Kalpana, Truely an ANGEL Epi-44 updated with note by the author - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc mimi... awsum update,... my kalpu is so choosy ... realy lyked dat her dad n mom pamper her too much... wish she hd dat kind of parents in shw as well...😭😭...
kalpu in shorts... whoa... let rags gt a glimpse of her...😳...

sammy n anne in elevator... another luv blossmin huh..😉😉..

keep writin...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Guys! Since now-a-days all r heart broken because of the show and missing Ragna so dis is a gift from my side. Thanks 4 appreciating and yes there's more to come...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting update...continue soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice update. continue soon mimi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Love ur story...pls update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow amazing update⭐️
ananya swaminathan-two states yadh aya..😳
sis continue soon baby😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mimi, it was so enjoyable as always. 😃 I am loving Kalpana's this avatar. 😃 n I am so excited to see her in denim shorts and halter top,can't help but wish Raghav also sees her like this. she must be looking so gorgeous and hot! 😳😆 also excited to see Sammy-Anne scene. 👍🏼 tumhari update ka next day tak bhi wait nahi hota! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update..super cute family scene of abhi,divya and mogambo..😆😆
Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanku so much for loving my updates! And yes Chahat keeping ur demand in my mind that Rags should see Kalpi in shorts I have written this Epi! Hope u all will enjoy .😉

Epi-15

Part-1

Pakhi in her cabin.

P to herself- Mr Aashiq kitne acchhe hai mujhe mere bhaai ke kartuto ke wajah se bura nehi samjhe. Isse hi pata chalta hai wo mujhse kitne pyaar karte hai.

She was staring at Raghav from her cabin. He is busy in his laptop.

P pov- Kaash uss laptop ki jagah mai hoti aur wo mujhe aise stare karte. Wah ! Pakhi teri dimaag zaroorat se zyaada hi dur jaa rahi hai.

She saw Sammy went inside Raghav's cabin he talked with him something. Then Raghav closed his laptop and came out of the cabin with Sammy.

Paakhi also came out.

Sammy- Pakhi acchha hua tum bahar aayi hum dono tumse hi baat karne ke liye aane waale the.

P- Kyu ?

R- Wo actually hum dono thora bahar jaa rahe hai. Tum please office ka khyaal rakhna.

P- Ok Sir.

S- Tumhaare bharose Raghav apna office chor raha hai. To khyal rakhna !

Pakhi smiled and said- Mai aapko koi shikayat ka mouka nehi dungi. Promise.

S- Bye !

P- Bye !

P pov- Wah ! Pakhi. Tujhe Raghav ne office ka khayal rakhne ka kaam diya. Kitna bharosa karte hai tujhpe.Ab Mr Aashiq ko koi shikayat ka mouka nehi dena hai tujhe. Lag ja kaam me Pakhi !

Mehra Mansion-

Kalpi came downstairs. She is ready to go for shopping. Anne was sitting with Kalpi's mom. Anne is wearing a frock which is shorter than her knee.

All noticed Kalpi. Kalpi was wearing her all time fav Denim shorts with a black halter top. With that she wore a chain which extended to her navel region, it has a silver butterfy locket hanged in it. She wore silver colour big ring type earings. Her hair had a puff in front with a tight ponytail in back. Her pouch was taken in such a style that it had its place touching her left side waist. She wore plain belt chappals without any hill. She had worn black plastic and wooden bangles on the wrist of her right hand. She avoided her watch which gives her a mature look and had used very light makeup on her. This gave her a look of a funky college girl.

Divya- Wah! Guriyaa you are looking like a cool girl.

K- Thanks mom! Hum dono puraane Delhi days yaad karne waale hai. So hamare puraane look ki zaroorat thi.

A- Haa! Delhi me hum dono Driver Kaka ko bags thama dete the. Wo bechaare bags leke hamare piche piche ghumte rehte the. Kya din the naa wo aunty!

D- Haa Sunday shopping karna tum dono ki buri aadat thi.

A- Aur meri maa. Hamesha kehti thi mai paani me paise jhok rahi hu. Aaj bhi wahi sab masti karne ki mood me hai sirf masti ke baad daatne ke liye mom nehi hogi.

Kalpi understood in which direction the conversation was heading.

K- Aur haa! Aaj koi driver bhi nehi hoga hamare bags uthaane ke liye madam. So khud ke bags khud hi uthaane parenge! Ab saara din kya yehi bitaane ki iraada hai? Mai apni fav brown hutch puppy ko nikaalti hu tu mom ko goodbye kehke baahar aa.

