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PART 23-
As the three of them were working, Kabir was sitting and playing PINBALL on the PC 🤣.. Aarav noticed this and went up to him,"Ye tum kya kar rahe ho yahaan ?" Kabir told,"Aara. Disturb mat karo. Mei pinball khel raha hoon. I've crossed 10,00,000.." Aarav rolled his eyes and said,"Tumhe yaad hai kii tum kyun ho yahaan ?" Kabir replied,"Ofcourse yes. I remember." Aarav said,"Then go and act according to it." Kabir asked,"Tho phir mera pinball ka game ?" Aarav replied,"Mera Dost. Mei iss game ko complete karunga aur tumhaare naam pe save karta hoon.. Theek hai.." Kabir nodded and said to himself,"Here I come.." He went to Raghav's cabin and knocked on the glass door. Raghav saw who it was and thought,"Aagaya ye Chipkali muh waala Chipkoo." He said,"Do come in Mr.Rathore." Kabir entered and said,"Raghav, please. Mei buddha nahi hoon. You can call me Kabir. Tumhe Kalpi se classes lena chaahiye. She is a pro.." Raghav glared at him, curling his fists. Kabir asked,"Kya hua ? Kuch kehna hai ??" Raghav said in a low voice,"Haan.. Tumhe apni haatho se bandhi banaakar maar daalna chaahta hoon, Kalpi ki naam lene keliye.." Kabir asked,"Kya kaha ? Kuch kaha aapne ?" Raghav said,"Nothing.. Kuch nahi.. Kuch bhi nahi.." Kabir nodded and said,"Raghav. Mujhe tumse kuch baat karna hai." Raghav said,"Go on.." Kabir asked,"Ab tho jab humaare deal final ho chuka hai, kyun naa ek party rakhe ?" Raghav thought,'Wow. Iss chipali muh waala chipku ke pass brain hai.."🤣.. Raghav said,"Tht's a very nice idea. We can have a party." Kabir said,"Ok. Great. Phir aaj raat ho jaaye party."
Raghav said,"Sure.. Ho jaaye party." Kabir got up and both shook hands and hugged each other.. Kabir said,"Ok. Tum sabko bataao. Mei Kalpi ko bataata hoon. C you later." Saying this, Kabir ran down leaving a speechless Raghav behind fuming. Raghav thought,"Wht the !! She is my employee and she works under me. Only I have the right to inform her about anything. Not this Chipkali muh waala chipkoo." He went to the glass window and looked down to see that Sammy, Kalpi and Pakhi were busy with the file. Raghav smiled. All of a sudden a monkey like figure jumped infront of them and waved its hands like a hen 🤣.. It was none other than Kabir. He said,"Kalpi, Sammy, Pakhi and Aarav. Aaj shaam ek party rakha gaya hai, deal final hone ke vaaste." Sammy and Pakhi got excited while Kalpi smiled. Kabir asked,"Kya hua Kalpi ? Tum khush nahi dika rahi ho ?" Kalpi replied,"Mujhe pata nahi kii mei party me aa paaungi ya nahi." Kabir held her right hand and asked,"Kyu ? Kya hua ?" Kalpi said,"Meri Aayi allow nahi karegi.." Pakhi said,"Oh you dnt worry Chikki. Kamla Maa se mei baat karti hoon. Lekin tu aayegi agar Kamla Maa ne haan bol di tho." Kalpi said,"Haan aaungi." Kabir held her hand tightly and kissed it out of happiness. He said,"Thanks Kalpi. Acha ok. I need to leave now. Need to check on the preparations for the party. Bye. C u all at the party." Kabir went away leaving the three of them laughing at him. Raghav was watching this from upstaris and fumed in anger,"How dare tht monkey touch Kalpi !!!!! She is my employee. Only I can do tht." He then thought,"Ye mujhe kya ho gaya hai ?" He shook his hand and went back to his work.
That evening, Kalpi was in a fix. She did not know what to wear for the party. Kamla came around and asked,"Kya hua Kalpi ?" Kalpi replied,"Aayi. Mujhe pata nahi kii mei kya pehnu.." Kamla said,"Mujhe bataa deti. Mei help karti hoon." The mother-daughter sat together and picked out the outfit for the evening. At the party, the guests were in full swing. Pakhi reached the venue in a light pink dress and Sammy couldn't take his eyes off her.. JO MUJHE DEKHKE HAMESHA KARTA HAI, VO ISKO DE DI MEINE.. HOON MEI BHAARATIYA NAARI.. Raghav looked dashing in his suit and so did Sammy. Kabir was no less in his dashing party wear. Aarav looked sweet in his suit.. Raghav's eyes were repeatedly searching for someone. Sammy noticed this and asked,"Kisko dhoond rahe ho, Raghav ?" Raghav said,"Kisi ko bhi nahi.." Sammy smirked at his brither's poor attempt at lying. Pakhi came around. Sammy said,'U look very beautiful, Pakhi."m Pakhi blushed and said,"Thankyou Sammy. Tum bhi bohot hansdsome lag rahe ho." Sammy flashed a smile and said,"Thanx Pakhi. Kalpi kahaan hai ?" Pakhi replied,"Vo boli kii vo baad me aayegi. Usko thoda kaam tha gahr pe. Vo complete karke aayegi." Raghav was listening to all this and thought,"Tho Maharani ko ready hone keliye time chaahiye.."😆..

