Kalpana, Truely an ANGEL Epi-44 updated with note by the author - Page 32

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Posted: 11 years ago
what's this Mimi..you have vanished in thin air! 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
mimi my sweetheart frst of al srry fr nt able to catch up wid angel...😭😭😭...

but am bck nd i read all 4 chapters in one go...😳.. all are amazing ,, right frm marriage to kalpi in disguise... really luved it...awsum.. she will get gauri out of dere.. kslpi s so cahrming nd naughty at d same time... 😆😆...

but aftr readin promo,,😭😭😭... dnt break ragna...plzz... wat has he done😡😡...

update soon... will b wating darlin... nd update othr story too...😳😳...

luv ya😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys after so many days giving an update is a real pleasure. Hope all will enjoy 2day's update😉

Epi-36

Part-1

" Bandh karo ye naach gaanaa!"

Kalpi got dumstricken..

1st - Tera haath hai naa uss buriyaa ko bhagaane me..

3rd- Bhaaiyyo ye larki to gayi isine bhagayaa use...

2nd- Bol kaha hai buriyaa?

Kalpi looks at the 8 goons..

4th- Pakarlo iss larki ko..

Kalpi jumped from the table..Kicked the goons.. And took her gun out.

One goon was about to shoot her but she managed to shoot on his hand and escaped from there. Later she contacted Shekhar and asked had the second part of her plan carried out well.

Shekhar- Haa maine Gouri ji ko bhej diyaa. She will safely reach Mumbai. Indian Police ki responsibility hai wo.

Kalpi-Thanks Shekhar. Tumne mujhe bacha liyaa mai nehi chahti thi ki Gouri maa ko pata chale mai Delhi me hu.

S-Lekin kyu?

K- Something personal

S-I understand.

K-Thanks for understanding me.

S-Ok Bye..

K-Bye..

Kalpi cut the call and looked out of the window. She is seeing the full moon which is shimmering as gold.

K Pov- Raghav tumhaara bohut yaad aa raha hai please call karo. Mai bhi kya demand karti hu wo kya bappa hai ki mai jhat se sochungi wo mujhe phone karega aur wo fat se call karega. Kalpi tujhe hi use call karna parega.

She took the phone to call Raghav.

But suddenly her cell's screen flashed and the name came on her screen was none other than Raghav.

Kalpi picks up the phone.

R-Mujhe hi yaad kar rahi ho naa..

K- Wah Mr kya telepathy hai. Yaha maine socha aur tumne mujhe call kiyaa..

R-After all hamari Rab ne bana di jodi hai

K- Tumhe kabse bhagwaan ke upar bharosa hone laga?

R-Jab se tum mere zindegi me aayi ho..

K-Acchha ji?

R-Ji haa...

K- Waise pata hai..Jab mai tumhaara aawaaz nehi sunti hu naa meri din hi nehi guzarti..

R-Kalpana turning romantic haa..

K-Wo to mai hu..Tum bhi ho jaao..

R-Kya?

K- Romantic..

R-Aapke hukum sarakho par meri princess..Phone loudspeaker pe lo.

K-Kyu?

R-Zyaada saawaal mat pucho bas lo..

K-Jo hukum mere aaka..

Part-2

Raghav starts singing.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zS-g0_wdDRc

R-Tere bin kahan humse jiya jaayega,
Tere bin kahan humse jiya jaayega]- 2 times
Zidd chor di lo aaj keh diya,

K-Tere bin kahan humse jiya jaayega,
Tere bin kahan humse jiya jaayega...

Kalpi smiles thinking about Rags and her time spending with him.

K-Zindagi bhaag kar humse aage chali,
Thaam lo naa hume chand taaro tale,
Haaa.. zindagi bhaag kar humse aage chali,
Thaam lo naa hume chand taaro tale,

Tears moistened her cheeks..

Raghav thinks about the night Kalpi gave him the most beautiful surprise to him.

R-Tode daali tanhai hai, ab mohabbat rutt aayi hai,
Zidd chor di lo aaj keh diya,
Tere bin kahan humse jiya jaayega,

K-Tere bin kahan humse jiya jaayega...

This part of the lyrics is played-Heyyy..heee..heeeyyy..heee... with music.

At that time flashback-

Raghav caressed Kalpi's face with his hands and picked her with his hands and laid her on the bed then he kissed her neck she kissed Raghav's cheeks. Raghav was laid below her he opened the the dori of her blouse with his hands and unbuttoned the hooks of her blouse..

Kalpi kissed Raghav's lips. Finishing the lip kiss Raghav removed her pallu and kissed her profusely.They pressed their hands.

Flashback ends-

Both smiled thinking about their magical night.

R- Jaane kitne baras dhoop mein main chala,
Tum mile jis ghadi jaise badal mila,
Haaa...jaane kitne baras dhoop mein main chala,
Tum mile jis ghadi jaise badal mila,

Tears flowed from Rags eyes..

Kalpi understood Raghav's heart.

