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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey frnz... updating the next chapter

have fun and leave comments and suggestions😊

Sorry for mistakes...



A Twisted Tale part 19

Thursday morning

Raghav and Sammy picked up both the girls from Chawl... they were stunned to see the luggage

Kalpi: (to sammy) whattt

Sammy: (naughtily to Kalpi) I thought we are going for shabad's wedding... but by going by ur luggage looks like u r getting married.

Pakhi: (mocking) what's so surprising we just took few dresses, a few pairs of footwares, make up kits etc etc...

Sammy: (taunting Pakhi) who crares what you wear??

Pakhi: Most of the guys care, and I can give you that in writing...

Sammy: whateva!!!

Pakhi: yeah whateva!!!

They sat in the car and Raghav and Kalpi gave each other we need to do something kind of look. Raghav was driving and Sammy was sitting beside him on the pessanger seat.. both girls were on the backseat.. Raghav was looking at Kalpi through the rearview mirror. She was looking like a fresh daisy with very little make up on. Mauve coluored top and loose French plait were adding more to her beauty. But one thing that was bothering Raghav was sadness flowing into her eyes... she pretended to be happy but her lonely eyes were spoking otherwise... she was lost! Suddenly Pakhi screamed..

Pakhi: Ohhh NOoo!

Everybody turned to look at her.

Raghav: what happened??

Pakhi: I forgot to bring something important.

Sammy: (annoyingly) goddd, there is no room for any more stuff in your suitcase. So stop screaming!

Pakhi felt silent... Kalpi asked her what did she forget?

Pakhi: (in a sorry tone) I forgot your anklet box on the counter, I'm so sorry yaar.

Kalpi: It's ok, kya hoga ab nahin pahungi... no big deal..

Pakhi: but I know I like wearing anklets.. and you won't wear mine (looking down)

Kalpi: It's fine na... chill

Both were talking in a low voice but not low enough for Raghav to hear. They stopped at a restaurant for lunch and Pakhi forced them to see the places around...

They reached their destination by evening... thanks to Pakhi that Raghav was laughing throughout the way... this was the first time he wasn't finding her annoying and irritating... Sammy & Kalpi spoke only in bits and turns...

Shabad and Natasha were really happy to see them... Natasha was a middle-class 24 year old beautiful primary school teacher. She met Shabad, Kalpi and Sammy during their joint project. She was an orphan, aunt and uncle were the only family she had. The private resort was beside a sea shore,,,, it had a beautiful beach and a lovely lawn...

Natasha: (hugging Kalpi & Sammy) I'm so happy that you come... I was feeling so lonely.

Shabad introduced her to Raghav & Pakhi.

Natasha: (to Raghav) So you are Raghav, Shabad talks a lot about you, he really adores you.

Raghav: (surprisingly) are you sure he wasn't joking or wasn't talking about someone else???

Natasha: (laughs) no he doesn't jokes about friends...

Shabad cut her short to divert the topic.

Shabad: don't exaggerate Tasha... btw leave the ladies alone and follow me guys.

Everybody was looking at him with surprised expressions. Shabad told them Kalpi & Pakhi will be from girls side and Sammy & Raghav would be ladke wale...

Shabad: So, excuse us ladies...

Natasha: Excused, but aaj to ladki wale hi dhamal machengi (with confidence)

Shabad: don't underestimate us, we gonna rock tonight.

Natasha: let the best team win (winking at Shabad)

Shabad felt silent, he was blushing... the girls followed Natasha to her room.

Shabad: listen guys I'm a Marathi and Natasha is Punjabi and I want you guys to rock this Sangeet function for me... ye ladki wale bade tez hain plz sab sambhal lena or mujhe bhi

Raghav: (smiles) It's just a wedding, y are u nervous??

Shabad: Hahaha Raghav... I know it's just a wedding but "it's my wedding" (stressing upon the later words)

Raghav: well, nobody forced you to get married

Shabad: hanso hanso khoob hanso tumhara bhi number aayega bahut jaldi

Sammy: relax Shabad, everything is gonna b ok... just relax, we are with you.

Shabad: (hugging him) thanx Sammy, tum nahi hote to mera kya hota...

Raghav: Jo hona hai wahi hota...

Shabad: geee Raghav can you lose yourself a bit, it's a wedding not a business meeting.

