RagNa (AshNa) FF: You Are a Star ~COMPLETED PAGE 89~ NOTE Page 90 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome story, different from most others. I like the new angle, cant wait for the next update.
Please do not keep us waiting too long..
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awesome plz update next part!!
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This is interesting! Pls update soon!
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Part 2:


The next morning Kalpi got up early as she had an interview at the
Raizaada Group of Industries. As she sat down at the breakfast table her mom shoved a plate of garma garam parathas towards her. "Kha" Kamla ordered. Kalpi nodded as she broke off a piece to taste it. "Mmm nice, Ai" she said cheerfully.
Kalpana didn't like to show her feelings so she was always pretended to be cheerful. Kalpi had just finished a paratha and was about to take another one when Kamla pulled the plate away. "Interview keliye tujhe late hona hai kya?" Kamla asked shaking her head. "Lekeen Ai, voh-" "Le Pakhya ye extra paratha tu khale" Kamla said handing it to him. Kalpi looked down sadly. Most mothers held their children back so they could finish their breakfast properly but Kamla was so eager for her to become a memsaab she was pushing her away. "Acha Ai, bye" Kalpi said with a smile. "Haan bye behta" Kamla said while she set Vitthal's collar straight. She didn't shoot Kalpi a second look as she went out the door.
Outside she met Paakhi. "Tu yahaan Paakhi?" Kalpi asked. "Tujhe kya laga.. ki mein tujhe uss company mein akeli kaam karne deti" Paakhi said. "Mein bhi tere saath kaam kar ri hoon." "Acha lekeen tumaara interview time-" "Arre Kalpi mere aur Samar ke dads friends hai to Samar ke dad ne mujhe automatically job de di" Paakhi said. "Oh ok" Kalpi said. This was the difference between rich and poor. She would have to give an interview for the same job Paakhi got just for knowing Samar's dad. Of course, Kalpi had nothing against Paakhi. She was her best friend who had supported her throughout her childhood. Whenever Kamla would mistreat her, Paakhi would be at her side.
Paakhi came to the office along with Kalpi and before Kalpi went in Paakhi wished her all the best. Kalpi smiled and went in. "Sit" said a handsome and dashing man sitting on a black chair. Kalpi nodded and sat. "Well" said Samar. "Meine tumaare past records check kiye hai and I must say I'm impressed." "Thank you, Sir" Kalpi said. "You're a topper and that's what we need" Samar went on. "So you've got the job as supervisor." Kalpi smiled. "Thank you, sir." "Nuh uh, you may call me Sammy from now on" Sammy said with a smile. Kalpi nodded and got up. "In two days there is a party for all the new employees in my mansion and I expect you to be there" Sammy said. "Sure sir" Kalpi said. "Great" Sammy said. "You may leave."

Chawl:

"Party?" Kamla asked Kalpi. "Dekh Kalpi tum baar kaam karne keliye jaati ho usse zyaada nahi." "Lekeen Ai, party mein boht maza aaye ga-" "Meine tumme maze karne keliye nahi paala posa hai" Kamla said strictly. "Tumaara saara focus mere sapne pe hona chahiye."
"Par Ai Sammy sir ne mujhe order diya hai party attend karne keliye" Kalpi said. When she said that she saw her mom look thoughtful. "Acha toh tere boss ne order kiya hai... toh theek hai jaa." Kalpana thanked her mom politely before going back to her room.
She spent most of her days locked in her room as Kamla didn't allow her to go out even in the day time. Even when she had to go to the library Kamla would tell Pakhya to get the books for her. The only thing that kept Kalpi from getting bored were the posters of the movie star Raghav. She would never get bored of looking at his posters. She noticed that his eyes had some pain in them that he was trying very much to hide but the poster had captured it.
Kalpana stretched and lay on her bed. She had two more days before officially joining the office. Just then Kalpi's cell phone started ringing. Paakhi.
"Hello Paakhi" Kalpi answered. "Kalpi kya tu mere saath movie dekhne chali gi" Paakhi asked. "Mein Ai se pooch kar bataati hoon" Kalpi said excitedly and hung up.
"Nahi" Kamla said. "Tu ek ladki hai ladki ban kar raho." "Please Ai" Kalpana pleaded. "Doh dino ke baad toh mujhe office mein hi rehna hai." Kamla thought for a few moments and finally agreed. "Thank you Ai" Kalpi said hugging her mother.
And so the girls went to watch a new movie that had just come out. Of course the hero was Raghav. Kalpi felt a little jealous seeing him with his heroine but thought that it was his job.


Raghav goes straight to Sammy's home after his flight had landed. Sammy welcomed him happily. "Yaar you don't know how happy I am to see you" Sammy said. Raghav grinned. "I am happy as well, Sammy." "Tu mere saathi hi rahega" Sammy said. Raghav nodded. "Veise bhi mein akela rehta hoon" Sammy said. "Veise tumaari vacation kab end ho gi?" "I am taking a break for a few months as I need rest" Raghav said. Sammy nodded. Raghav did do a lot of work. "Only regret is I will get bored" Raghav went on. "Don't have this regret yaar" Sammy said. "Your best friend orders you to spend time in his office." "Great so I'll be working with you" Raghav said.


