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Posted: 11 years ago
Please update soon... I am addicted to ur story ..i check daily many times for update ...if there is no update i read the story from beginning ...I read whole story many times since last week ... so please update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update..!! N like d twist n how d relationship status breaks out...waitin 4 next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bravo update
This event ll get ragna mre closer
update soon
can't wait
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Posted: 11 years ago
are wah amazing update, hope paakhi will understand... aww raghav is so caring and lovable and cute... hope kalpi ko kuch na ho
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update! It's so romantic both of them! Hmmm'! Sigh!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 18

waiting in the Hospital for hours looks like waiting for years.. Kamala , Vittal and Paakya are there with them.. Paaki called them and informed about Kalpi..Before an hour the Doctor and came and asked as to arrange for bloog as they ve not stock... It was B+.Fortunately both Yash and Sammy has the same bloog group and they gave.. After that there is no sign of any doctors from OT..

Helplessness its what he felt right now.. Its what he doesn't like .. When he ve money ,fame ,name,power but unable to do anything other than waiting and praying for her...
May be God for the first time heard his prayers.. The Doctor came out and told them she is fine and she ll open her eyes in few hours...

Kamala asked everyone to go home as it is really late.. But no one is willing to move an inch from their place..

Raagav Baba aap ab ghar jaaye kal subha aakar aap Kalpi ko mil sakte hein... Kamala said..
Raagav didnt say anything but just looked at her...Raagav looked at the lady in front of him,the one he thought as his maa,the one whom he came to respect after his father,the one he thought ll never do wrong.. But is he right to think about her like that...Is she really worth of those things.. He doesn't know now..He is not sure...

So Raagav gave a long stare to her and moved aside taking his phone pretending busy ...
Kamala looked at his back and confused .. his stare was accusing even she felt guilt for the reason unknown to her...

Then Kamala went to Paaki and told her to go home.. Even she was not ready to move ... Kamala coaxed to go eat something as she is sitting here from noon... After some coaxing from Kamala Paaki agreed to go and eat something in the hospital canteen...

When she looked for Raagav , he was not there... Even Sammy was not there.. She asked Yash and Samaira but they denied to accompany her...

When Raagav and Sammy looked at Kamala bai coaxing Paaki to go and eat they both left the place noy able to watch anymore.. They doesn't want to create any scene there.. They can't beleive their own eyes, her own daughter is fighting for her life inside..Here she is asking Paaki to eat...

Raagav is really angry Sammy is having a hard time to control Raagav.. Even Sammy is angry,Raagav already told him about Kalpi's childhood... Now he can understand how she might ve lived her life...

After one and a half hour...Kalpi opened her eyes...Nurse informed them the same .. Vittal,Paakya,Kamala,Yash,Samaira,paaki and Sammy went inside... Kalpi looked at them but searching for one more person..

Yash,Kalpi if anything happens to you i would ve lived my whole life in guilt... Tume aisi Hero jaisi harkat kabhi mat karna...

Samaira,you know what i felt when i saw you in blood..she was weeping..we cant lose you Kalpi.. you are only one left for us...agar tumhe bhi kuch hojatha tho...now she crying uncontrollably...

Agar aap dono ko kuch hojato tho main kya karoongi, when no one was there for me only you both were there .. said Kalpi...trying to smile slightly..

Vittal lloked at his Rajkumari bandaged fully in her head..Her right hand was plastered..even her leg has some bangage ..

Tum teekh to ho na Kalpi asked VItal and Kamala at the same time ..Kalpi just smiled and said haan baba.. but neither she looked at Kamala bai nor answered her..
Paakya was crying silently..Kalpi looked at him and asked playfully, kya dada mujhe teekh hone se aapko itna dukh horaha hei ki aap ro rahi hein ...
Paakya smiled at her and prayed to god to never put his sister in this state..

Sammy looked at her and came forward and kissed her bandaged forehead surprising everyone and said get well soon Kalpi...His eyes are teary...

Paaki is a silent spectator to all..

When he bent his head to kiss she saw Raagav.. Standing in the doorway and watching her...
A nurse came inside and told everyone to leave as the patient needs rest..

When everyone turned to leave Paaki said take care Kalpi.. Kalpi just nodded...

Then they Raagav standing near the door..arrey Raagav baba ...started Kamala bai but cut off abruptly by Raagav by walking crossed them to Kalpi...

He came near her bed and looked at her and said MARRY ME...
shocking everyone .. Kalpi just smiled and said haan... it was a double shock ...

Yeh Kalpi tu kya kar rahi...started Kamala but Vittal glared and said chup kar Kamala...
Raagav again shocked everyone by kissing her in front of everyone...

Everyone are happy except Kamala and Paaki.. But no one cared about it...
After few minutes the love birds were intereppted by a coughing sound..
When Raagav turned everyone were looking at their shoes ,ceiling, nails.. except Sammy who is smiling...

Raagav simply asked aap log abhi tak yahaan par hein... making Kalpi to blush more..

The youngsters laughed out loud...Sammy took everyone out giving privacy to Raagav and Kalpi...

She came back only for him... He is living only for her...
Their soul found their mates...They ll face their battle together..

He ll be the sheild for her... She ll be for him.

They ll always be for each other...


The End






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Posted: 11 years ago
Thnk u for the lovely story, a beutiful endin n indeed a beutiful journey set toghtr...i genuienly got a lil emotional in the end
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thax for the wonderful story... I was crying towards the end tht such a wonderful story has ended,... Thanx for the wonderful story... 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a beautiful story, very well written dear🤗... I'm soo upset you ended the ss😭 but I'm happy with the ending, RagNa together😳.. I wish something like this happen too in EMA
I hope you continue to write more ss, os or ff's😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just luvd d end dear... 👍🏼
U mst hav been here 2 luk at me wen i ws reading d last part wen rags asked kalpi 2 marry him... I ws literally blushing... 😉

Nyways thank u sooo much 4 such a wonderful story... 🤗 Hope 2 read more works by u... :)

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