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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Loved it plz update soon
Cant wait for d next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
awesome post ...👏...cant wait for the next part ...😊...
plz update sooon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
PART 9
This and next chapter will be flashback about k and Rk..their relation..its all what kalpi is remembering while standing their..ui had told you all they r not platonic friends..they have a very interesting past..u can say like..kalpi is Bella..and she loves them both...EDWARD AND JACOB...HAHA


' HOW dearly I want to see RK come out of his grief and accept the pure love of madhubala. Y couldn't he understand he loved her as much as her and he was going crazy without her. I can make him sober but I can't give him the peace which his heart craves. His peace , his soul is Madhu just as mine is Raghav..wait..how could I even think this.? Raghav..what does hemean to me.? The realization hit her hard. All the fighting with him and proving herself ..yet when where she started feeling for him. She couldn't believe what she just tht. Oh my god.. RK says right..seems we r similar our fates r similar and so seems our life too...but yet..I never thought I could ever even like someone like my right kameena...and ..oh lord what's happening yo me. Rk u really could see what I didn't see. Why Rk..y couldn't we be together..we should be together...we r so alike, we love each other, we understand each other like no one else..yet...our heart craves something amiss us...for you I know Madhu is ur lifeline..ur oxygen...but when how rags became mine...hell how could it happen..' Kalpi is lost in thoughts.she gets flashback of her life..life which she had ..hidden somewhere..life..where she was a different person all together..life which she wants not to think about..The time when she first met RISHABH.KUNDRA...THE TIME WHEN sHE WAS SHE..(flashback into Rk kalpi relation)
Kalpi was in 6 when kamla forced her to go to hostel. It was her first day. It was an all girls hostel. She was quite scared but had no choice. She had done enough of crying already. But no use. Her aayi didn't budge and she WS here now with strangers. she gathered strength and a firm determination. It was her English class before the day got over. Since it was grammar class..they were sent to 8 std..to have a combined grammer class..it was strange..but this school had certain strange way of studies. Both Hindi and English grammar classes were taken together in school Audi..coz their was only one grammer teacher till the other came from maternal leave.kalpi being good in studies had no problems to study . she went and took her place and was lost in her book when she heard a boy asking her to move..she looked up from her book...sh was shocked seeing a boy in a girls school..the boy asked her to move aside..
K-" isn't it a girls school..u don't look like one"
Boy-"excuse me, ..u see new here kid...this was a co end till last year.."
K -" oops sorry! I didn't know"
Boy" would u shut that open mouth and move aside..as it is such a dumb class and I have to sit with a dumb girl"
K- she smiled..and moved aside..she looked around..yeah there were indeed many boys.'
Boy- " u know I hate to study here now..lord where am I stuck between all these stupid girls".
K - " hey u, girls r not stupid OK..actually u boys think too much of itself."
Boy- omg not again that MCP crap OK. The new feminist in school".
K- its a fact am stating. What is this MCP ?
Boy- hell u r from where? U don't no MCP? Which class r u in?"
K- grade 6. I joined this year only. What bout you?
Boy- well am in 8 grade..cool you r smart for grade 6. U do no yo talk. So its ur first day here.
K- yeah. I am kalpna vithal jhadav.
Boy- did I ask your boring name. U talk too much. Shut up now and see that football has come..to bore the hell out ta me..
K- football?
Boy- yeah go kick her and shut ur mouth or she will kick u.
Kalpu is scared and a Lil frightened of this boy. She silently starts concentrating on the class. She kept quiet the howhole class...after class she silently went to her dome..thinking about the boy who was so rude to her whose name she didn't no yet.
TO BE CONTD ...