K- Barso naa toot ke zara, bheeg jaaye maan yeh baawara,
Zidd chor di lo aaj keh diya,
Tere bin kahan humse jiya jaayega,
Tere bin kahan humse jiya jaayega...

Raghav understood that Kalpi had got his heart..

R- Barso naa toot ke zara, bheeg jaaye maan yeh baawara,
Zidd chor di lo aaj keh diya,
Tere bin

K- kahan humse

R- jiya jaayega,
Tere bin kahan humse

K- jiya jaayega...

R- I love u..

K-I love u too..

R-Good night..

K-Sweet dreams

R- Don't worry I always have sweet dreams about u..

K-Ok Bye..

Part-3

Mumbai

Chawl-

Gouri- Haa Vitthal.. Ye sach hai Mai tumhaare Singhaania seth ki patni hu..Aur tumhaare seth ka khoon kisi aur ne nehi Kapoors ne ki hai..

Vithhal-Kya???

G- Haa Vitthal.. Mujhe mere bet eke paas jaana hai Raghav ke paas jaana hai.

V- Thik hai taai hum kal Raghav baba ke paas jaayenge. Abhi bohut raat ho gayi hai Kamala bhi nehi hai Paakhi ke saath raat bitaane gayi hai. Aap chintaa mat kijiye taai ye Vitthal aapke saath hai Seth ko insaaf dilaake rahenge.

Vitthal made Gouri to sleep. He came out to the balcony.

V pov- Ye Kapoors khooni hai. Pehle mere seth ko maara fir saara dosh mujhpar de diyaa. Lekin kehte hai naa sacchhai ek din saamne aa hi jaata hai. Kapoors ke din khatam ho gaye. Shukar hai Kamala nehi thi yaha nehi to use bohut bura lagta ye sab sunke. Jo bhi karna hai Singhania seth ko insaaf dilaane ke liye mai karunga.

Precap-

Vitthal- Raghav baba mujhe aapse kisiko milaana hai.

Rags- Kisse?

V- Taii andar aayiye..

R-Mom..

Raghav stares at Gouri.

Hope u guys liked today's epi. And as always give me your feed backs and likes !

LOVE U ALL !❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres
awsm part. Lv rgna singing song n deir telepathy 😳
"Abhi bohut raat ho gayi
hai Kamala bhi nehi hai Paakhi ke saath
raat bitaane gayi hai." mimi iska kya matlb he 🤣
cntn soon
Edited by shonali164 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mimi...I am so-2 happy reading ur FF's update after so-2 many days. 😃🤗 Loved each and every part, especially the song n flashback part. 😳 I am in a hurry right now...so ll give a detailed comment tomorrow.😃 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tune late update kiya...ab mein late reply doongi..😆😆
Res bada waala..

Unres..
Superb update..
Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

awsum update mimi. it felt so gud reading dis update...missed u baby🤗

.. luvd d song nd flashbck... 😳😳... kalpana gttin gouri out of dere ws fab😳 ...

cnt wait to read more.. jaldi update karna😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
mimi ki bacchi chodungi nahi mai tujhe...itna chota update vo bhi itne dino ke baad...jaa baat nahi karti mai tujhse huh🥱
update is as usual fabulous👏

but i am katti with u 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
4 ever1-
Guys don't bsh me since revenge started from 2day. Dn't wry I will try my best 2 make it interesting
Keep patience..
Urs
Mimi😉

Epi-37

Part-1

Next Morning..

Vitthal came to Rags flat..

R- Are Vitthal uncle..Aap yaha..

Vitthal- Raghav baba mujhe aapse kisiko milaana hai.

Rags- Kisse?

V- Taii andar aayiye..

R-Mom..

Raghav stares at Gouri.

G- Vitthal kya yehi mera Chintu hai?

V- Haa taai.. Yehi aapke aur seth kaa beta hai..

R- Vitthal uncle aap inhe yaha kyu leke aaye hai? Inhone mujhe aur dad ko chor diyaa. Inhe itne saalo tak mera yaad nehi aaya. Aaj achnak..

G-Achanak kuch bhi nehi Chintu. Mere yaaddaash chali gayi thi.

R-Kyaa?

V- Haa Raghav baba. Itne saalo tak inka khayal humne hi rakha tha.

R- Lekin aapki yaaddaash gayi kaise mom?

G- Kapoors ke wajah se..!!

R-Kapoors ke wajah se?

G- Beta tumhaare dad ko Kapoors ne hi maara tha. Aur mujhe bhi maarnaa chaahte the lekin mera accident ho gaya aur unn logo ne socha meri mout ho gayi. Lekin meri memory lost ho gayi aur galti se hi sahi mujhe Vitthal aur Kamala mil gaye. Jinhone meri bis saal tak khayal rakha.

Raghav ki aankhe laal ho chuke the.

R-Kapoors ki itni himmat.

V-Beta Kapoors itne me hi nehi ruke. Kuch dino se taai pe jo hamle ho rahe the naa wo Kapoors hi karwa rahe the.

