Kalpana, Truely an ANGEL Epi-44 updated with note by the author - Page 35

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gudiyalovesguru

eagerly waiting for tat yaar...
wanna see kalpi on action and raghav deserves punishment...
hw dare he thinking to leave kalpi???
and i am sure kalpi is nt a girl who sit and cry...


Raghav don't want to leave Kalpi..
But Kalpi will think like that, 2 characters of this story will end so it will be more interesting when Kalpi will destroy her enemies!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mimiunisha



Uski hi tayyari me hu dear.. Jaldi hi bohut garbar hone waali hai/...😆


Okay!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys I am introducing a new element in my story that is background music since I regard this story as a show..
Hope u all will njoy the emotions of this part😉
urs
Mimi😊

Epi-38

Part-1

Kalpi-Paakhi ye tu kyaa keh rahi hai ?

Paakhi- Haa.. Gouri aunty mere liye rishtaa leke aayi thi..Aur Raghav mujhe jaise treat karta hai I feel like I am his princess..Hai naa Kamala maa ?

Kamla- Pagli kahiki.. Wo tujhse pyaar karta hai isliye..

Kalpi cannot bear more.

Kalpi- Aai meri tabet thora kharab lag raha hai. Mai thori walk karke aati hu..

Without uttering any more words Kalpi left.

Kamala- Kalpi khaana to khatam karke jaa..

Paakhi- Kamala maa ise kyaa huaa ?

Kamala- Pata nehi beta..

Kalpi went and sat on the bench infront Bappa's temple.

K pov- Raghav mai ye kyaa sun rahi hu ? Tum Paakhi se shaadi.. Tumne meri bharosaa tor daali Raghav...

Tears moistened her both the cheeks..

Back Ground Music-

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=16DblxZeQ64

Teri khata hai mere jiya
Teri khata hai mere jiya
Unnpe bharosa kyun tune kiya

Flashback...

In the park Raghav lied in Kalpi's lap.. Both sharing an eyelock.

Sab jhoothe jhoothe waade thhe unke
Chal peechhe peechhe aaya tu jinke
Woh piya aaye na
Woh Piya aaye na
Piya aaye na woh piya aaye na

FB...

R-Mai soch raha tha ab apni shaadi ki baat kare...

Kalpi looks at Raghav with surprise..

K- You want to maary me ?

R-Of course ! Mujhe apni angel apne paas hamesha ke liye chahiye...

And Raghav smiled but Kalpi's eyes were filled with tears. She hugged him more tightly...

Ab sabhi unn khwaabon ki tu dagar chhod de
Ab sabhi unn khwaabon ko tu khud hi tod de
Woh piya aaye na
Woh Piya aaye na
Piya aaye na woh.. piya aaye na

R- Kalpi !!!!!!!!

He pulled her and she fell on his bed. Not only bed after this sudden force of pulling she got a liitle later she fell on Raghav's lap..

But she could not control her laughing..

Teri khata hai mere jiya
Teri khata hai mere jiya

Har khata ki hoti hai koi na koi sazaa
Gham likhe ho kismat mein to ban hi jaati wajah
Ab sabhi gham ashqon mein simat se gaye
Ab sabhi aansu palkon se lipat se gaye
Woh piya aaye na
Woh.. Piya aaye na
Piya aaye na woh... piya aaye na

Raghav pulls Kalpi's wrist and suddenly Kalpi sleeps and they have an amazing eyelock. Kalpi was above Raghav's chest. Her right hand was resting on his chest. She broke the eyelock and sat straight on the road.

Tears flowed out like river from Kalpi's eyes. She rubbed her tears.

K pov- Nehi ...I have to talk to Raghav regarding this.

Part-2

Kalpi came at Raghav's house.

Gouri came running.

G- Kalpi beta tu yaha.. kitne din tujhe nehi dekhe the..

K-Maa aapne Raghav ki shaadi Paakhi ke saath teh kar di..

G- Wo beta..

K- Maa Raghav kaha hai? Mujhe usse baat karni hai.

Raghav came down through stairs..

R- Mai yaha hu..

K- Raghav tum Paakhi se shaadi karnaa chaahte ho.

R- Wo Kalpi..

K- Tum Paakhi se shaadi kar rahe ho?

G- Kalpi hamari baat to suno..

K- Haa ya naa?

R- Wo Kalpi..

K- I asked yes or no( loudly)

R- Yes( Raghav said sobbingly)

Kalpi grabbed Rags collars.

K- How could u? Raghav tumne ye mere saath kyu kiya? Kyaa bigaara tha maine tumhaara? Tum mujhe apna angel maante the naa? Maine apne aap ko bhi tumhe sop diyaa tha kyuki maine tumse pyaar kiyaa tha. Aur tumne mere pyaar ka ye silaa diyaa..

Raghav why why?..

Kalpi cried out loud.

R-Kalpi listen to me.

Gouri is shocked to know the truth that Kalpi's boyfriend is none other than her own son. Infact she was much more hurt by thinking that Kalpi her daughter by heart is facing the heart break for their revenge.

R-Kalpi ..

K- No..Mujhe aur kuch nehi sunna..I had enough. Congratulations Mr Singhania.. Congratulations..

And Kalpi left..

R-Kalpi...

Raghav sat on his knees..

Gouri supports Raghav.

G-Beta wo abhi gusse me hai. Mai jaanti hu apni beti ko..

Raghav looks at his mother when she said Kalpi her daughter.

R- Mom maine use kho diyaaa...

