Kalpana, Truely an ANGEL Epi-44 updated with note by the author

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I hope Kalpi will be the First to realize that Gauri is Raghav's Mother... :) continue soon

Edited by sinalfan6 - 11 years ago

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Diya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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interesting story...continue soon..😊

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Unisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Epi-4

Part-1

Kalpi- Taai...

Gouri- Kalpi...

Gouri runs and hugs her.

Kalpi- Kya baat hai taai. Aap chilla kyu rahi hai?

Taai- Call the police Kalpi woh dono khuni hai...khuni hai

Kalpi- Taai kaun khuni hai?

Taai- Wo aadmi aur uske saath wo aurat jise teri aai memsaab kehti hai.

Kalpi- Kya?? Taai aap rest kijiye. ( She made Gouri to lay down on the bed) Taai aap chinta mat kijiye aapki beti hai naa. Aap bohut restless ho gayi hai aur ye aapki health ke liye acchha nehi hai.

Taai- Wo bhaag jayenge! Kalpi tu to mujhe biswas karti hai naa?

Kalpi-Taai mai aapki beti hu duniya jhoot bol sakti hai lekin aap...kabhi nehi.

Gouri feels comfortable and she sleeps. Kalpi notices the folding chair was on floor a an earing was also there.

Outside the chawl gate-

Neetu- Sahil aaj hum baar baar bache.

Then remembers when kalpi came inside the room they both were hiding near the door. As she entered and got busy with Gouri to make her comfortable they both slipped out.

S- Neetu tumhe aana hi nehi chahiye tha. Jaha tum hoti ho waha kuch sahi ho hi nehi sakta.

N- Mere kandhe par sara dosh mat do khud to kuch bhi nehi kar sakte. Kaha socha tha Kamala hamare ghar, Vitthal Kalpi kaam pe. Lekin ye Kalpi kuch jyaada hi humdardi dikha rahi hai Gouri ke liye.

S- Aakhir wo Kamala bai ki beti hai. Ab chalo yaha se kisine dekh liya t musibat ho jaayegi.

They both sit in the car and left being unaware of the fact that Pakya had seen them though not heard their conversation.

Part-2

Kalpi getting bored. Taai sleeping.

Kalpi- Yaar. Kya karu? TV bhi on nehi kar sakti taai so rahi hai.

Suddenly Taai words bang her head.

[Kalpi- Kya baat hai taai. Aap chilla kyu rahi hai?

Taai- Call the police Kalpi woh dono khuni hai...khuni hai

Kalpi- Taai kaun khuni hai?

Taai- Wo aadmi aur uske saath wo aurat jise teri aai memsaab kehti hai.]

Kalpi thinks- Taai ne Neetu aunty ke baare me baat ki. Wo aur taai ka kya rishta ho sakta hai?

Neetu Kapoor taai pe itna interested kyu hai. Kabhi doctor bhej deti hai to kabhi unki treatment ka kharch uthaana chahti hai. Kya Neetu Kapoor unki asli pehchaan jaanti hai? Agar jaanti hai to hume kyu nehi bataya? Unhe hamare saath kyu rehne diya? "Interesting. Kuch to baat hai!"

Suddenly Pakya enters to keep a packet and heard Kalpi's words

P- Kya interesting hai Kalpu?

K-Kuch nehi.

P-Kya baat hai?

Kalpi to divert Pakya's attention says- Arre nehi dada wo Mujhe lagta hai taai bhi Neetu kapoor ki tarah amir hai.Sirf memory lost ke wajah se...

P-Hamare sar pe char ke baith gayi hai. Angreji Baai( He starts laughing)

K- Dada dheere Taai so rahi hai.

P- Arre Kalpu achanak yaad aaya ye Neetu kapoor yaha kisliye aayi thi wo bhi apne husband ke saath?

K- Kya? Neetu Kapoor aur Sahil uncle yha pe?

P- Kyu tu unse nehi mili?

K- Nehi dada.

P- Ajeeb baat hai. Shayed uss Manda taai se milne aayi hogi. Mai apne dosto ke saath bahar jaa raha hu tu taai ka khayal rakhna.

K- Lekin aayi ne to tujhe kaha tha naa

P- Arre tujhe nehi pata India me Right To Equality naam ki bhi kuch chij hai. Larka-Larki barabar isliye kaam bhi barabar.

Then he ran away.

K-Ye dada bhi naa. Lekin Neetu Kapoor Manda taai se milne ke liye Sahil uncle ko kyu saath me leke aayengi. Daal me kuch to kaala hai.

Part-3

Evening

Raghav in his room.thinks- Kitni der ho gayi lekin Kalpi ne ek call bhi nehi kiya.Ab sabar nehi hota Mai hi ek call kar leta hu.

He calls her.