R-Mom unn logo ne aapko bhi maarne ki koshish ki?

G-Haa beta..

R-Mom mai unhe chorunga nehi.

G-Haa beta unn logo ne hamare pure pariwaar ko bikhar diyaa. Hum unhe inn sab ki saza dilwaake rahenge.

V- Aur mai bhi aapk dono ke saath hu. Hum Singhania seth ko insaaf dilaake rahenge.

6 days later.

Night-

Kalpi at night standing near the window..

Trying to call Raghav..

K-Kya baat hai Raghav phone kyu nehi uthaa raha hai ?

Raghav looks at the screen of his cell ...His eyes are filled with tears..

R to himself- Sorry Kalpi mai tumhaare bharose ko kayam nehi rakh paaya..Jab tumhe pata chalega...

And tears rolled out from his eyes...

K- Pichle che dino se mai use contact karne ki koshish kar rahi hu. Magar ye hai ki mera ek call bhi nehi uthaa raha hai. Ise kya idea bhi nehi hai uske liye mai kitni tension me hu. Chalo shukar hai kal ghar jaa rahi hu. Waha jaane ke baad direct Raghav ke ghar me jaake prakat hungi.

Part-2

Next Day-

Kalpi reached chawl..

Kalpi came inside..

She remembered how Abhimanyu and Divya made her eat all her favorite dishes and then only allowed her to go.

K-Aai..

Kamala- Kalpi tu aa gayi.

Suddenly Kamala remembers she is cooking some food in gas and it is burning so she went to stir it without putting asecond glance at Kalpi.

Vitthal- Kalpu.. tu aa gayi. Tere bis din kaise kate? Achhi tarah se yaa nehi?

K- Baba meri vacation best gayi.

Pakiya came and hugged Kalpi.

P- Kalpu kaash tu mujhe bhi apne saath leke jaati.. Mai bhi ghum aata. Waise tujhe kuch important batana hai.

K-Kya dada?

P- Bataungaa.. Pehle tu fresh hoja..

V- Aaccha Pakiyaa tu kabse itna acchha ban gaya?

P- Kyaa baba aap bhi?

Kalpi went near Kamala..

Kal-Aai tu kya bana rahi hai?

Kam- Meri beti ko jo jo pasand hai wahi bana rahi hu..

Kalpi smiled and went to washroom.

Part-3

Kalpi came out of the bathroom.

K-Baba Gouri maa kaha hai?

Kamala- Beta tere baba ne taai ko Raghav baba ke ghar me rakhke aaye hai.

Kal- Kyu? Gouri maa yaha bhi reh sakti thi naa?

V- Beta wo tere Raghav baba ke maa hai. Isliye!

K-Kya??

Kam- Haa beta kitni ajeeb baat hai naa itne saalo tak hume pata hi nehi chala wo Raghav baba ke aai hai.Wo to shukar hai Vitthal ko yaad aa gaya ki Raghav baba ke aai koi aur nehi taai hai. Isliye unhe hum waha chor aaye. Aur Raghav baba bhi unhe pehchaan gaye.

K pov- To mera shak theek nikla taai Raghav ke hi mom hai!

Suddenly Paakhi entered.

P- Kamala maa. Mai aa gayi lunch karne..

Everyone sat for lunch..

Kalpi saw everything was made of Paakhi's choice. She felt sorry for herself.

K pov- Ek taraf mom hai jo meri saari khushiyo ka khayal bachpan se rakhti hai aur dusri taraf aayi jinhe ye bhi yaad nehi raha mai ghar kitne dino baad aayi.

Kamala saw Kalpi and understood she is upset.

Kam- Saary beta.. Wo do dino me Paakhi ki shaadi ki rasme shuru hone waali hai naa isliye Paakhi ko khaane pe bulaaya aur saare uske man pasand khaane banaye.

Kalpi fell from sky..

Kal-Kyaa?? Paakhi teri shaadi ..Kiske saath?

P- Guess kar?

K-Paheli mat bujhaa naam bata?

P- Suspense torti hu Raghav ke saath..

Kalpi's face features hardened.

Kalpi-Kya?

Precap- Kalpi sitting at balcony.Pakya came.

Kalpi rubbed her tears.

K- Dada aap mujhse kuch imp kehnaa chaahte the naa. Kya?

P- Kalpu mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai aur mera ek girl friend bhi hai...

K- Kya????

Hope u guys liked today's epi. And as always give me your feed backs and likes !

LOVE U ALL !❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Mimi...as a reader its hard to bear Pakhi's name with Raghav...but as a writer I know its an essential element for a few days. Besides I trust our forum writers and my sweet Mimi that they'll never separate Ragna d way CVs did. n now I am looking forward to Kalpi's real identity being revealed infront of Raghav, I guess I am going to enjoy that clash! 😆 n plzz kuchh karo na...Kalpi ko chawl se nikal k permanent usk doosre parents k yaha transfer karwa do. 😃
In short liked today's update. 😊😃

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