A- OK meri boss!

Kalpi and Anne headed for the biggest mall of Mumbai in Kalpi's fav Duster being unaware of the fact that Sammy and Raghav were also there for shopping.

Part-2

Kalpi and Anne went inside the mall. All were looking at them. Girls with jealousy and boys with admiration. They both were looking such breath taking! Three college boys looked at Kalpana and Anne with an evil mind.

1st- - Oh! God ye dono larkiyaa patako ki tarah lag rahe hai.

2nd- Haye! Usko dekh jo frock me hai. She is hot!

3rd- Arre! Mujhe to shorts waali pasand aayi hai. Use acchhi styling sense hai!

1st- Do larkiyaa aur hum teen. Thori masti honi chahiye. Abhi unn dono chiriyo ko khushi-khushi shopping karne dete hai. Amir ghar ke lagte hai! Mall ke baahar cherenge. Chalo baahar chalte hai.

Both the girls standing in the middle of the mall.

Kalpi- To kaunse counter me pehle chale?

Anne- Mmm! Salwar suits ke. Mere saare aacche occasion me pehenne waale suits puraane ho gaye hai.

K- Jaisi aapki icchha mere aaka!

Anne laughed and pushed Kalpi slightly.

They both went to the sawar suit designer boutique counter.

This side Sammy and Raghav entered the mall.

S- Ek kaam karte hai. Pehle Denim's ke counter me chalte hai. Mujhe apne liye jeans leni hai.

R- OK Chal!

They both entered the Denim's counter.

Kalpana- Anne tujhpe ye green suit match nehi kar raha hai. Try this baby pink.. It will look heavy on you.

Anne- Wow! Marvelous choice hai teri. Hum dono ke kitne saare suits hue?

K- Hum dono ke? Total 16. Mai pay karti hu.

After saying that Kalpi gave her card.

A-Arre! Ab mai kamati hu aur mujhe lakhs ke upar paisa milta hai!

K- I know isliye tu dresses ki counter me paise degi.

A- Thik hai.

Both the girls had done a lot of shopping from dresses to saaris, shoes to jewelleries.

That side Raghav and Sammy's shopping also finished. They were in the the cafeteria having coffee.

This side-

K- Chal caf me chalke coffee peete hai.

A- Good idea! Mujhe washroom me jaake apni makeup bhi check karni hai.

K- Chale?

A- Chalo. Waise ek baat kahu?

K- Haa. Bol naa!

A- Ab samajh me aa raha hai Driver kaka bags leke AC me bhi kyu sweat karte the.

Kalpi laughed.

K- Haa! Aaj hamari haalat bhi unki tarah hui.

Caf!

S- Shukar hai! Kalpi chutti me hai nehi to shopping ke liye tu nehi milta!

Raghav smiled.

S- Itna smile kyu kar raha hai?

R- Kalpi ko yaha laata to pata nehi uska kya reaction hota!

S- Abhi bhi Romeo bane baitha hai? Please mere yaar aaj ke liye tu mera Jay banke reh!

R- Jay?

S- Haa! Sholay ki tu Jay aur mai Veeru. Aur ye do mug coffee celebrating our dosti.

Both of them laughed. Anne came alone. She is searching the washroom with her moving eyes. All eyes came on her except Raghav's. She was feeling proud for being the centre of attraction. But she was unaware that one pair of eyes were not moving from her.

Raghav- Sammy.. muh bandh kar apna. Uss larki ko aise kyu dekh raha hai?

Sammy- Yaar use dekhte hi dil me kuch hua . She is so cute!

R- Bandh kar apna bakwas!

S- Yaar tu nehi samjhega! Tujhe Kalpi ke saath wakt bitaane ke baad pyaar hua. Lekin ab lagta hai teri virus ne mujhe bhi attack kar li hai!

R- What?

S- Ufff! Ab tak nehi samjha? Love at first sight.

Anne went to the washroom lekin beech me ek larki ke saath usne dhakka khaya. She said sorry and went inside the washroom.

Sammy stood up from his chair and went to the place where Anne bumped against the other girl.

R- Sammy tu kaha jaa raha hai?

Sammy went their and picked up the diamond bracelet which had fallen from Anne's wrist! He kept the bracelet inside his pocket.He came and sat with Raghav.

R- Lagta hai tere upar anti-virus bhi ab kaam nehi aane waala hai.

Part-3

Kalpi came in the Caf region. She was deep in thought.

