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I worked really hard on this update so please give me feedback! And thanks to all the people who do take time to comment! I read every comment!
Part 11:
Manvi threw her wedding photo frame at the dresser's mirror and the entire 50 inch mirror shattered into pieces. Virat ran towards her and pulled her back because the glass was about to fall on her face.

"Manvi you could have killed yourself!" Virat yells in the heat of the moment as if he forgot what caused her to aggressively throw the frame at the mirror.
Manvi stares at him for a few seconds then pulls her hands away from his.
"Mer jaane do mujhe! Nahi jeena mujhe is dard or dhoke ka sath!" She yells as her eyes go red. Virat didn't know how to fix this but he had to try. "Manvi please give me a chance to explain..." He says but before he could finish his sentence manvi started yelling. "SHUT UP! JUST *ucking SHUT UP!" She yells with all her voice. Just then jeevika, viren, vanshika Antie, Chachi, chachu, bua and dada Ji walk in their room because of the loud noise of the mirror shattering. Manvi looks at all of them from across the room and they were all shocked seeing manvi's eyes filled with tears. She ignored them and continued screaming. "Ek lafz nahi bolo ga tum virat! Kuch explain kerna ki zarorat nahi ha! Kya explain keroge? Kesa samjhao ga mujhe? Kesa kiya tumne yeh virat! Kya kami thi mujh mein? We're you not s*xually satisfied with me huh?" Manvi yells and virat embarrassingly looks over at his family. He holds manvis hand and whispers. "Manvi please sub sun raha ha" he whispers. Manvi pushes him back in anger. "SUN NA DO SABKO! Sun na do ka in ka ladle na kya kamal kiya ha! Pata lagne do sub ko!" She yells. Virat just looks down in shame.

" tum na in 5 saalo mein itni khushiya di, itna khayal rakha mera. Her kadam pa saath diya. Mein kitni bewakoof thi! Samjhti thi ka mein kitni lucky hoon! Mera virat lakho mein ek ha! Kitni galat thi mein! Yeh sub ek natak tha! Sub kuch! Mujhe yahan bewakoof banaya jaraha tha or tum wahan kissi gair aurat ka sath upna moo kaala ker raha tha!" She yells. Virat was shocked and he nods his head in a no. " no manvi none of that was a lie. Or na Hi mena esa baar baar kiya. Ek baar sirf galti sa. Maya gave me alcohol and I don't know yeh sub kesa hogaya!" He says in his defense and starts crying. Manvi was not convinced and continued looking at him in anger. "I really do love you. And koi kami nahi ha tum mein. Tum perfect ho. Mujh mein kharabi ha. Nasha mein pata nahi kesa behak gaya. Forgive me" he cries And begs on his knees.
"Alcohol or no alcohol virat. You did what you did. And I can never forgive you. Ager mein esi herkat kerti. Tum mujhe maaf kerte? Kabhi na kerte!" Manvi says.
Vanshika Antie couldn't handle all this anymore and walks towards virat. She started crying.
"Tum bilkul apne baap jesa nikle virat!" She yells with tears in her eyes. Manvi looks at v.a in shock.
"Oh haan kesa bhool sakti ho mein maa. Papa na bhi apko isi Tera sa dhoka diya tha right? Upne best friend ki behn ka sath so ka? Mujhe kabhi esa baap ki olaad sa shaddi kerni Hi nahi chaya thi! " manvi yells. V.a cried more remembering the past.
Manvi looks at her.
"Maa app ka bahot bera dil ha. App na papa ko maaf kerdiya tha or apke us maafi ki saza mujhe mili. App ka beta! Na app papa ko maaf kerti or naa virat paida hota!
Mein virat ko kabhi maaf nahi kersakti. Mera dil itna bera nahi ha!" Manvi says and virat was hurt by her words.
"Sahi bol rahi ha manvi virat. Na mein vijay ko maaf kerti or na aj hum sub ko yeh din dekh na perta!" V.a says in anger.

