Ragna os: Emotions last part page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago

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amazing...plz continue..
hope something should happen like this...!!

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bubblydoll

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part 2:

There is no sound in the room except their heart beats and wall clock sound..

each one is busy in their own world..

Everyone knew in their hearts and mind that silent slap which kalpi gave without an argument and even without a sound did pain a lot.. may be less than a pain which they all gave to kalpi with their accusation...

Ragav's pov:

What the hell did i do ... me and my anger..i didnt even remember what all i told her in a fit of anger.. i ll never be able to look at her in her eyes ever again.. i didnt even give her a chance to explain... i should say sorry.. then suddenly his male ego came out of nowhere.. why should i say sorry.. i am Ragav signhania.. i ll not say sorry to anyone.. its a mistake because of certain circumstances.. everyone makes mistake.

Paaki pov:

Oh God!what did i do.. yeh sab meri galti hei.. prem ne papers mujhse churaya aur upar se main kalpi ko blame kiya.. she remembers the words she spoke in the heat of the moment.. oh god i should say sorry to kalpi and kamala maa..

sammy pov:

yeh sab mera wajesa huwa hei.. i heard the one sided conversation and came to the conclusion.i should ve followed kalpi to clear my doubts and then i should ve told everyone..

maya pov:

she is watching Ragav more keenly.. his facial expression clearly shows guilt.. am i dreaming Ragav and guilt.. woh bhi ek mamuli si employee keliye... is it somthing i am missing...

Of all the things happening in office and in everyones mind.. one girl is walking aimlessly in the road with tears in her eyes.. she controlled her tears in the office but now she ve no control over it.. is it what everyone think about me..that i ll do anything for sucess and money..and suddenly a car came and hit her and went away in the same speed.. she fell down in the road with pool of blood around her..

Kamala pov:

yeh deva sub teek tho hei na.. mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hei ki kuch bura hone wala hei... please Deva sub ka khayal rakh na... at the same time the diya went off..

In office :

In a strict tone ragav said everyone get back to work.. everyone looked at him shocked..

sammy: lekin ragav..

ragav cuts off by saying i said get back to work..

In the hospital

someone admitted kalpi in the hospital and called kamala maa from kalpi's phone..

Kamala maa came with victor and pakya...

Kamala: kalpi meri kalpi ko kya huwa hei..

Man:mam meine aapko phone kiya thaa aap ki beti ko accident hogaya aur meine yahaan admit kiya tha.. doctors unko treatment deh rahi hein..

Kamala: aapko bahot bahot dhanyavad ..

victor: haan aapne meri raajkumari ko bachaya...

Man:koi baat nahi hei aap aapki beti ka khayal rakhyege.. and he went away..

victor: ji

Then after sometime Doctor came and said nothing much jus a small accident.. aap aaj raat ko ghar lekar jaa sakthi hein..

victor: can i meet her doctor?

DR: ji.. lekin ab woh soh rahi hein.. jaakar dekhiye..

kalpi was sleeping in the room with the bangage in her head and hand..

they all came outside after seeing her..

kamala called paaki to tell about accident ...

In office

paaki sammy and raghav were discussing abt the project which obviously kalpi prepare kiya thaa..

after seeing the caller paaki's face turned white..

Paaki: oh god kalpi ne kamala maa ko sab bata diya hoga... iss liya woh call karrahi hein..

sammy asked paaki to put it on speaker seeing ragav's face..

paaki did the same

kamala: paaki beta kahaan yeh aap..

paaki: kamala maa mein office mein hoon. main jaan thi hoon..

she was cut off by kamala

kamala : kya aap jaan thi hein phir bhi aap hospital nahi aayi hein..

paaki: kyaaa hospital...

kamala: beta kalpi ko accident hogaya .. she is admitted in the city hospital ..

after hearing the word accident ragav started sweating in the ac room...

paaki: mein aavoongi...

the trio left for the hospital..

In hospital

kalpi is still sleeping with the help of pain killers..

the trio reached hospital..

after seeing kamala maa the trio reached her..

paaki : kamala maa kya huwa kalpi ko..

kamala: kuch nahi betiya chota sa accident .. she is sleeping ..arrey ragav baba aap kyun aayi ..yeh chota sa accident.. meri kalpi strong hein ..

Ragav felt like dying in guilt.

paaki: yeh sab meri wajeh se hogaya.. naa mein itni careless hoti nahi kalpi ko blame karthi..

suddenly kamala maa asked yeh tum kya keh rahi hei..

paaki came to consiousl and said no kamala maa kuch nahi.. she stammered..

but kamala was adament.. bolo paaki kya baat hei tume meri kasam..

when paaki heard the word kasam she told everything that happened from morning in the office..

kamala heard everything and took a step back from paaki..(maybe this is the first time she took step back from paaki..)

she looked at ragav .. he bent down his head in shame..

paaki : kamala maa..

kamala : nahi paaki...tumhe pata hei tumne kya kiya.. she recalled the happenings of sterday.. how she told high of paaki in front of prem..

kamala: aap log jaa sakthi hein.. hamari aukaad nahi hein aap jeisi log se baat karni ki..

paaki: i am sorry..

in the mean time a nuse came and said kalpi opened her eyes..

everyone went inside but kamala maa didnt see the other three also came inside..

when kalpi opened her eyes she saw aayi baba and dada... with tears in their eyes..

at the back paaki stood crying with ragav and sammy..

kamala saw her daughter looking beyond her she saw the trio...

suddenly she said arrey aap log jaaye...

aap log yahan aapko time waste mat kariya..