END OF PART 23.. THERE IS A LOVELY SURPRISE IN THE NEXT UPDATE... SO LIKES AND COMMENTS PLEASE...
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Posted: 11 years ago
🤣🤣 Loved jealous Rags in this!! Hats off 2 u 4 being the perfect bharatiya naari!!🤣 ..just 4 the sake of the story having to share ur hubby with Pakhi.😆...Eagerly waiting4 the next update!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kabir pinball and araav🤣

chipkali muh waala chipkoo🤣

monkey like figure🤣

waving hands like hen🤣🤣

oh my and this is the epic line

hoon mai bharatiya naari🤣🤣 kaun si bharatiya naari apne husband ko extra marital affair karne ko keheti hai🤣

hilarious update from top to bottom🤣
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mihika

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kabir pinball and araav🤣

chipkali muh waala chipkoo🤣

monkey like figure🤣

waving hands like hen🤣🤣

oh my and this is the epic line

hoon mai bharatiya naari🤣🤣 kaun si bharatiya naari apne husband ko extra marital affair karne ko keheti hai🤣

hilarious update from top to bottom🤣

Hum dono ke relationship start hone se pehle hii meine ye FF start kiya. I've paired him up wid Pakhi. So I hav to sacrifice him until my story ends 😛
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Originally posted by: veeranu

Hum dono ke relationship start hone se pehle hii meine ye FF start kiya. I've paired him up wid Pakhi. So I hav to sacrifice him until my story ends 😛

sacrifice🤣and u🤣 kya combination hai🤣 kabhi nahi ho sakta🤣
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lolz bhartiya naari funny update :)
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PART 24-

Sammy was in the drinks section with a glass in hand. Pakhi came around and grabbed the glass from his hand. Sammy pouted at her while Pakhi glared at him,"Mujhe e do glasses se zyaada peene waale log bilkul pasand nahi hai." Sammy pouted and said,"But ye tho mera first glass hai." Aarav gave him a knowing look. Pakhi said,"Mei tumhe vahaan se dekh rahi hoon. Ye tumhaara third glass hai." Sammy looked at her guiltily while Pakhi put the glass away... JO MUJHE KARNE CHAAIYE VO YE KAR RAHI HAI.. JO MEI KARTI HOON VO YE KAR RAHI HAI.. HAAN, HOON MEI BHAARATIYA NAARI... Raghav watched this and smiled,"Atlast. Mera Bhai ko koi mil gaya.. Ab isko apni Deepika mil gayi.." YAY.. ATLAST.. MEINE MAARI ENTRYAAN RE DIL ME BHAJI GHANTIYAARE TANG TANG TANG.. SAMMY KE DIL ME BHAJI TANG TANG TANG 😛... Raghav suddenly felt a strong pull from the entrance. He turned around and saw the most beautiful sight. Kalpi was standing dressed in a light pink saree and minimal makeup. Raghav thought tht even with minimal makeup, she could beat every woman in the party. Suddenly he saw a buffalo hiding his view of Kalpi and frowned. The buffalo was actually Kabir 😆.. Raghav frowned,"Ye bandar kahaan se aa tapakta hai.." Kabir had actually seen Raghav drooling waterlessly over someone and he saw it to be Kalpi. He exclaimed so tht Raghav could hear,"Wow Kalpi..U look so beautiful. You will beat every one in the party woman." Kalpi blushed and asked,"Thanx.. Pakhi kahaan hai ?" Kabir pouted and asked,"Tum party me sirf Pakhi se milne aayi ho kya ? Hum sab se nahi... " Kalpi noticed his pout and said,"Aww.. Sorry. Acha theek hai, tho ek kaam karo.. Tum sabse milvaayo." Kabir's face split into a wide smile. He extended his arm towards Kalpi and Kalpi graciously took it.

