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Posted: 11 years ago
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It felt like a the time was stuck frozen within four walls of the hospital room each time he looked at his watch it seemed only a second has passed. He paced around the nonstop it felt like some had snatched his heart out of his body. He couldn't even dare to look at her, her lifeless body lay still on the hospital bed covered with wires and bandages. Each time he looked at her helpless body he felt angry to all this happened he felt guilty he could have stopped at this kalpli his one and only sole reason of happiness she lay in front of him lifeless and he couldn't do anything about. For the first time in many years he wanted to cry he wanted to yell to scream out to tell everyone how scared he was never thought because of him kalpi would suffer this much. His ability to think to understand to feel was decreasing with each passing moment. Today he was no Raghav singhania he nobody but a lover, a lost man and a helpless soul who wanted nothing at the most he would willing give away everything he had just to see kalpi wake up. Today he did something which he swore he would never do walked to house of her God and begged for life. He begged her God a for her safety her health and her life.

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I would try to look at her every other second just in case her body made any movement, I waited to hear her voice and I held her hand just in case he grabs she grabs on it again. Every time I would look at her the incident played in my mind like a broken record, her confession to me our dance and our kiss. It was meant to be our perfect moment tell she ruined by her Pakhi Kapoor. I didn't want to think about her so I pushed I her away the only thing that mattered was for kalpi to wake up.

I ran my had through her hands there were cold as ice I watched her as she was sleeping yes she was sleeping she was just resting she is tired from all her hard work she just needs a little rest and them my kalpi is going to be wake up and will go home and everything will be fine again. I repeated this over and over again nothing will happen to kalpi she will just wake up soon.

I held her hand tight "kalpi I know you can hear me its raghav your raghav I know your just faking it if your still upset the am willing to say sorry about the other day ill say a million time or trillion however many times you want me to say please just wake up with you am nothing I need you kalpi I beg you just wake up" tears began to fall my eyes I didn't care I wanted to her wake I watched her helpless body nothing happened there was no movement.

It felt as if my blood began to boil every emotion in my body stooped all I felt was angry I jumped of the chair and jerked of her hand. "fine you want to play games fine Kalpana yadev fine you're going show your stubbornness by not waking up fine" I yelled as I kicked the chair away from me " it fine am just as stubborn as you are till you don't wake up am here right here till you wake and will see then who wins" I yelled at her.

Am finishing it here am not giving it a happy ending or a sad.

So am tired of doing all sad Os since we got the happy news that lots more of RagNa scenes am shifting to more happy and romantic OS and I've decided that from now on am just going to be doing OS there much more easier so after I've done about 3 or 4 more OS I've upload my RagNa writing gallery.

I would like to apologise for any grammar or spelling mistakes ive written this os in 10 minutes in my lecture room so am sorry if this Os is a little crappy. Guys please do comment and vote I have but a lot of effort in all my works even you guys just say it's okay or it good its means a lot.

Aimen

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nandinidavid96 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my if you wrote this amazing stuff in 10 minutes, I am wondering how about spending some serious hours...you'd create master piece. Give it a thought on writing RagNa FF😃

This OS is simply beautiful 👏I am not happy with the ending though...do think of doing one more part for this OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You are on a roll today huh very well written you described raghv's inner turmoil very beautifully
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing something different that usual os...

truly holding emotional

if there is more to this

plz plz update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS Aimz
I love stubborn Raghav :)
It's very emotional but unique
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nandinidavid96


Oh my if you wrote this amazing stuff in 10 minutes, I am wondering how about spending some serious hours...you'd create master piece. Give it a thought on writing RagNa FF😃

This OS is simply beautiful 👏I am not happy with the ending though...do think of doing one more part for this OS



Awww thank u sooo much ill consider writing ffs and am still thinking about if i shoud add another part to this Os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Write more.. Ur writings r beautiful,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os👏
update soon

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