SS : Ek Anokhi Vishwas Part 6 (pg.12) updated - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Wonderful update
I'm feeling so sad to Kalpi
She is so sick yet she come to office to do Raghav work
Sammy is so sweet
Omg! Raghav is getting more rude than usual
I love the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Superb story line
Plz update part3
Just cant wait for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Hey, thanks all. Will update part 3 tonight. Very intense part coming. Keep checking. Thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
we are in Q buddy...bring it on soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Hi all,
I am posting here the Part III. Though it was short, it is little intense. and the next part will be more. will post it tomorrow..
Please post your comments.
Thanks in advance for reading. Love you all.

PART - III

From the morning, kalpi is not at all well. Though she promised pakhiya that she will see the doctor, she could not do so because of the work pressure. Infact, she could not see the system properly. Her eyes were burning and because of the centralized a/c, her fever went high. Moreover, she did not eat anything since morning. She finished her work somehow and came to Raghav's cabin. She was just counting her time.

Ho gaya kalpi. Bus dus minute aur. Iss paper ko dekhar ghar jana hai. Jhate samay, doctor ko dekhkar jana hai. Nahi tho ghadbad ho jayegi. Mujhe seriously kuch ho raha hai. Mere pav kyun thadap raha hai. Kya ho raha hai mujhe. Chakkar jaisa...chakkk..

Thud...

Kalpi just sat on the chair throwing the files on the table and that's it, she fainted.

When Raghav got a call in his mobile, he immediately got a chance to ignore Kalpana and happily started attending the phone, going away from his table showing his back to Kalpana.

While he was talking, he heard a thud sound and turned.

He was literally shocked seeing kalpana sitting on the chair with her head down, eyes closed, on the table and the files are literally thrown.

He abruptly cut the call and came running to her.

Ms.Jadav!...no response.

Kalpana...kalpana ...he shaked her...no response.

Kalpi! Kalpi! He touched her hands and started shaking her hardly. He felt her hands were very hot. He touched her forehead and immediately withdrew his hand...it was too hot.

He felt like his heart stopped beating seeing her like this.

Immediately, someone opened his cabin door and it was Sammy.

Sammy, kal..p..a..na...see kalpana...she fainted...she is not well...she is having fever...do something...he started stammering...

Sammy ran and touched her forehead and got really worried.

He kept his hands on her shoulder to lift.

Wait! Let me lift her..i will put her in the sofa. You just call Dr.Sumanth immediately and ask him to come right now. Urgent!!!! He screamed.

For a second, Sammy got more shock on Raghav's behavior. But still, he managed himself and rushed to Dr.Sumanth in the next building.

Raghav lifted kalpana like a beautiful flower, and when her head touched his heart, he felt like it was thunder in his heart and immediately rain started pouring from his eyes...

His eyes were shedding tears unknowingly seeing his kalpana's state. He cursed himself for everything happened from the morning. Her beautiful eyes were closed and she even don't know what is happening with her. she was shivering literally when he lifted her.

He hugged her tightly and carefully and made her feel comfortable. He made her lie slowly on the couch in his room. He put her shawl completely over her, so that she feel the warmth. He switched off the a/c. Switched on the heater immediately.

He removed her shoes and kept her feet together and started rubbing it. He forgot everything..his office, his project, his meeting, the entire world, everything.

For him, it is only himself and kalpi...and he don't know anything happening around him..he just wants his kalpi to open her eyes. That's it...

To be continued...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Please let me know your feedback. It really encourage me.thanks
I May finish it with the next part. Can't decide. It totally depends on the response I get.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Wow u write so gud
Excellent story line
I really loved it just waiting for d next part
Plz update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Wow...lot bed and this caring rags...oh my muffin
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Wat a place to stop, pls contine soon cannot wait to no wat happens next. beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
wow...this is incredible, amazing write up...too intense and heavy. Please continue the next part soon, cant wait more

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