ss:RAGNA FOREVER new update @21. beginning of new love story

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RagNa Forever...

character sketch: page1

part 1:page 1

part 2:page 3

part 3:page 5

part 4:page 7

part 5:page 9

part 6:page 12

part 7:page 14

part 8:page 15

part 9:page 18

part 10:page 21

JADAVS

kalpana vitthal jadav,daughter of vitthal jadav & kamla vitthal jadav in her early twenties is a girl with golden heart.her big and beautiful eyes always reflects her heart.but her mother whom she always wanted to read her heart never had time to even look in to her daughters eyes.her mother was always busy in looking after her mothers another daughter pakhi kapoor😡😡😡.prakash vitthal jadav is kalpi's only brother.he is one of the best engineers in mumbai and is now working in dev constructions.prakash also known as pakya is a very protective and loving brother.he always stands by his sis in every journey of her life😊.the family is incomplete without their nani and nanu who loves them from the extreme core of their heart.

SINGHANIAS

raghavendra harivansh singhania,the only son of the business tycoon late harivansh singhania and his wife anjali harivansh singhania.raghav who is in his late twenties is an arrogant and akdu type of person but somewhere inside him there is a flow of emotions which he always try to suppress.raghav has two best friends, maya varma and samar raizada.

KAPOORS

kapoors consists of sahil kapoor his wife neethu kapoor their son prem daughter pakhi and their dadi.kapoors had developed their kingdom by cheating raghav's father(the story will be revealed soon).but pakhi has nothing to do with the deeds of her family.she was brought up by kamala.so she had a good personality.while prem one of their heirs is a rich spoiled brat.



Guys other character will be presented in the next part.its my first attempt.i have never written anything other than essays in my entire life.so pls forgive my all grammatical and whatever mistakes.i will continue if u all want me to do so.

Whole hearted welcome to all criticisms...😊




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Posted: 11 years ago
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like the intro ...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OFFCOURSE YOU SHOULD CONTINUE AND ITS A VERY NICE CHARACTER SKETCH😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its very interesting. U should co ntinue.
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part 1


it was her second week in THE "RS" CONSTRUCTIONS.yes as the name itself represents it was not an easy place to survive especially for a straight forward girl like kalpana.with a boss who always find a reason to shoot his arrows on her,she was losing all her controls.yes she is working under raghav singhania as an assistant supervisor(u all know about the failing in exams,waitress job,kamla's drama etc. so i'm not boring u guys).after the alibag trip raghav became more and more khadoos towards kalpi.whatever she did ended up in an argument with raghav.both the hot tempered heads were creating a headache for our dear sammy who had to witness all the dramas.finally he decided for a peace contract between raghav and kalpi.since he knew that it was useless to speak to raghav he dcided to talk to kalpi about this.he went to her desk.

Sammy:kalpana,how much will u work in a day?

Kalpi:hi sammy sir. I was actually about to come to u only

sammy:what made the kalpana jadav to remember this poor samar?

Kalpi:sir actually I wanted to ask u leave for a few days.actually its my brothers wedding and I wanted to take leave.

Pakhi overhears the conversation

pakhi:hi sammy.even I want the leave.i also have to attend the wedding na that's why.

Sammy:so why are u girls asking me?go and ask raghav

kalpi:i'm damn sure that if I ask him it will be definitely a NO.sir pls help us.

Sammy:i think u are underestimating my frnd.he is not that bad kalpi.yes it is true that he keeps everyone at a bay.but it doesn't mean that he is heartless.he has his own resons kalpana.anyways I think u should go and talk to raghav about the leave.i'll catch u girls later.bye

pakhi:chal kalpi.lets go and ask raghav sir only.

Kalpi agrees half heartedly and walks in to raghav's cabin.she knocks the door and he nods to come in.both the girls enter his cabin.

Kalpi:sir we wanted leave for few days as it is my brothers wedding.i asked sammy sir but he told that I should ask u that's why we are here

She just said it in a single breath without any break.she was not looking at him while pakhi had already started her drooling sessions over him.kalpi was expecting the regular mocking from him regarding her attitude toward her.but for her surprise he said something else.

Raghav:ms jadav u can take the leave but pakhi,are u sure that you want to take leave?i mean I will miss u a lot.think about it once.😔

Pakhi was on cloud 9 listening to raghav while kalpi was burning from head to foot.if she had a hammer in her hand she would have broke raghav's head for what he said now.😡

Kalpi's pov:but why am I feeling so insecured.kalpi u are out of your mind.let raghav say anything how come in the world will it affect u.no kalpi stop staring at him.

Her thoughts was suddenly broke by pakhi's voice

pakhi:sir so why don't u also join us in pakya's wedding. It will be great fun. Sir pls say a yes. Pls for me.😒

Raghav:i would definitely have come since u are inviting but its sammy's sister's wedding too.and I can't miss it.

Kalpi:sir so shall I leave now.

Raghav:bye pakhi

pakhi:bye sir

kalpi was so angry that she even didn't look at him after his lovely conversation with pakhi.but both were unknown to what destiny had played for them.



So I.m done with the first part.sorry again for all mistakes.all criticisms are welcomed.pls don,t forget to comment



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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice 👏ab rags ladki waala banke aayega😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow..loved it dear..amazing
thanks for pm..btw what's ur name?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Itz awesum...
Plz continue soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lol pakkya's wedding 😆
So finally he got sumone 😉 i m happy for him 😳
Wht the hell is wrong wid Mr.Akdoo.. 😡 i will miss u pakhi...jaake shakal dekh mirrior me 😡
My poor soul kalpi 😭
Bring sumone to jealofy raghav...uske saare screw tight ho jayenge ekdam
I m loving ur story to the core...
U r amazing 👏👏
Keep up dear...& plz update soon..looking forward
Edited by SoniLuvsRT - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mihika

very nice 👏ab rags ladki waala banke aayega😆😆

aapne to guess kar di.😃

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