Raghav: (sighing) well I don't see any difference.

Shabad: If you can't empathise with me, least you could do is to stop acting like a heartless jerk...

Raghav: (retorts) look who is talking... you are one who said true love never worked for me...

Sammy: hold on guys, It's like I'm standing with two teenage girls, who just got their first proposals... it's no war, why you two are so nervous. We have lots of things to do before evening.

They were shown their room... and told to get ready for the Sangeet ceremony in the evening...

In Natasha's Room

Natasha was getting ready for the function. Pakhi and Kalpi were helping her.

Pakhi: you'll make a beautiful bride.

Natasha: (smilingly) thank you

Kalpi: nervous???

Natasha: hmmm... I'm scared.. I don't belong to his world... I am not sure if I could stand up to his expectations..

Kalpi: who told you all this rubbish..

Natasha: Diya, the wedding planner's assistant, said I'm not his type. Though I don't like her, she is always after rich guys, but what if she is right..

Kalpi: (putting her hand on her shoulder) your fear is useless, when two people love each other their worlds become one... and you know na Shabad loves you.

Just then her aunt entered the room... she was looking at Natasha with teary eyes.

Aunt: (to Kalpi & Pakhi) you two also get ready fir mehndi bhi lagani hai na...

They both nodded and left the room.

Pakhi and Kalpi both were wearing traditional lehnga cholis...

Kalpi: (smiles) Pakhi, someone's gonna faint today, you look ravashing

Pakhi: so do you, Kalpi tumahri menhdi abhi tak nahi sookhi, maine to hath bhi do liye, dekho (showinh her hands)

Kalpi: it's beautiful, mine is gonna take some time, can u please go and see if Natasha needs anything.

Pakhi: Sure, but are you sure you don't need me?

Kalpi: no I'm fine, u go

Pakhi left kalpi alone in her room..

Kalpi's POV: kab sookhegi ye menhdi,,, I have to tuck this dupatta right.

She was looking outside the window, when wind blew something into her eye. She felt a sharp irritation in her eye. She couldn't rub her eye due to menhdi. Just then he heard Raghav's voice. He was standing at the door for past 15 minutes and was admiring the beauty of god's master piece (Kalpi). He forgot that he came to give her something...

Raghav: (with concern) are you alright?

Kalpi: (trying to open her eyes) ummm something blew into my eye..

Raghav: let me see...

Kalpi: no no I'll be fine... can you help me wash my hands...

Raghav: No!!!! Menhdi sookhi nahin hai abhi... now stand still (he orders)

Kalpi knew there is no point arguing this man, so she stood still. Raghav went near her and blew a warm air into her eye; he used his handkerchief to the needful thing... Kalpi moved a little due to irritation.

Raghav: (orders) Don't move Kalpi... you'll smudge your kajal...

Kalpi: thank you I'm feeling better...

Raghav: It's ok,

Now she could see him clearly. He was looking breathtakingly hot in black Sherwani... Raghav noticed her looking at him in amusement...

Raghav: (smilingly) anything else???

Kalpi: huh??? no thank you..

Raghav: you are still not ready?

Kalpi: I'll b...

Before she could complete her sentence she heard a click sound of door...

Kalpi's POV: Did he lock the door... deva hamesha inko kyun bhej deta hai tu...

Kalpi: (in anger) aap kya kar rahein hai mujhe ready hona hai aap bahar jao

Raghav: (crossing his arm over his chest) I'm not going... do whatever you want...

Kalpi: to theek hai main hi chali jati hoon

She moved towars the door but stopped mid-way realising she hasn't tucked her pallu yet.

Raghav: Kya hua ab nahin jana (smirks)

Kalpi: Raghav aap bas...

She was cut short by a knock on the door... A man was asking to open the door. Kalpi was nervos... she took a step towards door but Raghav pulled her back...

Raghav: I'll go..

He opened the door; the man asked him if he could come in, he needed to collect few things from the room.

Raghav: (stopping him from entering) tell me whatever you need; I'll give it to you.

The man gave him a confused look... but didn't argue. After the man left, he came towards kalpi.

Raghav's POV: Nobody can see you like this other than me,,,,,,, stop Raghav what are you thinking,,,,,, loosing your mind again...

Raghav: Before anyone else comes in, stop being stubborn and let me help you...

Kalpi: (shyly) you know how to do this???