"Kya hogaya ha sub ko! Koi Maya ko janta bhi ha ka nahi! Last time bhi us na esa Hi ghatiya mazzaq plan kiya tha virat or manvi ki engagment torne ka liya! Aj bhi tum log us ko believe keraha ho?" viren says to manvi and v.a. manvi rolls her eyes. She had proof this time. She grabs her phone from the bed and hands it to viren.
"Play kero jiju!" Manvi says with a stern voice. Virat tries to snatch the phone from viren but viren manages to hit the play button. Everything was clearly visible. Virats face and his body as well as Maya's face and body. Viren was shocked seeing them like that. He after a few seconds closed his eyes and gave the phone back to manvi.
He looks at virat in anger and walks towards him and slaps him with all his strength.
"Mena upni saali ki shaddi tum sa is liya nahi kerae thi ta ke tum ek din itna bera dhoka do usko!" Viren yells with all his voice. Virat was shocked that viren slapped him. He couldn't believe it.
"Aj mujhe sharam ati ha tumhe upna Bhai kehte huwa!" Viren yells. V.a just continued crying. "Virat us din tum na anjali ko kaha tha ka tum sa bahot beri galti hogae. Yehi galti thi?" Chachi asks him. Virat nods. Viren's blood was boiling. He pointed his finger at virat. " tum meri beti sa door raho samjhe! Tum jesa ghatiya insaan ka sayaa nahi chaya is ghar mein!" Viren yells. Virat was stunned by his words.
"Bhai mein us ka chacha hoon! Meri beti ha woh. Or yeh mera ghar nahi ha?' Virat asks with tears in his eyes.
" nahi ha yeh tumhara ghar! Jub tumhara baap ko nikala gaya tha itna saal pehle toh tum kya cheez ho! " dada Ji says in anger.

Jeevika who was quietly watching all the chaos walks towards manvi and hugs her. Manvi cries her eyes out.
"Virat jub tumhara or manvi ka ristha ki baat chal rahi thi mujhe bilkul manzoor nahi tha na jaane kyew. It was a gut feeling. Lekin mena tum dono ki khushi ka liya sub ko convince kiya. Mujhe upne gut feeling ko samjhana chaya tha. Mujhe khuda k ishara samjhana chaya tha! " jeevika says and hugs manvi tighter.
"Bhabhi esa na kaho. " virat says with tears.

"Kaash mujhe pata hota jis ko mena upna sub kuch maana woh ek kutta ha or kuch nahi" manvi yells at virat.
Virat couldn't take it any more and pulled manvi away from jeevika and held her arm with force.
"Enough manvi! Mujhe itna suna rahi ho! Itna shak? I was intoxicated! Mein hosh mein nahi tha! Aurat sa toh koi kabhi nahi poochta! Ka us ka bacho ka baap kon ha!" Virat yells with all his voice and everyone was quite in shock. Manvi immediately slapped virat on his cheek. The sound echoed around the room.
"I can't believe you said that! " manvi yelled.
She held her mangal sutar and pulled it with force.
"THIS MARRIAGE IS OVER!" She yells. Virat stared at the beads fall down all over the floor. He couldn't believe his eyes. Manvi then rubbed off her sindoor. And took of her engagment ring and threw it on the floor.