G-Nehi beta.. Shaadi ke jab rasme honge naa tab tum use sab kuch bol dena ki ye shaadi sirf ek saal ke liye hai. Mai apne beti ko aise tuti hui nehi dekh sakti. Use sacchai bata dena beta ye shaadi kyu aur kisliye ho rahi hai..

Gouri takes Raghav to his room.

Part-3

At night-

Kalpi sitting on the chawl stairs and looking at the moon.

K pov- Kyu Raghav tumne aisa kyu kiya?

That side Raghav's room..

Raghav sitting on floor supporting his back by his bed. He is looking at Kalpi and his pictures on his tab which were clicked in Suresh and Riya's marriage..

Background Music..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6XGdeSKL6eE

Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena
Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena (x2)( For k)

(Kalpi crying remembering Raghav)

Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri( For R)


Tears flowing from Raghav's eyes seeing their pictures of happiness

Main tenu samjhava ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawa ki
Na tere bina lagda jee( For K)


Kalpi remembering the time she gave the romantic surprise to Raghav ..

The magical night which she created for Raghav.

Kalpi sitting on the bed.

Raghav spoke softly-Ka..lpi.. ?

Kalpi opened her arms with her moist eyes.

Raghav came near and sat on the bed.Kalpi hold his hand.He slowly kissed her tears.

Mere dil ne chun laiyaa ne
Tere dil diyaan raahan
Tu jo mere naal tu rehta
Turpe meriyaan saaha
Jeena mera.. hoye
Hun hai tera, ki main karaan
Tu kar aitbaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawan kee
Na tere bina lagda jee( for R)

Raghav remembering their first magical night together.

Kalpi takes Raghav's arms and cuddle their..

Raghav kissed Kalpi's forehead.

And Kalpi slept comfortably keeping her head in Raghav's chest.

Ve changa nahion keeta beeba
Ve changa nahion keeta beeba
Dil mera tod ke
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
Naal tere jod ke( For K)

Kalpi remember how Raghav said yes , that he is marrying Paakhi.

K- Haa ya naa?

R- Wo Kalpi..

K- I asked yes or no( loudly)

R- Yes( Raghav said sobbingly)

Kalpi grabbed Rags collars.

K- How could u? Raghav tumne ye mere saath kyu kiya? Kyaa bigaara tha maine tumhaara? Tum mujhe apna angel maante the naa? Maine apne aap ko bhi tumhe sop diyaa tha kyuki maine tumse pyaar kiyaa tha. Aur tumne mere pyaar ka ye silaa diyaa..

Raghav why why?..

Kalpi cried out loud.

Tenu chadd ke kitthe jawan
Tu mera parchhanvaa
Tere mukhde vich hi main taan
Rab nu apne pawaan
Meri duaa.. haaye
Sajda tera kardi sadaa
Tu sun iqraar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri( For R)

Focus on Raghav's present situation. He is crying and caressing the picture of Kalpi in his tab.

Main tainu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee( For R)

Raghav kept his head on the edge of his bed and slept.. Tear drops rolled out from his corner of his eyes.

Chawl-

Kalpi crying silently..

Pakya came.

Kalpi rubbed her tears.

K- Dada aap mujhse kuch important kehnaa chaahte the naa. Kya?

P- Kalpu mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai aur mera ek girl friend bhi hai...

K- Kya????

P- Haa aaj hi wo mera Gf bani..

K- Kaun hai wo?

P- Swati..

K- Swaati.. Ye naam suna hua lag raha hai. Haa.. Swati Paakhi ki cousin hai naa?

P- Haa..

Precap- Vitthal and Pakya talking..slowly

V- Pakya mujhe teri madad chahiye.

P- Haa baba bolo naa.. Aapko kismet madad chahiye..

V- Beta Kapoors ne hi Singhania seth ko maara tha. Ab unke khilaaf hume sabut ikkattha karna hai.

P- Ye Kapoors to khooni nikle baba.. aur mujhe yaad hai bachpan me maine bhi dekhaa tha unn logo ne kaise aapke upar khoon ka ilzaam lagaya tha.. Mai aapke saath hu baba..

Note-


Guys I know I use songs too much in my story. If u guys don't like the fact of using songs please make a comment. Dnt know how much u guys have to bear 4 my strange song choice. Just give ur pov do u like the songs or not which r used in the story.

Hope u guys liked today's epi. And as always give me your feed backs and likes !

Love u all!!❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
Faster than u Mimi😆

Superb update yaa:) Loved ur new idea of background music...The songs u chose suited the situation perfectly.😃 Amazing and continue soon😳
Edited by ragnaforever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mimijanu awsm update😊
bt tune meri kalpi ko rulaya 😭 nt gud
Main tenu samjhava ki dis is one of fvrt song wen i feel alone i lstn it n cry hard so dat all my sorrow wl flow away wid my tears. Thank u darling for ading dis song.
Lvly update 😳
m curious to knw wat wl hpn nxt. Update sn
Edited by shonali164 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!!!!
u updated!!!!
nice part yaar...
felt really bad for kalpi,i felt her pain yaar...
story is getting very intresting...
nw i need to wait for 24hours to read next part...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update ! Look forwRd to next part and don't worry music is good makes the mood!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Songs actually bring the effect of serial...
awesome update...dear please puky aur rags ki real waali shaadi mat karva...that too with rasmo riwaaz(as gauri said)...
continue soon..thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update mimi...👏
khabardaar agar raghav aur pakhi ki shaadi karaayi toh dekh lena mai tumhara kya haal karungi samjhi😡

i don mind ur song..but yes don use more than 1 song in an update unless its a festive update or ocassion update ok😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Nice song selection
Pls update soon n thnxs 4 pm

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