Raghav: Of course yes, I wear such clothes everyday (sacastically)... Now just guide me...

He took the dupatta and started following her instructions... His hands touching her bare waist shot up tingles in her vains.. He did everything like a professional, never looked into her eyes but fixed it excetly how Kalpi wanted it to be...

Raghav: Done, I guess.

Kalpi turned around to see herself in mirror, but all she could notice she was Raghav standing just behind her...

Kalpi's POV: You two look good together Kalpi... together goshhh no no no I can't think like that... this is so embarrassing thank god he didn't hear it...

Raghav: Why are you so embarrassed, thinking of something naughty (teasing)??

Kalpi: Nothing like that, now go,,

Raghav: something is not right..

Kalpi: (facing mirror again) no, I'm re...

Raghav pulled her towards him before she could complete the sentence... they were so close just an inch apart. Kalpi was standing still holding her breath. Raghav tucked her curls behind ear and placed her bindi in the center.

Raghav: perfect! Now see you ... btw there is something for you at the table... (signalling towards a box)

Kalpi: (looking at the table) what???

Raghav: jab mehndi sookh jaye to dekh lena...

Saying that he stepped out of the room... with a smile

Kalpi's POV: kya ho sakta hai ye Kalpi... this man confuses me... vo mere duppata fix kr skte the but iss box mein kya hai ye ni bata skte the... kuch bhi ho I don't care...


to be continued...

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Posted: 11 years ago
bahut bahut acha.
Loved every1 2day.
Cute moment b/w ragna.
Thanks 4 updating.
Waiting 4 next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update the next part soon Harsha.. Very interesting.. Raghav putting her dupatta was 😳 . Update soon and THANX for NOT leaving it wid a cliff hanger.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...this is indeed beautiful😊
Raghav helping Kalpi with dupatta... oh my I'm dead. He must have brought anklets for her❤️

Thanks for the awesome update. Please continue soon, this is really nice😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice👏 update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome Harshana 👏
i'm swooning with the RagNa scenes...oh sooo romantic...him fixing her duppatta, him fixing her bindi, *swoon swoon, faint!*
update soon dear! 😊
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aww really nice update.. love raghav kalpi part❤️
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Originally posted by: mehr05

awesome Harshana 👏

i'm swooning with the RagNa scenes...oh sooo romantic...him fixing her duppatta, him fixing her bindi, *swoon swoon, faint!*
update soon dear! 😊

thnx mehr... even I was finding it difficult to project him like this😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally read all chaptr... amazing harshu
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey hey peeps... having good time na... the next chapter is up..

while writing this chapter I realised that I suck at writing wedding sequences👎🏼 but still I tried my best in less time... thank you all for bearing with me and please do comment😊

Enjoy


A Twisted Tale Part 20

The Sangeet ceremony was on full swing. Diya took the spotlight and announced Natasha and Shabad's to perform together...

They danced on the numbers... Tune to pal bhar mein chori kiya re jiya more piya... desi girl and chal pyar karegi...

Kalpi & Pakhi walked over to Sammy & stood beside him. Raghav glanced at Kalpi as she hurried past him, her eyes on the floor, her cheeks a faint pink.

A man approached the girls.

Guy: "You are looking beautiful tonight, ladies. Brains & beauty. Raghav Singhania is a lucky man.

Kalpi & Pakhi gave each other a confused look.

Guy: I'm Abhi, Shabad's business associate. I wanted a companion to join me on the dance floor.

Abhi glanced at Kalpi who was looking away,

Abhi: Miss Kalpana, care to do me the honours?
Kalpi shook her head. Raghav was looking at them through the corner of his eye.

Getting no response from Kalpi, Abhi asked Pakhi to dance with him... with a little hesitation she agreed.

Pakhi's POV: this is your chance Pakhi to make Sammy jealous. Even if he don't get jealous, he would give some reaction at least..

At the same time Kalpi took the opportunity to approach Raghav & say thanks for the gift. However, when Raghav saw her walking towards him, he quickly turned around & went the other way. Kalpi frowned, also confused.

Raghav's POV: "If she comes in front of me, I don't know what I'll do. She looks so beautiful that my resolve might slip & I could end up telling her how I feel. Would that really be so bad? For now yes. It's much more complicated than it looks like.

Pakhi was dancing with that guy on the song ,...

