This is my very first FF on RaGna.So plz dnt throw slippers or tomatoes...Hope u all like it (fingercross)
Story start hote hai 10years ke leap ke baad aur leap ke ek dum baad raghav Australia se wapis aata hai.
main points abt the characters:
1:kalpi ne raghav aur prem ko nhi dekha hua.
2:pakhi ne raghav ko nhi dekha hua.
3:prem ne kalpi aur raghav ko ni dekha hua.
Part-1(kalpi birthday)
kalpi(kapoor's ke ghr ke bhar):kyu aai to mere sath hmesha aisa karti hai.aaj tune vada kiya tha ki tu pura din mere sath rahege par tu hmesha pakhi ke liye mujhe hurt karti hai (tears in her eyes) samne se ek car aa ke rukti hai aur driver seat wala usse dkhta rahta hai..
Guy:continuse usse dkhta rahta hai aur bolta hai yaar ye kitni cute hai,kitni innocent hai..
Kalpi(in anger): kya hua phele kabhi kisi ladki ko dikha nhi kya jo aise dkh rhe ho..
Guy:Dekha to bht logo ko hai but aap jaise kabhi koi dikha he nhi..
Kalpi(thinkig): bht ajeeb hai ye..
Guy:kalpi ko aakh maar ke chala jata hai..
Kalpi(shocked):hadd hai iske itni himmat ki isne mujhe aakh maari isko to mai dkh lugi ab ghr jati hu late ho rhe hai baba pareshaan ho rkhe hoege chalte hue usne dekha ki koi car uska picha kar rhi hai vo piche platt ke dkhti hai to vo car wahi ruk jati hai vo phr chalna shuru karti hai aur dkhti hai ki vo car abhi bhi uska picha kar rahe hai..
Guy:Hey bhagwan kitna aur chalege ye kya mai isko lift dene ki liye puchu.nhi yaar pta chal ye mujh par he bhadak jae..
Kalpi(in anger):ab bht ho gya ab mai iss car wale ko chodugi nhi ab ye sunnega vo car ki taraf jati hai..
Guy:abey ye to teri taraf he aa rhe hai bhaaga car nhi to tu gya.yaar mujhe kya ho rha hai mai yha jis kaam ke liye aaya hu vo na kar ke is ladki pe kyu dhyan de rha hu..
Kalpi:ab to mai isse chodugi nhi.vo uss taraf jate hai aur slip ho jate hai aur vo uth bhi nhi pati aur samne se truck aa rha hota hai aur kalpi truck ko nhi dikhti..
Hope u guys like it and please give ur comments in both cases if u like it or not...waiting for ur rpy plz rpy guys...