Pillar of Strength (Ragna) Final Chapter page 119 UPDATED 7/10/14 - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago
great update dear awesome neetu ko please asylum bhej do aur haan sahil ko third degree treatment do👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jaldi update karo varna... me tume kya kareka muje patha nahi.. 😈
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Awesome chapter loved rahul a lot
Just perfect story with a revenge plan and romance and friendship and a big fat indian wedding with all d cute rasmo rivaaz 😆😆😆
Update soon...
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Author's Note: #UForceMeToWrite love...respect...and basket of Goodies to everyone who commented and liked!!! love the feedback I receive!!

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Part 21

Kalpana rushes to Raghav's home in the morning for planning the second part of plan. Raghav and Gauri Ma are having breakfast when doorbell rings,

R: I will see who came...knowing exactly it would be Kalpi...Hi Kal...only to see Rahul standing in the doorway yelling "Ma, I'm here to devour your pancakes!"

Raghav POV: She is my Ma not yours...First Kalpi now Ma, what is his game plan? Taking away the two most important women from my world...Kalpi is your friend! ughh

Rahul barges in and hugs Ma, Raghav seeing this slams the door, only to hear Kalpi's yell

K: Owww, Ouch...Maaa

Raghav takes Kalpi bruised hand and rubs it. "I'm so sorry, I didn't see you there. It is all my fault... Is it paining too much? Shall I call for the doctor?"

K POV: Aww, he is so caring and he said sorry and admitted his mistake...shocker

K: Nice way to treat guests. It is okay...I'm okay

Ma: You are not a guest and Raghav go get me a first aid box.

Rahul: Kalpi, you should not have put your hand on the door. Idiot...Is it paining a lot...would me kissing your boo boo make you feel better.

Kalpi hits Rahul with the other hand, "stop joking stupid, I bet on my funeral you would be laughing".

Rahul gets serious, "don't say that ever", and hugs her.

Raghav being a silent spectator is fuming with anger. He grabs bandage from his mom and drags Kalpi to sit on the sofa. He then applies ointment on Kalpi's bruised hand and blowing air whenever she hisses in pain. "There you should feel all better now, I truly am sorry", with his puppy dog eyes.

Kalpi puts her hand and squeezes Raghav's shoulder to convey she understands, "You know I always wanted to see you say Sorry but now that I have...nah it doesn't suit you...you are acceptable as egoistic jerk" she says with a wink..

R POV: She winked at me and joked...I like this care free Kalpi...

K:Ma, my hand hurts...can you feed me? AAAHHH

Ma: Kalpi, you naughty girl...come here.

Kalpi's right hand is bruised so Ma fed her pancakes with her hand.

K: Now, let's discuss the next part of plan. Haldi is today, so we can scare Neetu again but this time with Ma accusing her, hopefully she will run to Sahil who will then go over the whole incident and we would have it on the tape.

Rahul utters "great plan Kalpi"...

Raghav: What a lame filmy plan, it wouldn't work...

K: you challenging the girl, who won and changed your revenue? You lost that bet, remember and the challenge...

Flashback

In the few months' time, Kalpi indeed changed Raghav's revenue.

R: I...umm...you...

K: I know...I won the bet...a simple I lost or thank you would do...SIR

R(glaring): Well, it is your job...

K: Hmm...so I was offered a job by Mr. Malhotra...

R: You are not leaving me...I mean the company (hurriedly)

K(smiling and raising her eyebrows): Am I or Am I not is my decision sir?

R: You can't leave without 6 months' notice...

K: I will stay if you say, you lost the bet...

R: That is so childish...

K: But my request...my gift for getting those revenues.

R(grumplily): You won...I lost, thank you leaving a stumped Kalpi behind

Present

Both Raghav and Kalpi are brought back to reality with Rahul's question.

Rahul: Ma, I have heard the first guy who puts haldi on a girl...she obeys his every command

Ma: It is silly superstition, but I have heard that if a guy puts haldi on girl, they end up getting married.

Raghav and Kalpi immediately turn towards each other...and as quickly and blushingly look the other way after an eyelock.

Raghav POV: I can make her mine...use Haldi and won't have to say a word...Since when did you start believing in superstition...this girl has changed my cores...

K POV: Omg, what if my mistake...or deliberately I put haldi on him or he on me...my heart will be at ease...kalpi...seriously...you are acting as superstitious as aii...bet she would be proud of you...

