RagNa FF: Kahon Naa Pyaar Hai

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everyone...I'm new to this forum..actually I was a silent reader nd enjoyed every post..but I think tht this forum is so quiet and I don't like this...I want to make this forum more lively so here I'm starting a FF on RagNa😳 (sorry for RaKhi fans, I don't have anything against RaKhi)
Maybe some of you knw me frm other forums, which I don't think would be the case😆...
All members who knw me knw really well tht I love to start new stories bt don't finish them as I update after ages...

Hopefully its ok with u guys..nd I hope u'll accept me here😳

So here u go with my story: Kaho Naa Pyaar Hai

Prolog:
Kalpi and Pakhi are almost of the same age but Pakhi is few hours older than Kalpi..Both are friends bt just to some extent...But why just to some extent?? Let me explain it...Both have some unspoken words which leads to misunderstandings...So where is the problem now?
The problem is how their mom treats them...Neetu, Pakhi's mom, is a woman frm a high class...Parties and meetings with high class women is her life...But thts not the problem...she love Pakhi and really cares for her bt she is kind of silly women who does not understand the critical situation which she creates with her non-stop talking...At every party she somehow takes Kalpi along with her...So whats the problem?? The problem is tht Neetu tries to hide Pakhi's weakness by overshadowing her with Kalpi's talents as she is better when it comes to education, talent and houshold...This makes Pakhi jealous of Kalpi and somtimes hate her too..This is why Pakhi is sometimes rude to Kalpi and when she is rude she can talk really bitter as she can't bear how Kalpi takes her part of love frm her thts why she keeps Kalpi's mom, Kamla, away frm her which leads to Kalpi's loneliness...What Pakhi does not knw is tht Neetu does not praise Kalpi bt humilate her indirectly...
Kalpi is a really nice person by heart...but she is really hurt by everyone...The reason behind this? Her mother never showed her love for her bt always loved Pakhi which made her often ask herself if she is really Kamla's daughter..,Kamla had always neglated and always forgot about Kalpi which Kalpi can't forget even is she tries to forget...bt as much as she tries to be happy and overlook all this Pakhi would never leave a chance to hurt her with these facts...Another point which makes Kalpi feel lonely would be how Neetu uses her as a show peace infront of everyone...she has to hear so many things frm people about her skin colour etc which hurts her and make her uncomfortable...What hurts her more is tht her mother never tried to stop all this things wht Neetu does as she trusts Neetu too much more than Kalpi...At the end its Kalpi who feels out of place bt still smiles as she has only one aim:
leaving this world behind her and starting a new life elsewhere were no one will know her, use her or judge her...

In short its a story about how all characters try to hear the words
"I Love you" from a special person thts why the story is called "Kahon Naa Pyaar Hai"😳

I hope u guys understood the story a lil bit...I can't explain it better coz I can't order my thoughts..I didn't read anything wht I've written again..soo plz bear with me nd kindly ignore any mistakes😆
If someone has some question regarding the content u can ask me😃

waiting for ur reply😃😃😃

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MyAnastasia18 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Character Sketch:

Kalpi:
20 years old, daughter of Kamla and Vitthal Jadav...
A kind person who tries to keep everyone happy...she doesn't like to be shown as a showpeace and prefers to be alone where she can cry her pain out...She never shows anyone her inner feelings and mostly keeps quiet and obeys every order which she gets...She never answeres anyone back

Pakhi:
20 years old, daughter of Neetu and
She is a nice girl and tries to impress her mom so she would aprecciate her and love her...Although she is Kalpi's friend, cares for her and shares everything with hers he somewhere hates her as she is the reason why her mom neglates her..

Neetu:
She is the mother of Pakhi and Prem..she loves both her children bt when she sees tht Kalpi is way better than Pakhi she gets angry...she doesn't want Kalpito become something better in than Pakhi thts why she always hurt Kalpi in the hope to destroy her completly...
She is a rich woman bt wht not everyone knows is tht she was once a poor woman who also uses to live in a chawl like Kamla does...Actually Neetu, Kamla and Vitthal used to leave together in the same chawl as neighbours bt somehow they became rich and left the chawl (its a twist how the become rich😉)..Neetu is still a silly women who does not knw how to talk, wht to talk and when to talk which shows tht she just wants to belong to the higher class..

Kamla:
She is a lovely human...she loves her children Kalpi, Pakhya and also Pakhi...In her eyes she treats every child equal...She knows tht something is wrong with Kalpi as she keeps quiet, never shares anything with her except when she asks her anything she would get short answers..she can see tht its really difficult for Kalpi to talk to her...she somwhere wishes her to be like Pakhi bt doesn't say this...But she believes tht Kalpi would always share her feelings with her as she is her mother and also coz Kalpi never disobeys her she thinks tht they share a good relationship where she doesn't have to show how much she loves her...Sadly she doesn't see tht this is the only thing which would bring them closer..

Raghav:
He's just like in the show..do I hav to say anything else??😳😳
Ok so he's 28 years old...hot headed, arrogant, rude and egoistic..bt behind every rudness there is a good aim...in short he's a mystrry😳😳😳

Ok I think thts enough..these r the main characters..others r also there😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice ff hey i am first one to cooment 😊 loved your ff title and how you described chracters and story line do pm me when u update next chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeppy...
One more story.
Loved the cs and prologue. Awesome. Update soon.
Waiting 4 it.
Edited by Wj.mad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow one more ff lovely :))) welcome to the forum... and I really hope u don't update in ages.. would love to read it soon :)))) awesome prologue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Anastasia... The way u explained the story is really very nice... The character sketch is interesting... Waiting for ur chapters to start... Continue and update soon... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Prologue...waiting for the update, continue soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow really nice! Do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue and character sketch r Superb👏.Update soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome to the EMA forum dear :-)
Very touching prologue 😳
CS are nice.
Update soon 😃

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