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Posted: 11 years ago
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Raghav went back to his room with his head full of confusion what is doing, he thought to himself he was deep in thought when maya came out of the bathroom and asked what's the matter raqs what's bothering u, he shook his head & said nothing we need to finish up here then set off back to Mumbai
Whilst kalpi was pacing up and down in her room grinding her teeth what does he think of himself I can't bare this like 1 min hot 1 min cold what's his problem he needs psychiatric help because I can't figure him out she packs her things and rushes out of the hotel room to bump into sammy
What's the hurry is there a fire, I'm not in the mood for your humour I'm leaving I can't stay a min longer I've been insulted enough to last a lifetime sammy is taken aback with her outburst calm down kalpana and tell me whats wrong what could be wrong with me apart from your friend the great Raghav singhania I'm right your wrong I'm big your small that's what his motto is well tell him I'm not being part of this charade any more she tries to get past him but he blocks her way stop 1 min and I'll take you back let me go and tell Raghav now give me a smile you look pretty when you do she hesitantly gives a wry smile and he touches her cheek I'll be back in 2 minutes wait for me
Raghav is observing them from afar and his heart is hurting seeing her close to someone else he feels pangs of jealousy she is mine how can she be so friendly with sammy.
I hope u all like this is my first attempt

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
as much as it sounds cute, it would hab been gr8 if u hadn't forgotten the punctuations 😆 i jst read it in one GO suddenly i was surprised...lets hab anothr part 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very Nice 👍🏼
I'd love to read more...please continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I just wrote it down quickly so I didn't check for mistakes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww sammy being sho sweet...and touching her face? awww and our raghav baba jeeeaaalous!
good job :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Sammy will be kalpi friend

that will get raghav really work up his best friend with kalpi

the writers should do something like that it will be more spicey


what do u all think about that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
its lovely
plz continue with it dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update👍🏼 plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Make it more spicy as ragna
N update soon
Cant wait anymore
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue Falak.. Its wonderful... Bt do concentrate on the punctuations... 😆

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