Rahul: Kalpi, watch out...I will make you my slave when I put haldi on you

K: In your dreams...

Raghav POV: (while glaring his eyes at Rahul...if he was superman with laser...Rahul would have been ash)How dare he...Kalpi is a princess and MINE...No guy can put haldi on her except me...ever!

Haldi ceremony

Kalpi: Aii, tell me na what should I wear?

Kamla: Why should it matter? It is not your engagement. Kalpi, listen I want you to make sure food gets out on time, what would Sammy think if food is bad?

K POV: Right aii, who cares how I look, all eyes (especially yours will be on Paakhi only) She sighs in defeat and frowns.

Vitthal: Kamla, you na. Kalpi, you a princess, you will look beautiful in anything you wear you know why...because your heart is made of gold. Vitthal kisses Kalpi's forehead. By the way your phone is ringing.

Gauri Ma on phone: Kalpi, make sure you wear white dress (knowing that white is Raghav's favorite color)...I know...I know you were missing me and Yes meri ma I took the medicines...You and Raghav are two peas in a pod.

Kalpi blushes on hearing this..."Ma, enough excuses! You are spending too much time with the drama queen (Rahul). Be prepared for tonight and get your rest. Okay

Kamla: Kalpi, stop wasting time and go see to the decorations.

Gauri feeling Kalpi's pain, "Kalpi, no one can dcor better than you sweety. Remember how we decorated my room in Panchgani...It was so beautiful with fairy lights. I can wait until you get married, I will personally make sure everything is PERFECT.

G POV: I have too; for my daughter and son! Ahh, when will that day come?

Paakhi is dressed in yellow Indian attire while Kalpi is in while Indian attire...Sammy, Rahul and Raghav all are wearing shalwar suit...

Sammy is not allowed to see Paakhi and is shielded via a veil...It is Kalpi's responsibility to make sure they don't see each other and Raghav's to make sure they do...

Kamla Ma is seeing to function as a mother would, Sahil is busy making business associates and Neetu gossiping and Prem drinking to think a way to sabotage Kalpi and Raghav.

Gossip type aunty: Neetu, how come you are not panicking like a bride's mother...your maid seems to be the mother.

Neetu POV: Yes, and you came to put salt on my wounds...Manhoos...moti...Thoos le aur khana free ka!

N: Didn't you have a drink? What can I say Pookie's wish? Besides, we are rich enough to have maids do things for us...I heard your son didn't even invite you on his wedding...How sad...Oops, excuse me I need to retouch my makeup...Have to look good for my rich millionaire son in law.

Aunty glares at Neetu in fury.

Raghav asks Rahul to make sure SaKhi meet and take cute pictures of them...while he distracts Kalpi by engaging her in an argument.

Raghav to Kalpi: We have to let them meet for 5 minutes...Sammy is boring me to death with details of Paakhi I m not interested in.

K: Too bad...can't...I give 100% in my responsibility and they aren't meeting ...You are Sammy's best friend endure this till the wedding.

Some aunty comes and pulls Raghav's cheek hardly and hands him a dish of haldi..."You are so cute...I will bring my daughter...you both would make an ideal couple...so smart...so handsome...biceps and all...

Kalpi is trying her best not to flat out laugh but ends up laughing irking Raghav...who winks at some kids...

Kalpi turns to leave but kids come around them as per Raghav's plan but they end up pushing Kalpi.

Kalpi is about to fall but Raghav steadies her but both end up putting Haldi on each other's face, arms and neck in order to save the slip but end up falling on the floor; Kalpi on top of Raghav...

K: Sorry, I don't know how lost my balance.

R: You okay? Did you get hurt? You hand is it okay?

They try sitting and start laughing at each other...

R: We are worse than kids...you look so yellow...

K (jokingly angry) You look red and yellow... bet now the aunty and her so called beautiful daughter won't find you handsome...pity you...

Raghav pulls Kalpi closer..."changed your thoughts" and rubs his yellow nose against Kalpi's untouched cheek..."now you have to obey my every command and beauty comes from heart..." Raghav smiles getting up and assists Kalpi to her feet..."by the way, Sammy and Paakhi met thanks for arguing" winks Raghav.

