New SS on Ragna-Chap 34 updated on page 113- No PM - Page 56

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_

Awesome update... Kalpi is beginning to be herself again in front of Raghav... Raghav as 50 yr old owner of Singh stores lol...

Update soon

Thanks for liking it😊

Originally posted by: balarangarajann

You are a fab writer.So don't lose the confidence and the patience within you.

And you are very much with the flow of the ff.

Why doesn't Kalpi understand that she can't be a fake wifey all the time.specially with a person

with whom she was madly in love once upon a time??????.

And Raghav is doing his prayachit sincerely,So he deserves a second chance.

For a change ,we are enjoying the psycho - non psycho bonding very much.

And Raghav ,as a 50 year old man is too funny to even imagine.Pls post a snap of Ashu as Raghav,a 50 year old man.

Kalpi's knows very well,that by just mentioning the name Samrat,Raghav will agree to do literally

everything.

We want to see more of Ragna - Hiya bonding.And make Purba to come out of coma soon.As

the poor child Neel is missing his real mom'

ATLEAST FROM NOW ONWARDS ,GIVE US REGULAR UPDATES AND TIE A FEW UNLOOSE ENDS.

IF POSSIBLE,START A NEW RAGNA OR SAKHI FF WITH NO PSYCHO EFFECT.

Hi bala( I don't know your real name ) Thanks for liking it😊. And Purba will come out of coma soon but I don't know Neel will chose his real mom or Kalpana. I have not decided it and I believe Kalpana' s love for neel is no less than that of Purba's and Neel love both her mother equally. A child is like wet soil which take shape of mould easily . so it will be hard for him to leave Kalpana. about starting a new ff, I do have a concept in my mind but again it is not Ragna love story but of complicated Ragna relationship. and I think i have already tortured you all enough with complicated relationships in my all ff/ss and I am not giving u regular updates of those. So, I will try not to start a new ff to torture everyone.

Originally posted by: sampa79

Superb update

Thanks for liking it😊

heyylloo dear..

Beautiful update
Kalpi plan to patch up Prem and Jiya was awesome
I can only imagine how cute Raghav must have look as a 50 year old man lol
His acting sucks big time lol
Hope Kalpi can differentiate between Raghav acting and his real feelings
I feel bad for him after hearing Kalpi words
Pakya and Amrita conversation was amazing and she is right only RagNa has the power to set everything right between them without any interference

pLS.. Update Soon..!!!! I am loving this FF more and more as I read chapters..!! :D

PLS BEAR WITH OUR TORTURE FOR THE FURTHER UPDATES.

lovely update and i am just waiting for the next update its just going fabulous hats off to u

Pls Saanjh,update soon.

Chap 29:

Love and care are very strong feelings. These feelings do not fade away easily and Pakya realizes it today. After hearing about Raghav from Amrita, he feels bad for him. He is feeling sorry for the same person whom he hated from last 10 years. Her sister had everyone with her. His sister had lived this 10 years hating and loathing Raghav's existence and this became her strength. Yes Raghav also has his family but he had to live with his own guilt of betraying his love. It is easy to live with hatred but it is hard to live with penance. He stayed away from his love, his own daughter. He did a mistake maybe committed a sin. Maybe he deserves what he faced. But still Pakya is feeling bad for Raghav and he knows his sister well. It will not be easy for his sister to accept Raghav back. But he can pray for the people whom he loves and cares for. Hope they will find happiness with each other.

This morning is little different in Singhania mansion as today is Sunday. Kalpana and Pakhi are instructing servants to pack foods and other stuffs. Hiya, Neel and Trisha are getting ready for picnic. Kalpana calls Ria and Samrat to confirm whether they are coming or not and Pakhi have convinced Prem and Jiya to join. Pakya and amrita are not joining them as Amrita needs rest and Pakya wants to take care of his wife. He had already ignored her too much and now her wife needs him. But they have forced Kamla to join the picnic.

Everyone leave for the picnic. Raghav has booked whole resort for the picnic. They reach the resort. Hiya, Neel and Trisha get busy in playing. Kamla and Gouri see their grand children playing and starts talking on various things. Sammy does not miss the chance of being alone with his wife Pakhi. Prem and Jiya also do not miss the chance. They have so many things to plan for their marriage. To Raghav's pleasure, Kalpana is not talking to Samrat but she is busy in talking with Riya who is little upset. Samrat is looking at his wife. He can see the sadness in his eyes. He looks at Riya who is staring at children. He can understand her pain, her longing but he can't accept anyone in his family. No, they don't need a child. They are happy with each other.

Suddenly Neel falls on the ground and screams in pain. Kalpana and riya rush towards her but before that, Raghav has already reached to him. He helps Neel to stand. Neel who has twisted his ankle is crying in pain. Raghav and Kalpana try to pacify him. Hiya's eyes get teary seeing her brother in pain. Raghav gestures Kalpana to handle Hiya and He will take care of Neel. Raghav tries to touch Neel's ankle and a shrill scream escapes from Neel's mouth.

Raghav: Neel, you are my strong boy. Now don't scream. Let me see your ankle.

Neel (in teary voice) : It is paining bade papa.

Raghav: I know. Now , let me check.

And Raghav twisted his ankle with little force and Neel screams loudly. Kalpana gets angry seeing this. She starts shouting on Raghav without giving him a chance to explain.