Chawl

Taai and Kalpi talking about Raghav aka Kalpi's boss aka Kalpi's new bf.

K- Pata hai taai wo pehle mujhpe bohut gussa karte the. Hum dono ek dusre ke aakho me phooti kori nehi suhaate the. Pata hi nehi chala kab dushman apna ban gaya.

T- 80 percent cases aise hi hote hai. U know naa Opposite attracts!

Suddenly Kalpi's phone rings. Raghav name flashes!

K- taai unhi ka call hai.

T- Utha lo Boys ke paas Patience naam ka cheej bohut kam hota hai.

Kalpi picks the phone and went to the balcony.

K- Kya baat hai. Bohut yaad aa rahi thi meri

R- Kyu chahiye? Tumhe to meri yaad hi nehi aati ghar pohuchke inform bhi nehi kiya ki tum sahi salamat pohuchi ho ya nehi. Kitna tension hua mujhe.

K-Acchha baba sry! Second time se nehi hoga. I promise!

R-Its ok!

Inside

Suddenly Gouri notices Raghav's abacus on the top of the TV set. She goes and picked it.

Outside-

K- Achha ab phone rakhti hu gharme mere aur taai ke siwaai koi nehi hai. Aapke saath baat karne ki chakkar me wo akele baithi hai.

R- thik hai

K- Aapki aawaz aisi lag rahi hai jaise aap upset ho gaye

R- Koi baat nehi. Unhe tumhaari jaroorat hai. Waise tumne sahi bola. Tumhe pata kaise chala mai upset hu?

K- Kyuki mai aapko aapse bhi jyaada behtar jaanti hu. Ok bye!

R-Bye!

Kalpi comes inside and saw the abacus in Gouri's hand.

K- Taai ye bachpan me mere BF ne diya tha. Use uske dad ne diya tha.

Gouri smiles and says.

G- Pata hai KAlpi mere pati ne aisa hi ek abacus Chintu ko bhi diya tha. Kitna khush tha wo. Wo abacus wo kisiko chune tak bhi nehi deta tha.

Kalpi strangely looks at Gouri then says- Pata hai mera BF ne jab ise mujhe diya tha usne kaha tha use ye uske dad ne diya tha isliye wo kisiko chune bhi nehi deta tha sirf mujhe gift kia tha kyuki use lagta tha mujhe iski jaroorat hai aur mujhe maths me improve kar sakta hai.

Taai and Kalpi staring at each-other.

Precap- An employee saying Raghav raped her. Pakhi being a feminist supported her. Would Kalpi stand against Raghav or with him? Did he really rape her? To find out stay tuned.

Guys after so many days I updated Sry 4 dat. If u like it I will continue definately.

Promise😊

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sonia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

amazin update... watin eagerly fr nxt...

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Unisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Thank you guys 4 reading the updates.

Epi-5

Part-1

Night- 1:30 a.m.

Chawl

Kalpi stands on the balcony. In her hand was the gold earring which she found near the folding chair on the floor.

Kalpi thinks- Ye earring bohut costly hai. Gold ki hai. I am 100 percent sure ye chawl ke kisiko belong nehi karta. To ye definately Neetu Kapoor ki hai. Lekin wo hamare ghar kyu aayi thi? Aai to unke yaha hi puri din thi agar unhe kuchdena hota to wo waha bhi de sakti thi. To wo taai ke liye, Sahil Kapoor bhi. Khuni, Taai unn dono ko khuni kyu keh rahi thi?

Kalpi says to herself- Pata lagake rahungi aakhir maanjhraa kya hai.

Then she went inside and slept.

Kapoor's Mansion

Neetu and Sahil in the house bar, drinking.

N- Sahil kuch to karna hi parega.

S-Haa! Ye Gouri nehi to hume chain se rehne nehi degi.

Suddenly the couple noticed their son Prem, who was coming towards them with a smiling face. Neetu was pleased to see smile in his face.

N- Chocopie aaj itne dino baad tu smile kar raha hai.

P- Haa mom! Waise aap dono ke andar mera bhoot ghus gaya hai jo aap dono itna drink kar rahe hai?

S- Lagta hai tumhaara muffin bohut khush hai!

P- Yes dad! Kal kuch bohut bara hoga wo bhi hamara profit me.

S- Acchha?

N- Aisa kya kar diya mere muffin ne?

P-Bohut kuch kia hai mom. Just wait and watch. ( And he gave a mischievous smile.)

Part-2

Next day-

Kamala was packing Kalpi's tiffin.

Kalpi- Baba aaj aapko kaam me nehi jaana parega isse accha aur kya ho sakta hai?

V- Lekin meri rajkumari to jaa rahi hai naa. Usse dukh ki baat aur kya ho sakti hai?

Kalpi- Baba ! thik hai aaj mai thori late karke jaaungi.