Kalpi is dumbfounded and stomps her feet on the floor..."next time ziddi...I will have the last laugh". Both Raghav and Kalpi clean up after themselves while laughing at the flashback of the fall.

K POV: Sometimes, I feel he is so different with his walls all broken down...He acts as a perfect gentleman...every girl's dream man...thank god that girl got scared seeing Raghav in so much haldi...Imagine if they liked each other...SO...Raghav is a friend, Ma's son... why would it matter?

R POV: She still looks gorgeous with all that yellow stuff and I put it on her...Now we are bound to get married (sheepishly smiling) but...I don't care this superstition has to come true...I will make it happen soon...

The dances for the evening start when Act 2 is initiated...Kalpi manages to get Neetu in a secluded spot when Ma accusing Neetu of her crimes...Neetu is at her wits end and rushes to Sahil...She dragged Sahil to an empty room and relates she saw Gauri again...she is haunting them...Sahil tells Neetu to get a grip and tells her that is not possible she is dead and souls don't exist since ours don't...He retells the story of Gauri's misfortune unknown to the fact that Rahul is recording this entire exchange...

Neetu: Sahil, but I saw her...OMG she is haunting us from grave...Remember Mummy ji said some crap about karma...what if this is it...we go to jail.

Sahil: You dumb woman, have you ever heard an authentic ghost story? No one is there. You are just stressed because of Paakhi's wedding preparations...Don't think too much, you already have a small brain.

N: You do know whatever you are today is because of me, behind a successful man, I'm that woman. You should kiss the ground I walk on...Why can't you be like Prem? He listens to me all the time but you no way...Because of you, Paakhi went on you! It is all your fault.

S: Shut up! I'm going to get drinks...Stop reminding me of your worthlessness and Gauri...

Ceremony ends a happy note with Sammy Paakhi and Ma dancing to Maahi Ve...Rahul and Pakya groove on Desi boys...Kalpi on bole chudiyaan with Rahul joining her much to Raghav's jealousy...

R POV: why did he have to dance and why is she letting him so close? They can dance from far why do they need to physically touch each other...I put Haldi on her and here she is dancing with one person I didn't want touching her! ughh..God you are again on your cruelty na with me...why...

Sammy walks up to Raghav and asks him to dance Teri Meri with Kalpi...

R: She won't dance

S: and you admit defeat...

Raghav hold Kalpi's hand and starts twirling her in jealousy...they dance with so much passion and possessiveness. Raghav runs his hand down Kalpi's back, arm and waist...while Kalpi is inching up to Raghav and holding onto his shoulders...He twirls her in air and dance with waltz moves, lost in each other...Both end up dancing to the song with such intensity, chemistry and romance that everyone clapped for them.

K: Umm...You...dance and Raghav simultaneously says "You are a beautiful dancer"

K: Thank you...

R: No thank the haldi...turns out the superstition is true...you obeyed my lead in dance

K POV (smiling and eyes twinkling): Does that mean we could end up marrying...It will be end of universe with our fights...care...Kalpi, you still have to focus on the revenge plan and then your vow...seriously I'm spending way too much time with Paakhi and rituals.

Rahul records this and send this to Ma...However Prem too witnesses this.


Precap: Mehdi...bruised hand...Will someone help Kalpi...

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing dear...haldi next mehendi...love it...!!!❤️
update soon...!!!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its damn awesum dear...
Just loved each n every part in it... Especially RagNa putting haldi on each other...
Plzz continue soon ... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh thankz for liking my ff and you knw what i have fallen in love wid urs one. its awesome dear👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wait Prem saw the video???😲😲😲
Anyway RagNa dance...!!! I was kinda imagining RagNa in IPKKND scene...😛😛😆😆😆😆😆😆 N Rachana wud look sooo gud in green saree...!!! 😳😳😳😳
Amazing update hon...!!! 👏👏👏👏 Ek doosre ke ho gaye RagNa...!!! 😉😉😉😉
Oh how could i forget?? "Muh Thoos ke free khana kha moti.." etc etc...!!! Neetu...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Jus waiting for the next 1..!! 😳😳😳 Poor Chocopie villain ban gaya...!!! 😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superbbb
Kamla kabhi nahi sudregi😡
I hate her...
Lvd rahul...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow i can now imagine ragna in teri meri.
kalpi in green saree and dancing absolutely like ipkknd.
today i got a ragna dance in ema and also from you.
thank you so much dear

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