Raghav was fuming in anger tht someone else was touching Kalpi.. He thought,"Iss bandar ki itnan himmat.. Ki mere Kalpi pe haath lagaaye." He then thought shocked,"Ye mujhe kya ho gaya hai ? Mei itna kyun soch raha hoon Kalpi ke baare me ?"Just then, Kabir came with Kalpi towards him. He said,"Kalpi.. Tum Raghav ke saath baatein karte raho. Mei jaake hum theeno keliye drinks leke aata hoon." Saying this, Kabir ran away leaving RagNa alone 😳.. Pakhi who was watching tis along with Sammy and Aarav asked,"Sammy.. Tumhaara gadha jaise Bhai ko itna acha mauka mila.. Use kyun nahi kar raha hai ?" Sammy replied,"Oyee.. Vo thoda reserved hai." Pakhi frowned at him and then turned her attention towards Kabir. Pakhi asked,"Aarav.. Tumhaara friend tho over-excited lag raha hai, Kahi usko sach me Kalpi se pyaar tho nahi ..." Aarav interrupted her,"Nahi nahi Pakhi.. Bilkul nahi.. Kabir deikhne me playboy dikhta hai but vo dil se bohot acha hai.. Aur uska ek girlfriend hai Mona, jisse vo bohot pyaar karta hai." Pakhi nodded and Sammy smiled.. Aarav noticed Raghav quiet and thought,"Iss gadhe ko meine itna acha mauka diya aur ye chup baitha hai.. Itni beautiful and georgeous ladki pass me khadi hai, aur ye statue ki tarah khada hai.. Abhi jaata hoon." He went towards them and handed over a glass each. Kalpi went and sat in a nearby chair while Raghav and Kabir stood.

The music started playing. Kabir thought,"Ye tho perfect mauka hai, iss gadhe ko apna pyaar ka ehsaas dilaane keliye." He put the glass down and went towards Kalpi and extended a hand towards her. Kalpi was uncomfortable. Kabir smiled at her nodding for her to take it. Kalpi smiled and took it.. Raghav was fuming in anger,"How dare she !!! Hw can she accept a dance from him ?" Raghav fumed even more when Kalpi started dancing with Kabir.

PYAAR KII YE EK KAHAANI SUNO

EK LADKA THA EK LADKI KI

HOTI KYA HAI JAWAANI SUNO

EK LADKA THA EK LADKI THI

Kabir lifted Kalpi up in the air and twirled her around making Raghav almost break the glass he was holding. Meanwhile, Pakhi, Sammy and Aarav were enjoying Raghav's jealousy. Sammy said,"Ab dekho na. Raghav will pull another girl for a dance and will try to match Kalpi." Pakhi and Aarav looked at Raghav..

VAKT HII AUR THA

JAB VO THE AJNABI

DONO TANAAHA SE THE

PARN VO KEHTE KISE

BAAT JO DIL ME THI

By nw, Raghav threw the glass away. He went to the group of girls standing in a corner and pulled one of them for a dance. The girl was only too happy and squealed a bit 😆.. He tooks the girl and started to dance with her.

GUMSUM GUMSUM REHTE THE DONO

PHIR BHI DIL ME KEHTE THE DONO

KOI SAPNA HUM BHI THO PAAYEIN

EK DIN TUTE GHUM KE VO GHERE

JHILMIL JHILMIL AAYE SAVERE

Raghav and Kabir both twirled their respective partners and on twirling, Kabir pushed Kalpi into Raghav''s arms such that the other girl fell into Kabir's arms. Raghav and Kalpi looked into each other's eyes

MAUSAM BADLA JAAGI FIZAAYEN

VOH MIL GAYE VO KHIL GAYE

AUR PYAAR HO HII GAYA

JO MAANGA THA, VO PAAYA THO

HOSH KHO HII GAYA

PYAAR KII YE EK KAHAANI SUNO

EK LADKA THA EK LADKI THI

HOTI KYA HAI JAWAANI SUNO

EK LADKA THA EK LADKI THI

The song played and all the while, they were looking into each other's eyes. Sammy, Pakhi and Aarav smiled tht their plan was getting successful. Aarav told,"Hey.. Ye last lines tho inn dono pe bohot suit karte hai." Sammy nodded while Pakhi was smiling... The song changed and this was a slow and romantic song..

