The twisting Kaleidoscope- Ragna FF - REMOVED - Page 28

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

I hope Kalpi wake up from the coma soon
Raghav is so hurt physically and emotionally
This Pakhi has the nerve to come to the hospital
Omg!!! I'm so happy that Raghav slap her, I hope she receive some more...
Wonderful update

Thank you Nats. But it was Kamla that slapped her. Ehehehe damn, guess I didn't describe that well enough. Sorrryyy

Actually, and this might be a spoiler for my ff, but I wouldn't let Raghav or Sammy or any of the men in the story hit the women. I wouldn't want to bring down the characters like that at all.

Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim

Thank you Nats. But it was Kamla that slapped her. Ehehehe damn, guess I didn't describe that well enough. Sorrryyy


Actually, and this might be a spoiler for my ff, but I wouldn't let Raghav or Sammy or any of the men in the story hit the women. I wouldn't want to bring down the characters like that at all.

Oh it was kamla :)
My bad I guess I miss read, anyway I'm happy that she got slapped ;)

I'm sorry for not commenting earlier.
Just caught up with the updates.
And now about the story...it is BRILLIANT!!:)
My words are not enough to describe how good of a writer you are!!
Really it seems as if you're an author. You write so well! 😛
Please update soon, I love your FF!!!:-)

Originally posted by: Pookhi

I'm sorry for not commenting earlier.
Just caught up with the updates.
And now about the story...it is BRILLIANT!!:)
My words are not enough to describe how good of a writer you are!!
Really it seems as if you're an author. You write so well! 😛
Please update soon, I love your FF!!!:-)

Pookhi!! 😊 Thank you so much. I can never forget that you were the first person to comment on my ff so it means a lot to see you comment again. 😊

Thanks a mil for your kind words.

fabulous story;

Originally posted by: sparikh

fabulous story;

u write so beautifully - not only the romance & emotional scenes but the actions sequences as well.

Love your Raghav & Kalpana; Pakhi is very twisted - I guess blood does show it's true colors.

-Sona

Thank you. 😊 But I also believe that a person should not let the misdeeds tainting the blood of their family define them. 😉

beautifully written
pain of losing a love is worst its a matter of second when someone comes in your life or goes away but memories remains for forever its good that raghav's kalpi is back to him
loved it feels it 👏

Wow... Itz soo damn awesum...

Wonderful update, so very emotional really heartbreaking to see Raghav's pain but the only relief is that Kalpi is out of coma. I just hope she's ok, please hope there's no more heartbreak between them.

amazing update
hope kalpi wl b fine soon yar m living in ur story hats off to u. U r amazing writer
cntn soon