K pov- Wo teeno larke kya hamare baare me hi discuss kar rahe the. Shorts and mini-frock! Do larkiyaa. Bohut saari larkiyaa hai iss mall me jo shorts and mini-frock pehenke ghum rahe hai lekin mujhe aisa lag raha hai wo teeno larke hamare baare me hi baat kar rahe hai.

Suddenly she heard a voice which broke her concentration.

R- Sammy! Tu pagal ho gaya hai. Tujhe wo anjaan larki pasand aayi. Dikhne me to college ki lagti hai.

Kalpana looking at both of them in shock!

K pov- He bhagwan! Ye dono yaha? Agar Raghav ne mujhe aise dekha to kya hoga? Nehi mai ye hone nehi de sakti. Raghav ko mere baare me sab pata chal jaayega aur ye baat aai tak pohuch jaayegi. Aaj tak baba aur maine ye baat bohut mushkil se chupaake rakha hai. Agar ye baat bahar aa gayi to aai kabhi mere saath comfortable nehi hogi ye sochke mai bachpan se amiro ki tarah bari hui hu. Mujhe wo sab kuch mila hai jo kisi garib ko nehi milta. Aai mujhe bhi ameero ki category me maan legi aur shayad paraya soche! Nehi mai Raghav ke saamne itni jaldi nehi aa sakti.

Raghav was speechless he was feeling something in air.

S- Raghav tu chup kyu hai?

R- Wo kuch nehi!( Suddenly Raghav turn his head and saw Kalpi. He got dumbstruck!)

Kalpi was standing near the washroom. Who jaldi se ghum gayi aur washroom me ghus gayi. Anne was about to move out to the caf. Kalpi grabbed her hands.

A- Kya?

K- Raghav and Sammy!

A- Kya yaar tu mere saath aayi hai apne BF aur muhbola bhaai ke saath nehi.

K-Arre yaar! Raghav and Sammy bahar caf me baithe hue hai! Mai unke saamne nehi jaa sakti. Hume acchhe mouke ki talaash karni hogi yaha se nikalne ke liye. Aur pata hai Sammy baar-baar isstaraf hi dekh raha hai.

A- Unka picture dikha taaki mai bhi unse tujhe safe rakh paau.

Kalpi showed Sammy's and Raghav's picture to Anne.

A pov- So Sammy is his name.

A- Yaar! He was staring at me.

K- Kyaa????? To ek kaam karte hai hum dono alag-alag yaha se baahar nikalte hai. Parking lot me gaari ke paas ek honge. Thik hai?

A- OK!!

This side

S- Kya hua tujhe?

R- Mujhe laga maine abhi-abhi Kalpi ko dekha.

S- Kya?

R- Haa! Lekin wo shorts me thi.

S- What???Kalpana and shorts!!!!!

Sammy started laughing!

PRECAP- Kalpana is walking in the designer suit counter. Raghav is following her from back.

K pov- He bhagwan! Kahi inhe shak to nehi hua. Ye mujhe follow kyu kar rahe hai?

Kalpi takes a suit and run inside the trial room and closed the door.

She calls Anne.

Anne and Sammy inside the lift!

Anne's cellphone rings. She picks it up.

K- Anne tu nikli? Pata nehi Raghav ko shayad mujhpe shak ho gaya hai. Wo tabse mujhe follow kar raha hai. Mai ek trial room me ghuske tujhe call kar rahi hu. Just imagine! Lekin ye Sammy nehi dikh raha hai. Kahi wo kisi kone se tapak ke mujhe pakar naa le.

A loudly- Haa..haa teri bf ka dost. Mujhe pata hai!

K- Anne. Baat kya hai? Tu code language me baat kyu kar rahi hai?

A- Nehi. Mai abhi ek mall me hu. Aur ek lift me fasi hui hu ek larke ke saath. Kya naam bataya aapka? Haa! Samar Raizada. Das minute me hume mall authorities lift se nikaal denge. Tab mai tujhe call karungi. Bye!

And Anne cuts the phone.

K pov- Iska matlab Anne lift me Sammy ke saath fasi hui hai. Ye kya musibat hai?

Sry guys Pakhi ke baare me pehle likhke tum logo ko shayad maine naaraz kiya lekin agar chor deti it would had been odd since all the characters r imp. Lekin dnt wrry asli drama next epi me hai.

There is more to know about Kalpana. Hope u guys liked today's epi. And as always give me your feed backs and likes !

LOVE U ALL !❤️

Edited by mimiunisha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
very good update..nice..continue soon..😊

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