Two Days Later:

It is Paakhi and Kalpi's first day in their office and they are driving there in Paakhi's car. "I'm nervous" Kalpi said. "Don't be" Paakhi said. "Who cares what others think? And besides.. since when have you been nervous around people?"
"I don't know Paakhi" Kalpana said. "But today my heart is telling me that something big is about to happen." "Well, it's a new job so that's why" Paakhi said. Kalpana nodded though she knew it had nothing to do with that.
Once they got to the office all the new employees were ordered into the meeting room. Sammy came in and started, "Welcome everyone!" "Now I expect you all to work hard." All the employees nodded their heads. "Two main employees that you all will be working under are.." Sammy said. "Ms. Jadhav and Ms. Kapoor. They are our two new supervisors." Everyone nodded their heads politely at Kalpi and Paakhi. After that everyone left but Sammy held Paakhi back. "Now look Paakhi, you may have automatically gotten this job because of my father- but remember I expect you to work hard." Sammy said. "Don't worry, Sammy I will" Paakhi said brightly. Sammy smiled at her. "Thanks."
Today was Raghav's first time visiting Sammy's company since he had returned. As he came in everyone stared at him. 'How rude' Raghav thought. A few girls squealed when they saw him. One girls 'accidentally' bumped into him. 'Yeah right it was an accident' Raghav thought angrily.
He stopped at a cabin thinking it must be Sammy's. He opened the door and went in. Kalpi who was standing by a shelf pulling out a file looked over. She gasped. Her FAVORITE actor was standing before her. Luckily she didn't giggle or squeal like the other girls which made her a little different. "R-Raghav Singhaniya" Kalpana murmured. "What do you suppose you are doing in Sammy's cabin?" Raghav asked arrogantly. Kalpi was still staring at him in shock. He was standing in front of her! This was a dream come true! "V-voh-" Just then Sammy entered. "Raghav my cabin's the other way" he said. "And Kalpana meet my friend Raghav, he'll be working with us for a while." Kalpi nodded still in a shock. Raghav told Sammy to go on ahead and he'll be there in a few seconds.
After Sammy had left, Raghav went up to Kalpi. She had closed her eyes. What a pretty girl she was. He had acted with so many beautiful heroines before but this girl was so innocent looking. 'Raghav why are you paying attention to this unknown girl, stop it!' a voice told him in his head. He snapped his fingers in front of Kalpi's face and she opens her eyes slowly. "Your name" Raghav said. "K-Kalpana Jadhav" she stammered. "Well Ms. Jadhav, I hear you'll be working under me so just know you better be prepared!" Kalpi noticed how he put special emphasis on the work prepared. "Y-ya, sir" she said. He nodded curtly and left from there.

An hour later, Paakhi came into Kalpi's cabin. "Wow Kalpi!!! Your favorite actor is actually going to be working with us!" Kalpi smiled and nodded. "You are so lucky!" Paakhi said. "I wish Hrithik Roshan could come to this office" Paakhi said dreamily.😆 "Paakhi!" Kalpi said. "Not every actor is going to head to this company!" "I was just joking yaar" Paakhi said smilingly. "Anyways let's get out of work early to go shopping for clothes. We need proper clothing for tonight's party." Kalpana nodded excitedly. "Sure!"

In his cabin Sammy told Raghav to join the party tonight so he wouldn't get bored. "Sammy can't I just stay home?" Raghav asked. "But why?" Sammy said. "You know the girls.. how they follow me around, and then the people asking for autographs, it's too much" Raghav said shaking his head. "Well you chose to become an actor" Sammy said grinning. "Whatever" Raghav said. "Don't worry, I'll tell my employees that you're their boss too and they are not to bother you at any cost" Sammy assured him. "Thanks" Raghav said.

Raghav sat in the his cabin and remembered meeting Kalpi. She was so beautiful! 'Oh leave it!' Raghav thought frustratedly. He had just met the girl and already he was thinking about her? Too much!!

The girls got out of work early and went to the mall. Paakhi and Kalpi bought some dresses and makeup. "We'll be looking the best in the party" Paakhi said excitedly. Kalpi rolled her eyes. She didn't care about looks too much.
After Paakhi had dropped her off at home Kalpi went in.
Kamla noticed the bags in her hands. "Tu shopping karne gayi thi?"
"Office ki party keliye kutch kapre chahiye thai" Kalpi said. Kamla smiled. "Theek hai." As Kalpi turned towards her room Kamla said, "Ruk!" "Haan Ai?" Kalpi asked. "Yeh dress tune apne Baba ke peiso (money) se li hai na?" Kamla asked. Kalpi nodded with a smile. "Toh theek hai jab tumaari salary aayegi tum apne Baba ko dress ke peise lutaa dena, theek hai?" Kamla said.
Kalpana's smile faded. Her mother was worrying about the money on the dress. Not that her daughter would look pretty in it. She watched as Kamla went back to chopping onions. Kamla looked up and noticed the tears in Kalpi's eyes. "Tujhe kya hua?" Kamla asked. "Kutch ni bas onions ke vaja se aankhon mein aansoon agaye" Kalpi lied. "Theek hai tu apne kamre mein jaa" Kamla said. Kalpi obliged and went up to her room.

Precap: Everyone watches with wide eyes as two pretty girls enter the party.

Edited by Pookhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have updated. Please do tell me how it was:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful..rags going speechless soon what a scene its gonna be
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww... Ragav hs started falling 4 Kalpi in d 1st sight only...
its awesum...
plzz continue soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
It awesome great work waiting to get another update sorry I m asking so early to get u another but I can't just help drooling over it 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg, cant believe how kamla behaved with her own daughter kalpi, she's behaving like inspector 😛 😆 Please Update Soon!! Cant wait how raghav will react on seeing kalpi in the party! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow wonderful,amazing dear👏 👏 👏 👏
am in luv ❤️with ss
cant wait eager to read next part
plz continue soon

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