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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum.. Continue soon.. Its very interesting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow lovely dear plz update soon
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Waiting for Paakhi reaction wen she cums 2 no of Raghav n Kalpi's relationship
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update!!!
Liked der convo...damn nice waitin 4 next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww great part ⭐️
loved it when raghav said to kalpana I love you baby 😳
also adore raghav and Sammy's friendship..👍🏼
do continue soon
take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
read all the updates in one go.
loved it to the core.
would have loved to see this in ema, like kalpi going away and then raghav realising his love for her.

do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi @bubblydoll!
I don't read fanfictions so much but today I read this SS of yoursfrom part 2 to part 13 at one go and it was absulutely amazing!
You are very good with emotions and many parts touched me!
Lovely! I really enjoyed reading it!
Part 10 made me blush and I also love how you describe Raghav and Kalpi's feelings!
Great work!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update ...👏...plz continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 14
Its been two days since Raagav went to Mumbai.. Even though they ve been talking on daily basis or more precisly two hours once... It is not enough...Raagav's hands are full with back to back to meetings , new project.. He is really trying to finish everything in two days and get back to his love.. But looking at work load he is not sure whether he can go to Kalpi in two days...

But he misses her soo much.. At times he felt like asking her to come to Mumbai... But he knew Kalpi needs some more time to come to peace with Mumbai where she has seen pain a lot.. He knew if he asks her she ll come but he doesn't want to force her into anything which she is not willing...

On the other side the situation is not much better situation.. Or we can say much worst situation.. Kalpi has got high fever.. She got herself drenched in the nonseasonal rain.. Now suffering... She hide the fever from Ragav as she knows that he is having soo much of work.. She doesn't want to give anymore stress for him..But hiding it from Ragav is really a toughest job.She is tired and her voice can really show it now.. She doesn't ve that much stamina to act everything is alright when he call..

she prays to god to get the fever down..
God heard Kalpi's prayers becoz in the evening the fever went down but she still feel weakness...

Yash and Samaira is going to Mumbai for some work.. samaira wanted to back out because of Kalpi's fever but Kalpi insist them to start and told them she is alright.. They called her to come along as it is for two days ... Kalpi is in dilemma whether to go or not..

Is She ready to face her demons of past.. Will she be able to act non chalent with her mom...taking decisions is much more easy than putting in action.. will it hurt her to see her mom and paaki together.. will she be able to accept her mom's love on her if she showed.. on the brighter side she wants to meet Raagav its been two days since she last saw him... She can't force Raagav to come just for her leaving his work.. If she goes to Mumbai he ll be tension free...On the other side for how many day she can hide here pretending nothing is wrong.. So she decides to go to Mumbai with Yash and Samaira.. Kabaab mein haddi bankar... They asked for it...she shrugged herself... RAAGAV.. HERE I COME...

They all decided to start in the morning so they can reach in afternoon.They can work till evening and Yash and Samira planned to go out in night...

Kalpi called her dad and told him about her arrival and asked him keep it as a secret..
Vittal was really happy hearing the news.. Talking with her once in a while didnt do good.. Even it is for two days he ll see his Rajkumari till his heart content.. He allowed his daughter to go to panchgani only for her happiness,,, He missed her soo much .. His face showed him soo much of happiness after all it is his Rajkumari coming home..

Paakya heard the one sided conversation of his Father with his sister.. He understood that his sister is coming to Mumbai at last... He and Kalpi doesn't share that much because Kalpi spent half of her life in hostel.. But when his sister left home he understood how much her presence mean to him.. He understood its because of aayi.No one told him anything that happened. But the strained relationship of his baba and aayi spoke volume...Kalpi called him inbetween and sent him a mobile as a birthday gift.. But it doesn't match the Birthday wish with a smile she always give...Money doesn't matter to us.. Its always about love,care and affection...He misses her a lot.. She was the brightness of this house...

We understand the importance of one when they are not around...

They reached Mumbai by 12'o clock.. Kalpi is having mild fever.. Samaira is asking her take rest in her house.. So they dropped Kalpi in her chawl ,kalpi insisted them not to tell anyone about her arrival and she ll come to signhania construction in the evening ... Samaira looked at Kalpi sceptically but didnt question her...
When Kalpi went inside her compound she saw Manda talking some bull shit but Kalpi didnt wait to listen to her.. She went inside her home.. Her Dad didnt go to work today she screamed Baba... Her baba hugged her and kissed her forehead... Tumhe abhi bhi bhukaar hei beta... said vittal ..Haan baba medicine leli thodi der mein teek hojaavungi... said Kalpi ...In all their interaction they forgot another person standing in the corner of the same room.. (its called KARMA)

Kamala saw her daughter after two whole months.. But still her Kalpi didnt see her... Kamala called Kalpi beta...
Kalpi turned her head and saw her aayi.. and smiled .. But the smile didnt reach her eyes.. She went and took her blessing and moved back before kamala bai hugged her...

Pakya came home in the afternoon for Lunch.. He doesn't know when his sister is coming home.. He thought of going home for lunch if kalpi didnt come then he can go to work after lunch...
But to his surprise Kalpi was sitting with Baba.. He hugged his sister ..Both their eyes were glazed with tears..
Both father,brother and daughter finished their lunch while talking more or less gossipping about everything that happened in the past two months...
Kalpi's phone rang it was Raagav..Kalpi took the phone and went outside.. She cut the phone immedietly telling some excuses... Raagav stared at his phone for two minutes and mumbled paagal...

After lunch kalpi had some tablets and slept for some time.. Her phone rang again it was Samira asking about her health..Samaira called her to SC if she is well.. Kalpi jumped at the excuse and got ready to go to office..
Vittal asked her to take rest but Kalpi said its for two hours Baba... I ll be back soon...and went away...
Kalpi felt jittery while entering SC but she doesn't ve choice now...
She entered office she felt like everyone looking at her... But Sammy was the one first shout her name while going to conference room... Everyone stopped in their tracks and looked at Kalpi's direction...
Sammy took the initiative and came side hugged her...
and said its been long Long Kalpana... said Sammy..
Haan sir its really been long said Kalpi looking at Raagav..
Glad you are back said Sammy... looking at Raagav.. Then both looked at each other and smiled knowingly...
All the while four persons standing and gwaking at them..
One is Raagav signhania and another one is Paaki Kapoor...

Another set is Yash and Samaira...as Kalpi never mentioned them about her previous company being Singhnania construction...

Raagav looked at her from the distance and took his fill...

Edited by bubblydoll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its awesum dear...
nw i really want 2 know hw rags n kalpi wil bhav in front of pahki...
Plzzz update soon... :)

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