Edited by dreamyjennice - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Amazing update. ... lovn the fbz already
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Wow...
Rk ko tho attitude ka kitab milne chahiya... 😆
8th std mein itni attitude...
nyways w8ting 2 read what happens next...
Plz update it soon di... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
It was awesum.. Itna attitude dikha raha hai RK.. No probs.. Vo aisa hii hai... Continue soon Didi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 10
IT was a new and strange place. K was restless. She dearly missed her family. But again she had no choice. She cried silently and slept. Days passed by she got used to hostel life. And she was quite reserved by nature. So she hasn't many friends except two..Astha and Ishita.these three had become besties.in every grammar class she used to see that boy and his other friends..but they didn't talk much except passing a smile. It was month now ..there was a picnic where parents were invited..but no one came from kalpi side so she had to miss it. She felt very sad and lonely. Then she heard the sound of guitar and she went towards music room. There she saw that same boy..he had tears and he was silently playing lost in his whole world...she just sat silently hearing the painful music. She felt connected to that music. It was touching her soul. She couldn't stop terms flowing from her eyes. After around an hour the guy opened his eyes and saw her sitting and crying silently...
Boy- hey you r that nerd right...kalpna..yes...whatcr you doing here? Not on picnic?
K- well my parents haven't come..so I was left out..I heard you playing and so I came here..I was feeling very lonely..but y r u crying and where r your parents?
Boy comes and sits with her." Shhh...don't cry..u look Horrible kiddo ,don't feel lonely..OK we r friends OK...I am rishabh..rishabh kundra..my friends call me RK.."
K- RK..OK...but y this sad music?
Rk-..coz my parents too never come. I miss them .so I play so that I don't feel lonely and become strong. And u r the first one here I have seen just like me all alone. Cheer up..they will cone next time.."
K- no they will not come..coz they r busy...my ayi is a kaamwali bai and nanny of a rich girl paakhi. She's always busy their"..and she told Rk her whole story. And urs Rk..
Rk- well my dad is too busy being a doting father to his stepson..Sicky.. Sikandar..he thinks I am a nuisance and if I be there he will be called partial...so we two seem to be same."
That day on they became very good friends..Rk used to care for her a lot and she did too. They were so into each other that everyone in school used to give their friendship example..they both stood with each other like rock...he started teaching her to play guitar..soon two yes passed..
Kamla had not cone to hostel even once to meet her nor had rks parents..they both started understanding each other...They used to share each and everything about each other. It was second set when k was in 8 std. She was feeling strange from few days.. A lot of pain in her abdomen..mood swings..one such day they had a fight. Rk was noticing all these changes...well he had kind of guessed the reason... But how to tell her..he wrote her a letter to explain her problem.. Yupp it was starting of her womanhood..periods.. And he guided her through that period..when she badly wanted her aayi...and that was the base for a deep rooted friendship between them..they were growing up from kids to adults..yet their equation remained unchanged.they both had become each others family. It was the beginig of 9 std when Rk had a crush in a girl. He was too nervous. Rk went to k to discuss about his feelings.. K had no answer to that. So they decided that the would go on a date first do that Rk doesn't make a fool of herself..And thus it was their first date. Both bunked school and went to a restaurant in their school dress😆..they talked about everything..about how about a guy proposing kalpi..and Rk was suddenly possessive...but he has to go through me first...they shared a happy laugh..
K- so I think ur date gonna be great..see u won't make a fool..
Rk - yeah..and you to get a Chance.. To go on date as well otherwise u r so boring..kahin ki..
K - Rk hold my hands..plzz
Rk looking her strangely..holds her hands
K - kuch hua tumhe..
Rk - nahi..tumhe kuch hua..
K - nahi year. Astha kehti hain ki jab date par kaatey hain toh dono KO current lagta hain ek dusre KO chine ss...par mujhe toh nahi laga
Rk - arrey idiot..kiss karte sE current lagta hai..bewakoof..tum kab Badi hogi..
K - acha toh hum kaise pata karein ki tum date par fool nahi lagogey
Rk- hmm...iske liye humein kiss Karna padega..
K - tumne kiss kiya hain pehle kabhi
Rk - nahi year..chalo na try kartey hain..ho sakta hai current lag jaaye...
K - kiss kaise kartey hain..I don't know..
Rk" Maine ek movie mein dekha tha..u close ur eyes..for mai karunga kiss OK"
K- OK..she closes her eyes..as Rk nears her she holds his shirt..Rk zor ka current laga toh..
Rk-dont worry I will hold you...and they kiss..each other..
After few seconds.. Both push each other away...
K- kya Rk..mujhey thoda hi current laga...and yeah kya hai u smoked..how dare you Rk..Ishita kehti hai Nada Wala current lagta hain..
Rk- sorry aagey ss nahi piyunga meri Maa..mujhe bhi ajeeb lag raja tja sachi..but who movie jaisi feel nahi asyi na..OK..get it..tu meri gf nahi hain na..yeah surf gf aur bf..me beech aati hai..tu toh meri sweetheart hai...and they both hug each other...such innocent and deep was their friendship..when Rk was in 12 Rk's father did suicide which broke him..and it was only kalpi who stood by him..but he became Avery bitter person..after that..he decided to go to us for his further studies.. And they promised to be the same for each other..she was broken after he left..alone again..she had promised herself she would not touch music till Rk would himself play his guitar which he had left after his dad suicide...

Edited by dreamyjennice - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
interesting friendship! awesome update pls continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: veeranu

It was awesum.. Itna attitude dikha raha hai RK.. No probs.. Vo aisa hii hai... Continue soon Didi.

Rk and attitude are synonyms.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Awesum update di... 👏
Want 2 know what happens next...
Plz update fast... :)

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