Ragav was contionously looking kalpi to look at him..but no she didnt even raised her eyes...

when he heard kamala maa voice.. didnt ve gut to look at kamala maa nor kalpi so he left ..

sammy and paaki followed suit...

kamala maa stood there watching everyone..

first time in her she felt all the EMOTIONS at the same time...

she felt HAPPY becoz kalpi is safe..

she felt PRIDE becoz kalpi proved her worth..

she felt ANGER on the trio for blaming kalpi..

Today even kamala bai felt a silent slap on her.. becoz today for the first day in her life she herself felt she gave much more importance to others.. other than kalpi her own blood ...

hello guys.. i am not sure its full of ragna but i felt kalpi should not let go of her self respect jus becoz of her maa's dreams..

both positive and negative comments are welcome...

thank you all for the support..

Edited by bubblydoll - 11 years ago

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Mihika

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Posted: 11 years ago

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you know what even i was thinking about this accident sequence after kalpi proves herself...both the parts are awesome👏

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bubblydoll

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Posted: 11 years ago

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thank you mihika.. great minds think alike...

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Mehr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Amazing work! 👏

i really liked both parts. 😊

kalpi's accident and Raghav sweating, and the hospital scene is just too good. 😊 😊

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beginner46

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Really love it dear it made me cry 😭 please continue 😭

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OmkaraKiParvati

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Continue Bubblydoll. Welcum to EMA forum.. Sorry, I dnt know ur name... My name is Deepika. U can call me Deepi, Deepu, Veera or as sum call me Mrs. Sammy Raizaada 😆...

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bubblydoll

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Last part

its been a week since anyone saw kalpi..

yes she was discharged from the hospital the same day..

but she didnt come to office(obviously)

paakhi pov:

she didnt meet kamala maa for a week.. neither she talk with kamala maa.. she tried to apolgised to kalpi but her mobile is switched off.. she felt terrible after the day in office.. she knew she behaved really bad.. after thinking for a week she came to the conclusion that she behaved badly because she thought ragav will think bad about her.. but after sammy said kalpi met prem she put the entire blame on kalpi without thinking..out of all the people in the world she should know that kalpi will never join hands with prem..

Ragav was pacing back and forth in his cabin.. for the outsiders it may look like he is in a bad mood.. a very very bad mood..but for the one who is sitting inside the cabin that is our very own sammy is getting a headache.. so much for not clearing the doubts..

Ragav pov:

how dare she? how dare she switch off her mobile.. and more than that she didnt even come to office(how ll she come after hearing so much good about her),what ll i do. i cant even dare to go to her house.. after seeing kamala maa in that avatar in hospital.. its a big noo..i should apologise..but how? i shouldn't ve said those hurtful words..how ll i meet her..i dont even know how is she? or has the bandage has been removed or not? is she okay? will she able to do her work?oh god i am going mad...

sammy pov:

its nothing new for sammy.. he is seeing this avatar of ragav for the past week.. even he is trying his best to help his friend but to no avail.. he knows after seeing kalpi in the hospital his friend didnt eat or sleep properly..if he asks him why he is restless.. he ll not answer..but i know why is this restlessness..the emotion and restlessness his friend going through is not just becoz kalpi is kamala maa daughter the emotion is more stronger...who ll explain this to his friend who is really not in a state to listen anyone... even these emotions should not be explained, it should be felt by own.

Kalpi pov:

i should feel relaxed rite..that i am not working for that khadoos.. but why i am unhappy.. why is that i wanted to see him out of all the people.. i ll not think about him..in the hospital did i see correctly he was sorry , is he? did i read him coreectly,ragav sir aur sorry,yeh kabhi ho saktha hei kya...there was somthing in his eyes lekin kya.. kalpi chodo tum uski baare mein sochna bhi mat..lekin maine ussi ki baare soch rahi hoon poori ek hafte keliye.. maa ne mujhe wahaan naukri karne nahi dete.. marks aane ki baad ,i should work for some other company.. kya main kisi aur keliye kaam kar sathi hoon kya...why kalpi wherever i work anyway they are going to give me salary if RS or some other company..she is fighting with her inner thoughts..

In office

Suddenly a call came for sammy... he started smiling.. he suddenly said ragav ur route is clear..

Ragav was like what the hell??? sammy continued saying that kalpi is alone in her house her parents went to visit her grand mother her brother is in his job and ll not be home by 10. its just 5'o clock. so u start now yahaan ka kaam main sambalunga(as if they were doing work for past week)

Ragav didnt wait for another second... he reached chawl in 20 minutes.. parked the car in a safe distance so no one ll notice his car near chawl.. and went inside today of all days luck was in his side no one was outside so he went directly inside the chawl and knocked kalpi home..

and kalpi opened the door and got the shock of her life..

but after seeing each other after a week, they both realized how much they both missed each other..

Ragav didnt wait kalpi to open the door fully .. he just barged inside and hugged her to himself..and closed the door with his leg..

kalpi didnt reciprocate the hug first. she was shocked to find Ragav in her house and he just hugged her... HUGGED HER..

kalpi came from the imaginary world and hugged him back... there was no space for air to go between them..(if air is not allowed there is no way paaki ll come between them)..

when kalpi didnt reciprocate the hug ragav felt hurt when he thought of removing his hand kalpi hugged him back and took him to heaven.. there is no need of words between them..they both understood each other silence very well...

Today they both ragav and Kalpi understood the Hidden Emotion within them...

Now they knew the name of the Emotion which was between them over long years...

Now they knew what ll happen to them(us also)if they are away from each other, which they ll never do...

hei everyone this is the last part of this os... this is the first time i ve written something .. i thought of finishing it off in the first part itself after seeing ur support, i wrote three parts which is really unbeleivable for me... thank you all for the support ...

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Mihika

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Posted: 11 years ago

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they were all beautiful👏👏

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