Hello all,
I am Kiran and new to the forum and also first time to be on any forum; but honestly following Ragna from past few weeks because of its awesome storyline. I like Kalpi's character a lot and especially how calm and elegant she is but yet vulnerable. Both Raghav and Kalpi are great and their eyes are so expressive.
Just a thought for a scene as saw few people doing it so thought of trying. please don't bash me since its my first time here on the forum.
Scene 1: Kalpi has decided to stay and finish her six months notice. Kalpi is in the office and engrossed in working on a document; suddenly Pakhi comes and informs her that she was in meeting with Raghav and they have all decided to visit the project area. She also mentions that Raghav only asked her to come but Sammy had insisted Kalpi to join as she has an insight of the project more because she developed it. Kalpi is a bit disappointed and her confidence is shattered but still as poised as she is and with all her calmness asks as to when they have to leave? Pakhi says in another 3 hours and then they will stay in a hotel and early morning will be working at the project site.
Kalpi nods and Pakhi replies that we should head home to pack and take permission; As they both are about to leave Sammy comes and joins and says that Raghav and I will pick you both at 5 pm so be ready. Raghav is watching them all on his connected TV and scrutinizing Kalpi and feels that Kalpi looks a bit out of place and shattered. And in reality Kalpi is and she is thinking that for how long will she have to prove herself and feel rejected all the time. She maintains her composure but her eyes are a bit teary. Raghav notices it and thinks that she looks vulnerable but where does she gets the energy and presents herself to be so strong?
Pakhi tells Sammy that she will be at chawl too as she has to meet Kamla maa so to pick both of them from there.
Its almost 5:00 pm and Kalpi is packing and asking Kamla for something: Aye where is my bag? There is no response and Kamla is busy chatting with Pakhi. Kalpi looks at it and quietly does her work. She is ready and then Kamla walks in and says how come you didn't need any help? Kalpi responds that you were busy. A car honks and both of them are leaving. Raghav is driving and Sammy is in passenger seat; Kalpi walks out first and Kamla and Paki are behind her. Kalpi waits to have few words with her Ayi but Pakhi keeps on talking. Kalpi stands there and is waiting and engrossed as to how they both are talking. Raghav and Sammy notices and comes out. Raghav stands with Kalpi and see the controlled tears in her eyes; he wanted to reach out and hug her but he says simply Miss. Yadav what are you waiting for? She says that I want to take the blessings from Aye but Paki and Ayi are busy? He looks there and says then why don't you go and take it? She looks at him for a bit of support but then he says don't waste our time. Kalpi walks over and takes the blessing. Kamla is so busy that she hugs her briefly and continues talking to Pakhi and hugs her twice and gives lectures to her about her foot. Kalpi walks over to the car and sits. Raghav notices her pain and is restless. Princess Paki sits and starts ordering to put on this music and turn up the AC. Kalpi is quiet and deep in thoughts and then Pakhi makes a comment that Kalpi talk something; you had always been boring. After 2 hours Paki is hungry and wants Raghav to stop the car so she can eat something. Raghav sees a small restaurant and stops the car. Pakhi orders a sandwich and all of them order something except for Kalpi; she just wants tea and Raghav doesn't like her not eating anything. He insists sternly and she refuses with a smile; in the car this time Sammy is driving, and Kalpi starts to doze off. Raghav looks in the mirror and notices that she is sleeping and looking very beautiful; he turns down the music to which Pakhi objects but he says I have a headache.
The car stops in the front of the hotel and Kalpi wakes up because of the jerk; Raghav is still watching her and wishes if he could support her from the jolt. She opens her eyes and opens the car door; Raghav comes out too ; Kalpi is still sleepy and misses a steps and Raghav supports her and wants to hold her tight. Pakhi comes out and says Raghav can you help me as I cant move; my foot is swollen. Raghav looks at Kalpi and didn't want to lose her but still walks over to help Pakhi. Pakhi unnecessarily is talking and limping and creating a scene. They walk over to the lobby and gets registered and go to their rooms. Kalpi takes the keys and walks over to her room. In her room she starts to sob and cry; Raghav had followed her and makes an excuse to give her the files so he comes and knocks; she is shattered but when she hears the door knocking; wipes her tears and opens the door. Raghav notices her wet eyes and puffy face and also the pain in her eyes. She takes the files and he first time notices her frail hands and arms. She doesn't say anything and just says Thank you sir and is about to close the door; he says do you need anything? She says no sir but good night. And closes the door.
to be continued :) and will only do if there are good responses and u guys are reading it
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