let's rock it for once-ff New Updt pg 55 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
thanx a lot for the update didi. nw waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haha! Awesome! I love it! Paaki jealous, rags jealous! Lol this is great!
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Posted: 11 years ago

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I updated and waiting for ur big Wala comment..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96

Aww, finally you had mercy on us😉...thanks for the update, this is awesome😃

haha Nandini...actually I was on cloud nine what with Vivian re entry on screen...and RR banned first then happiness that I could see him action on field...plus busy with my hubby...haha...but will soon complete it...I hope u surely gonna love the end more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg di u back wid ur terrific update 👏👏
Bang on di.👏👏
Seriously i can imagine Raghav,kalpi,Rk.& off course pakhi in this frame... Jus beautiful...i too surprised like all that kalpi can sing..full too surprise package for me...
I loved that raghav clapped & aporeciated for them 😳
I loved RK & Kalpi's bonding 😳
It was so touchy & mesmerizing.. & every one can get jealous aftr seeing such type of bonding...now even i m feeling jealous one 😆
& i always enjoy jealous raghav...
Jealous raghav always be a greatest treat for me 😉
It was wonderful update as usual 👏👏
U r #Rockstar di..love u loads...
Eagerly looking forward for next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
burnt toast wow 😆hahahah update soon di
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Posted: 11 years ago
just loved the chapter

amazingly written

song is very nice

update soon soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Enjoyed alot while reading part...
Update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I like RK and Kalpi singing session ;)
Hmm everyone is mesmerized
Except some jealous people lol
Lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
So my Dearie's..sum are happy, sum curious , and sum burning..yet reasons so diff. Haha..but I love tadpaying rags..he deserves it..and who better than Rk..to take the bait..well paakhi the selfish Drooler..she too needs to get a reality check..so here goes next update...

Rags didn't at all like their display of love. How could kalpi do such PDA. He didn't believe she loved this bloody show boy..he was such a rat..and kalpi was so innocent. Suddenly he felt Simone pulling at him.Goddd not again this paakhi..
R- what paakhi..what di u want? He asked irritatingly.
P-Raghav..you know this RK has a girlfriend already. He's just using kalpu and she so stupid and behaving as if she has never had a guys attention...and she's such a liar..I will complain her to kamla Maa..
R-" one sec ! What Rk already has a gf? "He was so angry now.."now how can kalpi go with this guy..he's such a characterless jerk..no not at all for kalpi." R u sure that pakhi?"
P - yes rags! Am his crazy fan u know..about his designs. I buy the first ever dress launched by him. I have read a lot bout him. Recently I heard he had ditched his gf..coz he wanted revenge from her. God..and this kalpu...she his all this from me from kamla Maa. How dare she.? U know rags..she's such a jealous girl..she did it purposely ciz she knew Rk would become more of my friend then her. Kamla Maa akwas say that I have that attraction..and kalpi is so boring. And look at her how cheap she's behaving..she always fight with u also..see even u don't like her..she had no friends and then here what a catch? May be rags Rk broke off coz of kalpi only. The way these two r behaving..like crazy showoff lovers. And all coz of her my mood us ruined. Why does she always do it. Rk insulted me..yet she kept quite..RK would have become my friend too..I could have met my so many fav designers..an isko toh kamla as hi sabaj sikhayegi.."paakhi was very very angry..
Raghav was stumped hearing the venom in paakhis voice. She was so jealous just ciz Rk preferred kalpi over her..just because kalpi was hogging all limelight and she was caring two hoots about anyone..this kalpi was a new entity..she looked happy..gorgeous stunning sexy sensuous..words were not enough..and this wasn't acceptable to paakhi. Raghav first time wondered..how badly had he hurt kalpi. Was kamla in so influence of P that she had o confidence and trust on her own daughter..he was mellowing then again a question shot his mind..Is really kalpi reason of Rk break off..he became so furious..he couldn't believe it but what he was seeing proved paaki point..he angrilly walked toward Rk kalpi..both Rk kalpi were busy talking to sum people in party..with rks hand lying possessively on her waist..Raghav had a very hard time to control..his fury..he silently followed them..
R- clapping " brilliant Rk.u play wonderfully..it was amazing..though u can work a Lil on that voice of urs..but ur guitar was beautiful...soul touching..u r immensely talented.."
Rk- not the one to stand by silently to any crude remark.." Thank..Mr.singhaniya..I know I play wonderfully.." Looking towards kalpi " angel always told me she used to get lost ...in mee..whenever I used to play..haha..I still rem angel...and for voice..well I don't need to work on it when I have such an angelic voice singing for me...we make a fearish combo..me the music..she the voice..& our souls..touching chords.." Rk was looking my so lovingly towards kalpi that rs just wanted to snatch his eyes out..he couldn't believe that the strong kalpna was blushing like a lovesick girl...while kalpi was wondering y Rk was flirting so maliciously with her..what was going in his mind..and why in front of Raghav sir..but she knew better not to spoil his mood and plan..so she played along as just he had asked...and their came paakhi trolling behind..
P-Hi Rk. What kalpi? Y did u hide gfrom us that he's ur friend. Don't u think me and kamla Maa had right to know. Smilingly she saw Rk..u know Rk..I am so big crazy fan of ur designs..I buy the first launch u do of ur collection..u r the best in this field..kalpi didn't make us meet..so what..we meet now..and surely u will like me as much as her..and after all we both r same na..kamla Maa ki daughters. Kalpi..u hurt me a lot..today..y do u always hurt me..I have Raghav with me..y would I want him from u. And yes..stop doing this singing d all..u know na Maa will get angry..u better look towards achieving ur goal..OK..these things r not for you..oh Rk..u don't know how boring she is..but she played very smart today...surprised everyone..haan how would she have got the limelight if she had told us all that you were his boyfriend before..I didn't expect this from you kalpi..and I fear how much kamla Maa will be hurt hearing all this..I will not spare you if she cries a single drop".

T be continued..sorry for short update shortage of time...plzz do do comment
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Edited by dreamyjennice - 11 years ago

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