JIYA MEI NA JIYA

REZA REZA MERA JIYA

JIYA MEI NA JIYA

REZA REZA MERA JIYA

Raghav put his right hand on Kalpi's waist and Kalpi put her hand on his shoulder ☺️.. His other hans went to her exposed back while her other hand went to his other shoulder.. They started dancing slowly. Raghav remembered the last dance they both had together. The way he was so dangerously close to her neck and her cleavage. The way he nearly kissed her neck.. Kalpi was having the same thoughts too. She remembered the way his body was warm. She remembered the proximity and his husky voice to her. She could still feel the way her skin tingled when he touched her. She could feel it even now.

HOON... LIKHOON HAWAAON PE MEI

NAINO SE NAAM TERA

HO... SAAYE SEMEIN HAATHON KE

SAAYA LOON THAAM TERA

ISHQ KA TU HARAF, JISKE CHAARON TARAF

MERI BAAHON KE GHERE KA, BANE HASHIYAAN

Raghav pulled Kalpi closer to himself while dancing, such tht their lips were only inches apart. Raghav inched closer towards Kalpi and Kalpi did the same.. Sammy, Pakhi and Aarav were watching with their breaths hitched in their throats while Kabir was getting happy tht atlast the GADHA was coming put with his pheelings 😛.. Kalpi then remembered the incident tht happened to her after the last party.. She broke away and ran away from there.. Raghav was angry,"Isko iss Chipkali muh waala chipkoo ke saath dance karne me koi etraaz nahi tha, lekin mujhse problem hai." He followed Kalpi.. Sammy noticed this and said,"Oh oh... Trouble.. Let's go guys." He pulled along Aarav and Pakhi with him. Kalpi went into a garden where there was a fountain. She stood inside a small hut like thing near a pillar. Raghav came and stood there.. Kalpi turned to go but was shocked to see Raghav there. Kalpi said,"Sir.. Aap yahaan.. Mujhe jaana hai." She tried to leave but Raghav caught her hand and pulled her towards himself. Kalpi tried to protest but Raghav imprisoned her hand behind her back and pushed her against the pillar. He asked in a husky voice,"Tum apne aapko kya samajhti ho ?" Kalpi asked,"Meine kyua kiya Sir ?" Raghav asked,"Tum uss Kabir ke saath bohot khushi khushi naach rahi thi ?" Kalpi replied,"Sir.. Usne mujhe dance keliye bulaaya tha, isliye meine dance kiya." Raghav said,"Uss Chipkali muh waale chipkoo ke saath aisa naach kaise sakti ho tum ?" Kalpi defended herself,"Aapko kya Sir ? Mei kisi ke saath naach sakti hoon.. Aapko kya ?" Raghav pushed himself closer to her such tht their lips were inches apart. He said,"Tum aise naach nahi sakti ho. Tht's all.." Kalpi asked,"Sir.. Kyun ?" Raghav shouted,"Kyunki mei tumse..." He stopped himself.. Kalpi frwoned at him.. Raghav just kept numb. Kalpi went away from there in tears at the almost lip kiss.. This was witnessed by Sammy, Pakhi, Aarav and Kabir.. Kabir said,"Dosto. Lagta hai ki Raghav ko pyaar ka ehsaas ho gaya hai. Hume bas uska muh se ye nikalvaana hai kii vo Kalpi se pyaar karta hai.. Iskeliye Sammy, I need ur help." Sammy said,"Sure. Anything for my Bhai.." Kabir told them of his plan and everyone agreed to it..

PHEW.. ATLAST.. COMPLETED THE LONGEST CHAPTER IN MY LIFE 😆.. HOPE U LIKE MY SURPRISE OF RAGNA DANCE AND NEAR LIP KISS.. THIS IS OLY THE START.. KAHAANI BHI BAAKI HAI BOSS.. BUT BEFORE THT, HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AND DO COMMENT.., OTHERWISE., BHOOT WILL SLEEP BESIDE U FOR ONE MONTH 😛

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🤣more names for kabir

buffalo🤣 but deepu i am angry y just near lip kiss kuch aur bhi dena tha na🤣

chal koi baat nahi hilarious update

btw 1 month ke liye phoot kyun aayega sone ke liye tum chutti pe jaa rahi ho kya?😕🤣
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
very good update...continue soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely, let's c if Raghav confess his feelings

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