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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
woww! please update the next part fasst xD
can't wait😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Plz plz don t end it so soon luved it the concept is so heart touching..!update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
pls update soon dear jus cant wait to knw watl happen next!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
next part please update fast its really intresting>3😊 moreover u really awesome writer just read your ss broken its amazing👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3


Every one says Time heals.. But no one said when that time ll come... Its been months since he saw his rajkumari .. He failed as a father to his daughter .. He always tried to cover up Kamala's mistakes when it come to Kalpi.. But forgot that his daughter is also have a heart,which craves for love ,support... May be if he would ve been little more strict with Kamala may be Kalpi would ve been here with him..He firmly believes that Kalpi went away because of him and Kamala.. He is worried for his Daughter but scared to give police complaint about his daughter missing .. Kalpi said if anyone tries to search her she ll kill herself,he is sure that she is keeping an eye on them,so he is sure that his daughter is alive somewhere. so,he prays to God for her safety and her return..

Kamala on the other hand didn't know she ll get this much big punishment for hiding Raagav's mom..She is sad,worried,scared for her daughter. Her daughter living away alone in this monstrous world.. She can't look at her husband's eyes. This is not a home anymore.. It is just a house in which the residents just sleep and eat..But she never failed to love Paaki in anyway.. Whatever she is going through ,she never showed her pain to Paaki... But she is unaware that she is angering other occupants of the house...


Paakya on the other hand become very strong for his family.. He is doing two jobs... He left his masti games when his sister went away.. He avoided coming to the house where his sister's memories haunt him..They both doesn't share a much.. But their bond was special.. Afterall it is his little sister.. He come only in the time of dinner.. He can't watch his mom and dad behaving like a strangers.. And his mom showering love on Paaki.. It is not new to him but now he felt suffocation watching them.. There is no livliness in the house.. After all the life of the house is no more living there...In all this Sammy became like a bigger brother..Like s pillar of strength for him when he needed...He call him Sammy dada..They both talk with each other at least twice in a week..

In all this commotion only one is really Happy in their own world.. Paaki is really happy in her own little world unaware that her very own exixtence has become a destruction for another soul right from the birth.. Paaki is happy that she got her love.. Her life is going good.. She felt bad for Kalpi for leaving like this.. Leaving her Kamala maa.. Thats why she is visiting Kamala maa daily to tell her that she is there for her..Her love is also good even though Raagav is busy for the past three months.. She can understand work pressure.. He doesn't ve time for her like before,its been threen months since they went out for lunch or dinner.. Either he is busy or she is flooded with work..


Little did she know these are intentional...Raagav gave her soo much work through others then ask her to come for lunch so,he can maintain a facade that he is caring... Sitting at home alone thinking about his love but telling her he is busy with the clients..But the time has come for her to come out from her little bubble to face the reality of her life...

A New day has dawn...

Signhania Mansion:

When sammy came out from his room Raagav was waiting for him in break fast table.. Sammy ignored him and sat in his chair and started to eat his breakfast.. Raagav looked at him for a some time and said Sammy, i am sorry...

Sammy looked at him for a second and asked for what???

Raagav was taken back and asked what?

Sammy again asked for what you are asking sorry Raagav..

Raagav kept silent...

After a moment Sammy again asked for what you are asking sorry Raagav.. For taking revenge, For using Paaki.. For what you are apologizing...Raagav bent down his head in shame but today sammy is no mood to stop so he continued may be for hurting the poor soul , for breaking her , For killing her ..Sammy shouted at the end...

For what you are apologizing Raagav...Only if your apology could bring back Kalpi.. Only if your apology could erase the hurt you caused her.. Only if your apology could mend her broken hurt... Sammy's eyes glistened with tears... Only if your apology could do all these i ll forgive you..
said Sammy... Raagav just sat like a statue...

Sammy got up from the table and moved towards the door.. He turned towards Raagav and said only if you know what you did to her soul which was already crushed by others and fully broken by you... and left...

Raagav didnt know for how many hours he was sitting ln the table looking at nothing... He knew he did wrong but hearing it from someone is something different.. It was like he is seeing the mirror for the first time in months.. It was like someone slapped across his face...

Suddenly he remembered Sammy's words "already crushed by others".. What does he mean by that.. what happened to her.. He need answers.. Raagav is determined to find the answers and also rectify his mistakes...

He went to office... Paaki came to him to talk... On seeing Paaki he remembered his last night decision.. He told her to sit and said Paaki we need to end this thing between us...

Paaki was shocked and started blabbering Raagav what happened now.. everything is perfect right then why do you want to end this suddenly..Just tell me Raagav if anything is wrong with me i ll correct myself...She was desperate to keep their soo called realtionship..

But Raagav bursted telling her about his revenge plan except the Kalpi part.. He told her about her parents ill ways to attain his properties...Paaki was shattered.. She tried to talk with him but no he blasted her saying its all for revenge.. Just leave now...

Paaki know that parents ill deeds ll haunt their child...But she never dreamt she ll endure that..
She went away crying..


Sammy saw her going out.. And came to look at Raagav ...

Raagav was looking like a disaster...

Sammy knew Raagav is repenting but it is not enough.. He need to suffer more for hurting the poor soul...

He looked at him through the glass window and went away...



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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
amazing update...

but where is kalpi?????

when ll raghav get to know abt kalpiz past????

loved sammy

update soon..

cant wait fr nest update to read
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
intresting please update part4 as soon as possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Awesum update... 👏👏
just w8ting know where iz kalpi n hw she iz...

Plz update next part soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
where is Kalpi, hopefully Sammy is in touch with her. loved Sammy's outbrust towards Raghav. awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
wow, awesome part
am glad u turning this into a ss
yes, raghav must pay for giving so much misery to kalpana
hope kalpi is fine and doing well
do continue soon
take care

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