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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Raghav is in full jealousy mode lol
I'm loving his miserable state with him thinking Kalpi is going far away from him ;)
Lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Wow Ana, wonderful story 👍🏼
I read all the updated in one go, its simply superb. Raghav really needs some one to kick him hard and drill sense in his clogged mind. I just loved how you made him apologize Kalpi 👏. I am all ready to see Ragahv being grilled even more for the countless insults Kalpi has gone through. 😔

P.S. Special thanks for brining RK, Right Kameena in the story, he surely got attitude to kill
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Plz update the rest of part six
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Nice! Loved it! Can't wait for him to find out!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
love this rk.
nice update, waiting for next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
PART 7
HI GUYS ON PUBLIC DEMAND NO INE WANTS HANDSOME RK TO BE BEAUTIFUL KALPI BROTHER..SO HES NO MORE HER BROTHER 😆 mera ss hain expect anything 😆 HES HER VERY CLOSE FRIEND..NOTE...THEY SHARE A VERY CLSE FRIENDSHIP WHICH IS NEITHER PLATONIC NOR ROMANTIC BUT YET ARE VERY CLOSE..SO ENJOY...NEW TWISTS AND TURN COMING YOUR WAY...PASSION GUARANTEED...😆 Thank for ur all lovely response..never tht it would be loved so much..sach hain RK NAAM MEIN HI NASHA HAI..AND THIS UPDATE IA MORE ABOUT KALPI AND RK...😆


Raghav lost in his thts...he was feeling strange. These emotions were new to him. He hated this Rk to core. But y he didn't know. And kalpi..she seemed so much into him. She was a different person today. What was between these two? How does kalpi know him? Behind whom the whole world runs. But y do I care? This is not my goal. My aim is only paakhi. Today is my chance. I just can't let go of it .' with these thts he harshly thrashed all his thoughts again and Gave a smile to paakhi who was as usual drooling on him..but yet his eyes were searching for k and then he saw her huddled in a corner with Rk. They seemed were like in an heated argument. They were intriguing him and all present in party and yet were both oblivious to anything. He just couldn't help but watch for them. He had a strong urge..to do what..get a grip rags. Paakhi is here and just think about ur plan now.'