Kalpana : How can you do this Raghav? You did this to Neel so that your picnic plan does not get spoiled. How can you be so heartless? How can you hurt a child who calls you badepapa. You know what Bade Papa means? I know he is not your son that does not mean you will hurt him like this. But why am I accusing you? It is my fault. How can I trust you with Neel?

Raghav is hurt hearing Kalpana's accusation. In one moment, She has broken the bond which he shares with Neel. He is hearing Kalpana's every accusation silently in front of his whole family. Kamla wants to stop Kalpana as she knows that today her daughter gone very far in accusing Raghav. She is not looking at Neel who is not in pain anymore.

Kalpana : I hate you. More than that, I hate myself for trusting you again.

Kalpana suddenly feels a soft touch on her hand and she looks at Neel.

Neel : Me,why are you shouting on bade papa. He made my leg fine. See, it is not paining anymore. Bade papa planned picnic as me and di wanted this.' Neel's eyes are full of tears once again

Hiya in teary voice :' Mumma, Why are you shouting on papa. You always say that shouting on anyone is bad.

Kalpana does not know what to answer. And she hears Raghav s voice "Your mom gets afraid seeing Neel like this. She can't see tears in both of your eyes. Now be careful while playing."

Raghav leaves from their not saying anything to Kalpana. Gouri and Pakhi also leave from there not saying anything to Kalpana. Sammy says to Kalpana : Raghav and I had gone for many trekking trips and we are specially trained to handle these type of hurt. Raghav is an expert, Kalpana'. Saying So, Sammy goes leaving behind a guilty Kalpana. Kalpana looks at her aai and her aai gestures her to rectify her mistake. Kalpana runs behind Raghav to ask sorry for his behaviour. Riya leaves with Kamla Ma but Samrat follows his friend to help her.

Kalpana comes behind Raghav but Raghav ignores her.

Kalpana : I am sorry Raghav.

Raghav : For what?

Kalpana : For saying all these words .

Raghav : Why are you saying sorry for the things which you believe. You never believed that I can care for Neel in the same way I care for Hiya.

Kalpana stammers: It is not like that, Raghav.

Raghav : Then what is it Kalpana? I know Neel is not my blood but he is my son because you are his mother. He is part of your life and he automatically becomes my family. You have not given birth to Neel but still you are his mother. Then why do I have to prove again and again that I am his father.

Kalpana : I am sorry Raghav. Please forgive me.

Raghav : How can I forgive you Kalpana when there is not a little bit trust between us. You will again accuse me for something and that too in front of my children.

Kalpana : I know I did a mistake but I was afraid for Neel. I can't see him in pain. Please forgive me.

Raghav : Give me some time. I need to think about our relation. It is not working.

Kalpana is dumbstruck hearing it. He wants to think about their relationship, their marriage and today she can't accuse him for the same. Today, she is at fault. She controls the tears which are threatening to spill. She has done a mistake and she has to rectify it.

Samrat who was following Kalpana hears their argument. He wants to console Kalpana but he knows right now Kalpana needs to be alone. He leaves from there but Raghav's words are ringing in his ears. Indeed, Raghav is right. Relations of heart are more powerful than that of blood. Neel is not Raghav's son but he loves him. Then why can't he accept an orphan as his child. The child will get a family and their family will also get completed. Samrat rushes to Ria.

Samrat : I have decided Ria. We will adopt him and I promise I will be a very good father.

Ria does not say a word. Tears are streaming down on cheeks but these tears are of happiness. Ria hugs Samrat tightly : I love you. I love you.

Raghav is sitting alone in a corner of the resort. Today, she insulted him in front of his children. She does not trust him and she never will. Their relationship is just a compromise and it will remain like this. Only, he is trying to save this relationship. But now he had enough. He can't let Kalpana insult him like this. He loves Kalpana but it does not mean she will insult him whenever she wants.

Kalpana is feeling guilty and miserable. She has accused Raghav wrongly. She had seen Raghav's care and love for Neel. Raghav is never partial. His love and care for Neel is not a bit less than his love and care for Hiya. Raghav is right. She never trusted him. She has never tried to understand him. She has forgiven him but never forgets their past. She just tried to be his wife, not his companion or friend.

Kalpana comes to Raghav. Raghav tries to leave from there.

Kalpana : Please listen to me once, Raghav.

Raghav : I don't think you have anything more to tell.

Kalpana : I am sorry for not trusting you and I am not asking sorry for this incidence. I know our relationship is not working but I still want you to give our relationship a chance for our children's sake.

Here she comes again. This relationship is important for her just because of Hiya and Neel. Raghav could not hold his anger any more: I know this, Kalpana. You don't have to remind me this again and again that you married me for Hiya and Neel's sake. They are children now and they did not understand your outburst today. But when they will grow up, they will understand that our relationship is nothing but a compromise. This will be bad for them and their future. I don't want their lack of trust on this sacred relationship. So, It is better..

Kalpana cuts him in mid: I know. But can't we start once again from scratch. Can't we be friends again, Raghav.

Kalpana extends her hand in anticipation. Raghav who was angry and hurt over Kalpana can't ignore her extended hand. He knows in his heart that he can't stay away from Kalpana. He can't end this relationship though this relationship is a compromised one. Raghav grabs her hand immediately.

Kalpana : I am Kalpana but my friends and family call me Kalpi. Can we be friends?

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