V-Lekin...

Kalpi-Lekin vekin kuch nehi baba.

V-Accha thik hai

Kamala- Vitthal mai chalti hu

V- Haa jaa Tujhe aur to kuch kaam nehi hai.

Kamala- Vitthal!

Taai ,Pakya and Kalpi laughed and Kamala went to Kapoors mansion

Singhania Construction Main Office

Pakhi apne dhun me andar jaa rahi hai- Aaj pata nehi Mr. Aashiq kya kar rahe hai?

Suddenly she saw a crowd in the centre of the office and she stops.

Pakhi to herself- Ye sab kya hai?

Part-3

Kalpi reached office at 10:30 a.m.

Kalpi- Aaj Raghav tujhe kahika nehi chorega. Bhale hi wo tera Bf hai fir bhi tera boss hai.

She stopped seeing the crowd . Then she heard a voice shouting - Raghav Singhania haai haai! Raghav Singhania Haai Haai!

Kalpi recognizes the voice. She blabbers," Ye to Pakhi ki aawaz hai."

Then she observes press, news paper reporters , cameras, etc.

She pushes the crowd and saw Pakhi relaxing Alka who has joined as Raghav's P.A . and just one month passed out after she joined. Kalpi went near them and turned towards Pakhi.

K-Paakhi ye sab kya ho raha hai?

Pakhi took Kalpi to a corner to explain every thing. Alka was with her other supporters.

Pakhi said crying.

P- Kalpi Raghav sir acchhe insaan nehi hai.

K- Kya?

P- Haa mujhe bhi itna hi jhatka laga jab maine ye suna lekin ye confirm hai.

K- Acchha ye to bata unhone kia kya hai?

P-Bolne me bhi sharam aati hai. Alka unka new PA jiska sirf ek mahina hua hai join karne ke baad. Uske saath..uske saath...

K- Uske saath kya??

P- Uske saath zabardasti ki.

K- What???

P- Haa! Mai bhi tut gayi thi ye sunke. Raghav aisa bhi ho sakta hai. Lekin ye sach hai ek source se pata chala hai unhone America me bhi ek larki ke saath ye sab kiya.

Kalpi ke face ko dekhkar koi bhi keh sakta tha uska ek mutthi aasmaan usi ke upartut para tha.

P- Lekin maine apne aap ko samhaal liya. Tu chinta mat kar. Kamala mai kehti hai sahi ka saath dena chahiye. Isliye maine soch liya. Alkako justice dilwaake rahungi.

And she left to guide the crowd. Lekin Kalpi, she was standing as a statue without any motion visible in her. She was dumbstruck.

Precap- Raghav's cabin.

Raghav, Sammy and Kalpi.

K- Kyat um kal hotel gaye the?

Raghav mum.

K- Maine pucha kal kya tum Dreamland hotel gaye the?

S- Choro naa Kalpana Raghav...

K- Ruko Sammy mai Raghav se puch rahi hu.

R- Tum bhi inme biswas karti ho?

K- Maine hamesha se sahi ka saath diya hai aur aaj bhi wahi karoongi. Kya kal tum...

R- Haa! Kal mai hotel gaya tha.

She left Raghav's cabin in a rush. Both Sammy and Raghav cannot stop her.

If u guys like it and encourage me with ur comments I will definately continue. Stay tuned since u all will get a promo soon with the upcoming Epi.

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souhasini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Plz update soon .kalpi willnt doubt raghav na. Kalpi shd do something to prove the innocence of raghav

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Unisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

PROMO-

A big room in an office.

Kalpana is standing near the window and talking with a girl named Anne.

A- Yaar! Ek baat to bata tu itni bari company ki owner hai fir bhi Singhania Constructions me kaam kar rahi hai. Kyu?

K- Kyuki mai aai ko proof karna chahti thi ki mai struggle bhi kar sakti hu job paane ke liye. Lekin jab maine waitress ki job join ki unhone Raghav ke yaha mere liye job maang li thi. Isliye maine waha join kia. Aur ab mai waha isliye ruki hui hu because I love him. Actually I wanted to show her and everyone that one can fight and have better place though the position of MD comes to me in the silver spoon.

A- Really! Maanna parega tujhe.

Kalpana smiled. And Anne left the room.

Kalpana says to herself- Kabhi bhi kisibhi chij ki mujhe kami nehi hui. Lekin iss empire ke princess ko har situation me dhalna uske mom and dad ne bachpan se sikhaaya hai. Love u mom and dad. Best parents one could ever had. Aapki guriya jaldi apne empire ko nayi pankh degi uss aasmaan me urrne ke liye. Promise!

Kis empire ki Kalpana ne baat ki? Kya hai uski parents ki raaz.

To know the story stay tuned. Interesting twists and turns r waiting 4 the readers😃