In a semi dark corner were Rk and kalpi arguing with each other.
K - "Rk chill. Relax yaara. He's said sorry na. Don't act. Like a possessive bf. Its his nature year. I am cool u too cool down.let's enjoy our time. Instead u r sitting here all grumpy. Stop bahaving like a brat kid OK."
Rk-"how dare he.? U r more than my gf. OK. And anyone putting you down..I will crash him. How can you take his crap and insult. And don't tell me that his words don't effect you. He peels ur heart and its bleeding. U r not going to work for him a single day more. Let him adore that doll paakhi. Hell but laying even a voice on you..and u stopping me and calling me grumpy. When u should slap him hard right back. Its decided u will not work here."
K - shut up Rk. Have committed him for six months now and I won't back out. U can't force me. Why the all men want to take control of my life. And now you know what Madhu has gone through with you. Imagine how hurt she felt when u insulted her and humiliated her . now you get it what I meant back then. Y u men r so obnoxious. Its on me do not fine but on others its OK.
Rk-"with!its about u we r talking. Well fine make me your bf. I am more than that and u mean a lot to me. What has Madhu got to do with it.? Madhubala is none of your business. Got it. Stay away. Obnoxious well fine..but u r not working with that idiot one day more".
K was very angry now. " How dare you Rk? Do u take me as a kid? My life ur right..but us life am nobody. I hate you for what u did to madhubala. And keep shouting .like the hell I care. I took now what I am to you. So better not fight me. Well none of my business rthen even rags is none of your business..." She holds his face in her palms " look Rk- I am sorry..I love you and you know it. Hell y don't you understand..I understand your pain..after all we two r each others living version..I didn't mean to hurt u by reminding Madhu..I worry for you..I know you feel for her ..y don't you just accept it. Y all this frustrations..I know my hurt reminds you of ur deeds and u go into guilt and become more protective of me"
RK - " just leave me..she trusted that sultan more than me, and you u don't trust me at all. U all have only one aim to break me..but am RK AND ONLY RK CAN MAKE OR BREAK RK..but one thing believe me...I will kdnap you if u don't stop working there" and u can enjoy this damned party..am not interested." Kalpi sees tears forming in his eyes but then pride took over. She knew him like no one else. After all they had shared similar pain and share a similar ambition. She couldn't see BIM in pin and she knew she had hit a raw nerve of him. He did had enough of pain and he will smile..just smile..she knew he loved her but he loved madhubala too..heart and soul..and she had hurt him bad..though she loved him to the heights of craziness..and kalpi knew too well y Madhu had sent him to India in the pretext of having sometime to think things out And cool down. Mdhu knew he WS lonely and only kalpi could help him. And handle him.she had told her everything. Darn these men. Y so much ego. U love her madly but no telling will make you fall. ' she sees Rk walking towards the bar in anger. She runs behind him in worry.
Rags Sammy Maya paakhi are all watching them. And they two seem to be lost in their own world.
M-" gosh kalpi is so full of surprises. I never tht she could look do enchanting ..and god these two make such a beautiful couple. Lol it seems they r too very close..too close for just friends."
P- " u r right Maya. Kalpi never told me bout RK. And have never seen her like this. Oh yeah they look okok to me...but the way she's behaving ..and Rk behaving as if no one other than these two exist in this party. And kalpi..well she's such a boring person..I don't know how these to carry on. "
S was watching play of expressions on rags face. He could see jealousy resringvits head..he could see his palnms rolled up and he was controlling his anger..he knew his friend..too well but he couldn't help him out of Hus stupid revenge theme.. He was scared now that kalpu and Rk shared a very strong feeling for each other..and if rags doesn't realize early and fight for his love..he might lose kalpi..he was now wondering too y didn't kalpi ever mentioned him ..y was she so different with Rk..what was actually between them and the way RK WAS behaving possessive..rags will have to fight hard head on to get his love only if he gives a chance to it.
S- yupp she's looking stunning..hott..and so much happy. See she's glowing today. Surely they make a super hot couple and kalpna deserves this..love care attention. I am very happy for her..this Rk gonna fight tooth and nail for her..he respects her a lot and is so proud of her. They do seem very close. Just look the way she's holding his face..my god with so much lobe and care...where was this Kalpana hidden.." He knew rags was burning..he was glaring murderously at s. He diverted his glance towards paakhi smiling at her..once again mind winning over heart...
Least caring about everyone..kalpi glared at him at nar table.." U promised Rk no drinking and u don't dare. Hah actually u don't care.."
RK- " Hello chill..am drinking orange juice."
K- lol Madhubala effect. She's not here yet u not drinking" am impressed .."
Rk- " just keep quiet..u talk a lot"
K- and u only grump..u act like a bore..Rk u have become a bore"
Rk- no ways..Rk and bore impossible..go and get your mind checked..its become discharged due to excessive use.."
K - OK then prove it"
Rk - fine ..say"
k - "u r here and yet such a boring party..show something RKish.."
Rk- u challenging me...fine..if I surprise all u gotta dance with me..that boyfriend Wala dance.. Tell"
K- " Rk Madhu will kill me"
Rk- " I don't care..so bad u r not my gf..we have awsine chemistry and I want everyone to see what you r.."
K- fine OK done...do something no one has tht here..I want you to be urself and happy. LETS ROCK FOR ONCE..THIS NIGHT
RK - Anything for you sweetheart.. Get ready to rock cOz RK NEVER LOSES..GET READY TO BECINE MY GF..and he winks up st her and pulls her towards the floor.. Seeing her curious face..he's feeling like a kid..and so r the four faces who have not seen anyone other than these two mysterious people.

FINALLY UPDATED...HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT..AND CAN YOU GUESS WHAT IS RK GONNA DO...PLZ DO SHARE...FRANKLY ME TOO LOVING THIS RK THAN THAT BRO RK..😆

Edited by dreamyjennice - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Guys updated new chap plz read and do comment...ur comments encourage me a lot...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: foram.

love this rk.
nice update, waiting for next part soon

updated next chap..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
i read all your SS, it's just mind-blowing loved it to the core Ana ... Well i must say that i love this RK more than the bro, this one add more spice in the story 😉... Love Raghav's reaction poor guy who is trying so hard to control his anger, i don't know but i have a feeling that he will loose it, hope he doesn't slap him or catch him by RK's collar seeing Rk and Kalpi so close while dancing ...lol 😛 But plzz update soon coz i'm so excited for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Omg! Fantastic! Loved the change! Bf's better! He's gonna make raghav soo jealous I'm beyond happy!! Maybe he'll kiss her! On the neck and so forth! Can't wait to read next part! Do hurry! Tks sooo much! Awesome update!

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