As the song was playing, Abhi pulled Pakhi towards him with much force... Sammy wasn't showing it but he actually desired to kill that fellow the very moment.

Abhi: "Come on. This is your chance to make me a happy man. You can't say you've not been teasing me, wearing that sari and looking gorgeous."

Pakhi felt disgusted.

Pakhi: Excuse me? Please let me go and leave me alone

Abhi dragged her out of the hall.
Sammy's anger level was reaching sky high. He & Mr Chopra were having a discussion, but he wasn't even listening to him anymore. His attention was focused on Pakhi & that Abhi.
Abhi placed a hand on Pakhi's shoulder, tightening his grip. She clutched her pallu, looking terrified. Sammy clenched his fists, and stormed off towards them...

Sammy: (angrily) Hands off her...

Abhi paid no heed to his words... so without giving him a moment to think Sammy started punching Abhi... Pakhi watched everything with tears in her eyes.

Sammy: (holding him from his collars) didn't she tell you to leave her alone???

Sammy continued his business of knocking him down... Just then Raghav and Kalpi arrived there. Raghav pulled Sammy away.

Sammy: leave me Raghav, I'll break this man into halves.

Raghav knew Sammy wasn't lying... he was furious enough to do that...

Raghav: (still holding him) Sammy, he got his lesson now let's go from here without creating a big scene... Shabad will be looking for us.

Sammy relaxed a bit...

Sammy: you guys go, I'll join you in few minutes..

Kalpi: but sam...

Sammy: (cutting her short) not now Kalpi, plz go

Raghav was about to say something, but Kalpi signalled him to stop. They went inside. Pakhi went to Sammy, who had his back to her. She put her hand on his shoulder but Sammy shrugged. She reapeated the action but same result.. He didn't look at her.

Pakhi: Thank you Sammy.

Still no response. Pakhi is getting irritated now.

Pakhi: I'm talking to you Sammy, look at me...

Sammy: (turning around) why bothering now Miss Kapoor

He was more angry than before.. pakhi had never seen this side os Sammy. His face was turning red in rage.

Pakhi: (looking down) I'm sorry... I was just dancing with him to make you...

Sammy didn't let her speak.

Sammy: I don't care... you can dance with whomever you want to...

Pakhi: (yelling now) then why did you help me?

Sammy: (coming near her) I would have done the same thing for any other girl too...

He didn't w8 for Pakhi's rebuttle and stormed inside... Pakhi was hurt.

Pakhi's POV: If you are happy to see me hurt, fine with me... but I know you are lying... you proved it today that you care for me and can't see me with other man... I'm not giving up on you Sammy.

She smiled a little to herself and joined Kalpi in the hall.

Kalpi was worried for Pakhi. No matter how much Pakhi irritated her or claimed Kamla's love, she never hated Pakhi. She never admitted but for her Pakhi too is the part of her family and she can't see her in pain or trouble. When she saw Pakhi standing next to her, she couldn't control herself.

Kalpi: (with concern) tu theek to hai na Pakhi?? Kya hua bahar??

Pakhi: kuch nahin sb theek hai.. lets enjoy the function..

Kalpi knew Pakhi was avoiding the topic but didn't push her. By now Sammy has also joined Raghav.

Pakhi's POV: Mumbai jane k pehle main tumhe mana hi rahungi Sammy.

As the next performer Pakhi started dancing and pulled in Sammy to dance with her.

Music played...

Pakhi: Baat meri suneye to zara.

Sammy: Kahiye aapko hai kehna kya

Pakhi: Baat meri sunk ye bataiye k iske bare mein hai aapka khayal kya... Itna kyun gurur aapme hai itna naaz kislye hai kisne aapko sikhaya job hi tumko pyar se mile ussi tum raho khafa khafa

Now Sammy replied

Sammy: aise hum nahin hain lekin hum agar ho aise bhi to usme kya hua... kyun na ho gurur humko kyun na hmko naaz ho k kumhi logo ki to thokron main zamana... jisko dekhiye humara hai deewana

Aapko jawab mil gaya, kahiye kaisa aapko lag.

The performance was full of nok jhok, Pakhi manaogying Sammy and Sammy avoiding her.

Diya took the spotlight and announced the next performance.

Diya: Now it's time for a special dance performance.. by Diya... that's me...

Kalpi & Pakhi rolled their eyes to that.

