RagNa FF- I Finally Found Someone, Update on Pg 107- 1st November - Page 31

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96



Thanks Pookhi😃

Btw, why are you so embarrassed??😉


I'm embarrassed because my words are not enough to describe how good of a writer you are!
(LoL, I just like that emoticon) 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pookhi


I'm embarrassed because my words are not enough to describe how good of a writer you are!
(LoL, I just like that emoticon) 😆


Lol...I was just kidding Pookhi 😃

Thanks for the appreciation... I am humbled 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Seriously nandini I showed so much patience by deciding not to read this FF in the beginnin because I for one cannot wait for the next update and will die thinking about it the whole day and burn my food while cooking in the kitchen!!!! But then yesterday couldn't control myself and read all the parts together!!! Fabulous yaar! You are too good.
Ab please dont make me go mad and please please update the next part as soon as possible 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey nandini please post the next update sooon👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago

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hey nandini please post the next update sooon👍🏼


Thank you so much for reading this FF buddy. I will definitely update the next part by tomorrow night😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Seriously nandini I showed so much patience by deciding not to read this FF in the beginnin because I for one cannot wait for the next update and will die thinking about it the whole day and burn my food while cooking in the kitchen!!!! But then yesterday couldn't control myself and read all the parts together!!! Fabulous yaar! You are too good.

Ab please dont make me go mad and please please update the next part as soon as possible 👍🏼


Oh My...you read all the parts in one go, you definitely have so much patience😉😃. Thank you so much for your appreciation, I am truly humbled.

Oye please dont get mad, I'll surely update tomorrow😛. Thanks Again for taking out time to read and leave the comment 😊

P.S. I hope you haven't served burnt food to your hubby😉😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just started reading and absolutely love it plzz continue soon!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my Raghav's dream was something intense, wonder what Kalpi reaction will be if she knows of his dreams 😆
Loving it and can't wait to read further
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rozy77

hi nandini 😊

my apologies for the super late response...
I just started working like 3 wks back and im studying as well, so it gets a little hectic
I had some free time tonight and decided to give you a nice and long comment..😊
part 11
wow, this 1 was superb⭐️
I just loved kalpana in this part... she was too awesome👍🏼
no screaming, fighting or attitude. she was genuine..(take that raghav 😆)
surprisingly I wasn't annoyed at raghav at all. infact I was rather pleased that he got lost in her eyes ... and couldn't help but admire her once again😃😆👍🏼
I also liked the flashback of how he became mad when he saw how miserable kalpana was that day.
part 12
amazing part😃
im so glad all his plans failed.. and thank you for not going in to detail for raghav-pookie🤗
I just loved how raghav is so consumed and occupied in kalpana's thoughts but yeah, I didn't like that he turned to alcohol for some relief... poor baby😭
and what followed next was so damn sweet..😳
im relieved that raghav was awake and knows that kalpana was really there taking care of him😃
I enjoyed the injection part 😆, the 'taming spoilt brats' 👍🏼, raghav's laughter and kalpana's awe at witnessing that ❤️and especially my favourite, when he requested her to sit and took her hand to rub his forehead...
the silence and peace was beautifully described👏
and ofcourse, kudos to Sammy sending kalpana there 😎
part 13
☺️
I don't care if it was a dream, Im just so excited that he's started to dream stuff like that...🤣 (excuse my gutter mind)
that was really, really awesome, amazing, beautiful and unexpected☺️
so, this was just a short trailer of a passionate raghav hey? I like it a lot 😉
I loved reading his pov after the dream 😃.
as a reader you can feel his guilt and helplessness at being torn between his revenge (which in my opinion is kinda important) and feeling unconditional love and happiness.
I liked how he started to feel restless assuming that kalpana might hate him for his insults...and im quite happy that he's finally on the right track and thinking of doing some damage control
eagerly waiting for the next part
take care 🤗


Hey Rozy

I am glad you could make time from the hectic schedules to drop your comment that means a lot to me😃 You are one loyal reader I have from PV2 forum and I always look forward for your comments😉😃 I get so few detailed reviews that I'm always eager to read more. Thank you once again for obliging me with a fantastic review and of course a long one...I am turning greedy...lol ! 🤗

Part 11 - Poor Raghav...getting lost in Kalpi's thoughts and eyes has become his favourite past time, lately...bechara things are not in his control😉😆

Part 12 - Lol...you should have guessed it before, do you think I'll write Pakhi's date??😲 I indeed loved writing the whole bedroom moments, taming dialogue was needed to break the intensity of the feelings or else Raghav could have lost his last thread of patience staring at her...You better know how capable he is😉😳

Part 13 - go on girl, you have every right to activate the gutter mind😉😳 I don't blame you...that's bound to happen with the hotmess around I am glad your got my point straight...I wanted the readers to feel his helplessness, guilt and confusion

Thank you dear for telling me which parts you liked the most that will help me to get a flavour of my readers. And do tell me if you want me to pen down any special incidents of your choice, I'll try to put them in the story. Thanks Again for taking out time to review and analyze each bit of the update and offering your feedback. I am truly privileged to have such amazing reader who appreciates my feeble efforts 😊

You too take care Buddy !

Edited by nandinidavid96 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Catched up lately...I guess its better late than never..lol...awww kiss was a dream...chalo koyi nahi...this pace between ragna is so good to read ya...when l the next part be up ??!!??

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