gauri maa in concern and rushes towards her and says in concern, "Tai what is wrong... where does it hurt?"

Kamla maa lays Gauri maa's head on her lap and tell Pakhi to call the nurse from tai's room. Pakhi obediently follows Kamla maa's instructions, all the while trying not to laugh, for Gauri maa had winked at her before falling over. She understood that Gauri maa was acting, her intention to distract Kamla maa from... Pakhi stops herself from completing her thoughts.

She glances at the closed bedroom door as she walks past it on her way to tai's room. Her heart heavy, as tears flow freely down her cheeks for Ragav and Kalpi were inside for over an hour and there was not a sound.


P.S: mates you know the drill... hit like and comment... if your feeling the love 😉

Edited by angelpureness - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you thank you thank you thank you...
you should probably go sleep now... now that I can read and re-read this for the rest of the day and night, you are not needed... not until tomorrow anyways... 😉

Just kidding... kaash you had another pair of hands and brain and heart and could've updated the oyster too!

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Posted: 11 years ago

lol... thanks for proof reading😆

gud nite
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you thank you thank you thank you...
you should probably go sleep now... now that I can read and re-read this for the rest of the day and night, you are not needed... not until tomorrow anyways... 😉

Just kidding... kaash you had another pair of hands and brain and heart and could've updated the oyster too!

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pagal😆

gud nite
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it. Too short. Sorry I m greedy. Plz update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
me blushing here😳😳 You have captured the romance spot on...thank God u left sumthing to the imagination 😆 ...Initially when I started reading I was like "Haila, what r they doing?Kamla will barge inside any sec...Kalpi I hope u hav locked the door"🤣...Gauri(superwoman) 2 the rescue...ok so bye...I am goin 2 read it again and get lost in the lovemaking [naughty me!!😉]
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow juz wow..sach mein angel..u jz giv me a bedtime story. awww...luv u.. ;) muaaahhh...

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