Diya was moving sexily on the number Ram chahe leela chahe leela chahe ram in dono k love duniya ka kaam...

She goes to Raghav... put her arms around his neck, Inka to funda hai simple sa yaar goli maro to panga aankh maro to pyar...

Kalpi for sure didn't like it... Natasha asked kalpi to dance... After seeing Diya dancing with Raghav, she was so upset but could not say no to Natasha...

The song changed...

Gopiyon sang ghoome kanahiya raas rasiya radha na jaye,, man bhawara na bhaye re...

Kalpi was dancing beautifully and Raghav was just looking at her with their jaws dropped.

Sammy pushed him on the floor, so now Raghav & Kalpi were dancing as if they had been waiting for this for so long.

Raghav: O radha radha kahe itna gurur tera, chodo bhi nnakhre ye kaisi ada

Tune kya socha ek tu hi mashoor yahan lakhon hai gopiyan bhi humpe fida (trying to go near Diya)

(Kalpi comes between them and pushed Diya away) O rehne de re kanha bhoolega tu satana, jo girungi main bn k bijuriya...

During the end everybody started dancing together. Kalpi suddenly slipped but only to fall into Raghav's strong arms. He took her aside carefully.

Raghav: (all worried) are you fine Kalpi??

Kalpi: umhmm... just my foot got twisted.

Raghav: should we see a doctor?

Kalpi: arey no m fine

Kalpi started walking back and forth. Just then Raghav saw something he wanted to see... Kalpi was wearing those anklets he has gifted her ealier in her room. He could not keep himself from smiling.

Kalpi: see I can walk

Raghav: (looking at her with smile) hmmm... I can see that (chuckled)

Just then Sammy called him... Raghav turned to move away but stopped after hearing kalpi's words.

Kalpi: Thank you

Raghav: (still with his back to her) for what??

Kalpi: for this (she tapped her foot to make her payal give a sing sang)... they are very beautiful Raghav

Raghav just smiled to himself and turned a little to see her.

Raghav: (smilingly) I'm delighted that they found their best place...

Raghav moved towards Sammy but could not resist looking back at the blushing beauty.

Next Morning

Everybody enjoyed the wedding. It was full of masti and emotions... everything was great. F4s were getting ready to return. Sammy was in his room and Raghav went to meet Shabad... a servant handed over an envelop to Sammy. It was from Pakhi, Inside, there was a red rose... and a card saying,

"I know I'm not good, I know I behave silly, over react, and do some nonsense things... may be I'm not good enogh for you, but all I wanna say is that for me you are the best... so, will you forgive me for hurting you and accept me with all my flaws... will you give me a chance to relish our relationship and let it shine... will you like to see every sunrise with me... will you be my valentine J

Happy Valentines Day

---Pakhi

Sammy was looking at the rose than at the card repeatedly. He could not believe Pakhi actually did this; he could not help but smile.

Meanwhile, Shabad was talking to Raghav.

Shabad: Raghav, don't deny your feeling for her.

Raghav: what are you talking about Shabad... you have gone insane on your wedding day...

Shabad: (in stern voice) stop it yaar,... i have been really busy with, wooing my wife, my wedding preparations, m feeling tired and in such cases I usually lose my cool so don't push me alright... you know what I'm talking about.

Raghav didn't say anything..

Shabad: kuch bologe ab??

Raghav: I can't go and confess how I'm feelings to her... what if she says no..

Shabad: ohhh please Raghav... don't think I'm a fool, you know she won''t but you are still giving this excuse to yourself... let me give you some free advise, She will never say how she feels then at least you should yaar... take the first step... please consider it before it's too late...

Raghav: It's not easy.. because I'm still not sure of my feelings and I don't want to hurt her, I can't see her in pain. She has been through alot and now she only deserves all happiness...

Raghav kept on talking about Kalpi and finally Shabad interrupted him.

Shabad: (looked at him with smile) Annnd you are still not sure about your feelings for her... you are a fool Raghav (smirks)

Just then Sammy, Kalpi and Pakhi also came to say goodbye to Shabad. F4 left for Mumbai...

Everyone was talking about Shabad and Natasha. Suddenly Sammy noticed Raghav's pale face; he knew something is not right. Raghav looked at him and shook his head.

to be continued...

Edited by blackdollphin - 11 years ago

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