RaGna OS---FATE Ch 7 Updated 30/4/14 (15+)

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Baljodh

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Posted: 11 years ago

PROLOGUE: It was a cloudy day, But somehow, Raghav found sunshine on his cloudy day, What can it be? He had never been so happy like this before, His face always glowed of happiness whenever he's around her. It was Fate that brought them together, At that beach, their fate had bounded them together. It was like God made them for each other. Her loving and caring nature, made him like to live with her for the rest of his life. He had a new friend, just the day after he broke up with his girlfriend who cheated on him. But, who knows that their fate was planning something big for them.

Guys, This is the prologue of my OS. I hope you'll find it interesting..I'll post the next update tomorrow, Please Don't forget to like it if you like it! The more likes, the more motivation your giving me..If you don't like it, You may throw tomatoes, or whatever is in your hand right now, You're all obliged to!

-Baljodh-

Chapter 1- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4002537&TPN=2

Chapter 2-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4002537&TPN=4&#p105492756

Chapter 3-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4002537&TPN=4

Chapter 4-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4002537&TPN=5

Chapter 5-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4002537&TPN=6

Chapter 6-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4002537&TPN=7&#p105564266

Chapter 7-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4002537&TPN=10

Edited by baljodhdhanesar - 11 years ago

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Baljodh

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Originally posted by: rajvilover
Nice continue...update soon

Thanks, I sure will!

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Originally posted by: Fatima.princess
Wooww nice one plz continue 👏

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Nice! Update soon! 😊

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Baljodh

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Chapter One here it comes :)

Place- California, United States of America.

It was Sunday morning. It was a cloudy day. Raghav was getting bored reading comics in his house. So, he thought of going to his girlfriend, Natasha's place.

Raghav pressed the doorbell of Natasha's house. He was surprised that another man opened the door. He had never seen that man before. Afterwards, he heared Natasha asking the guy who rang the bell, To his surprise, He saw Natasha in her bra and panties. Natasha saw it was Raghav. By seeing this, Raghav was hurt and felt that a great force had pulled him downwards. He felt a very heavy feeling on his heart. Natasha wanted to explain to him about the incident but he hadn't let her owe an explanation. He knew she cheated on him. Then, the man who was with Natasha asked her who this faggot is? Raghav was hurt and angry. He wanted to punch him on the face. But he kept himself calm instead. He told Natasha that she hurted him so much he'll never forgive her. By hearing this, Natasha slammed the door on his face.

Raghav was hurt, He felt intense pain. It was as if his heart had landed on the ground with great force. To reduce the pain, He ran very fast. He ran and ran and ran until he reached his place of comfort, The only place where he seeks peace of mind, the beach.

He sat on the beach. It was a very calm beach. No one was in that beach except for him. He was alone. He glazed at the shinning sun and then at the running waters of the ocean. He felt calm and steady.

He understood that Natasha wasn't made for him. He was hurt, But he was not the type of guy who would sob all day because of what happened. He promised to himself that he'll stay strong and will forget about what happened.

The beach was a special place for him. He could talk to himself for hours. He had an imaginary friend. He called "HER" "anonymus". It was his wish to have a true friend one day who will love him and care for him, Understand his pain and sorrow, A friend who will give him her shoulder where he can lean on. But, Never he knew what his fate had offered to him. He always questioned his fate, But now, It's time his fate will give him the answer he was craving for.

PRECAP: His life will change forever. Raghav's fate is starting to give him hints. Raghav will meet the girl of her dreams, His true friend, and maybe his soulmate. Let's see where destiny will bring them in life..

Guys I hope you like it, And I hope it isn't boring..Please like it if you like it because you know how motivating it is if there are many people who'll like this chapter. And criticism is allowed

-Baljodh-