"OVER!" She yells.
Everyone was silent because they were too shocked. They all expected a separation but not an immediate divorce.
"Mujh pa shak kiya tum na virat? Mujh pa? Mera pehla or akhri tum ho virat!
Mera bacho pa itna ganda daag chordiya tum na? Kaho ka tumhe variman ka chera mein upna chera nahi dikh ta! Kaho ka mannat ki naak bilkul dada Ji jesi nahi ha! Kaho ka variman ka ankho mein jiju jesa bholapan ha nahi ha! Kaho mujhe! Kaho ka mannat ki smile bilkul maa jesi nahi ha? Kaho virat!" She yells and starts crying her eyes out.
"Khud gunnah kiya phir ilzam manvi pa lagaya?" V.a says.
Virat realized what he said was not right.
"Ek pal mein mera bacho ko najaiz bana diya tum na? Upni izzat rakhi nahi gae toh meri or mera bacho ki izzat ko uchala tum Ne?" Manvi yells.
Viren grabs virats collar and drags him out of the room . he drags him downstairs towards the door. And pushes him.
"Nikal jao is ghar sa humesha humesha ka liya!" Viren yells.
Everyone runs downstairs and watch everything happen.
"Divorce ka notice bhij wa doongi" manvi says with mannat in her arms. She kisses her forehead and continues crying.
Virat didn't know what to do. He runs towards manvi and begs her for forgiveness.
"I'm so sorry manvi! Gussa mein na jaane kya kya bol diya. Tum meri zindagi ho! Mujhe meri zindagi sa alag mat kero. Or yeh bache humara ha!" He says with tears in his eyes and tries to take mannat from her arms but manvi pulled her back.
"Khaberdaar meri bachi ko in gande hatho sa haat lagaya! Yeh ub tumhari beti nahi ha! Tumhara in bacho ka sath usi waqt ristha khatam hogaya jub tum na in ka wojood pa ungli uthaye!" She yells. Virat was hopeless and begged manvi. He cried on her feet. Manvi could not forgive him for what he did or what he said.
Virat looks at dada Ji and begs him
"Dada Ji mein itni raat ko kaha jaonga? Upne biwi bache chor ka kaha jao? Kyew jao. Mujhe maaf kerdo! Please" he begs . dada Ji makes him stand up.
"Beta tum na Jo kiya or Jo kaha us sa sub kuch khatam ho chuka ha. Is ghar sa toh tumhe Jana Hi hoga. Lekin kyew ka abhi raat ka 2 baj raha ha. Tumhe mein is ghar mein rehne ki ijazat deta ho. Subah 7 baje, sub ka uthne sa pehle tumhe chale Jana ha!" Dada Ji says and leaves. Viren gives virat an angry glare and leaves. Jeenvika hugs manvi and leaves. V.a walks towards virat and holds his shoulders.
"Guest room udhar ha beta" v.a points towards the guest room. Virat holds his mom's hand.
"Pal mein mujhe sub na paraya kerdiya?" Virat asks. V.a starts crying and leaves. Manvi looks virat in the eye and tears start dripping from both their eyes. Manvi pretends as if she is not hurt and walks away, towards her room.
Virat was left alone in the living room. He walks towards the guest room in shame.
He sat on the bed and started crying.
Manvi walked to her room. She looked over at all the broken glass. She put mannat in her crib next to variman's crib. She walked toward the glass and picked up the photo frame that was was broken itself. The shattered picture of her wedding represented her shattered MARRIGE.
She quietly walked towards her bed and stared on virat's side. She couldn't help but cry thinking that that side will always be empty. She has to raise these two babies all by herself.
Manvi walks in the bathroom and looks at her self in the mirror.
She was crying her eyes out. Her world had shattered into pieces. She lost all respect for the man she loved with all her heart.

Aye dil bata
Jaane kyun iss martabaa
Tune mujhe ye kya keh diya
Aye dil bata
Aise kyun hairat bhara
Ye pyaar yun tune de diya

Meanwhile:
Virat tossed and turned but he could not fall asleep. How could he? He lost his entire family in a blink of an eye. He never meant for things to get so out of hand. He really did love manvi and there was no doubt in that. He doesn't know how he got into Maya's trap. And on top of everything he doubted manvi instead.
"How did I loose my senses so much and say that to manvi?" He asks himself and cries.

Jaanta hoon, tu sahi hai
Phir bhi mera kyun nahi hai
Dil mein kiska ye dakhal hai
Sab pareshaan se pal hai
Mujhme hoke bhi hai mujhse kyun door

Aye dil bata

Next morning 6:00 am :
Virat hadn't slept all night. He knew he had to leave in an hour. He needed to get his clothes and things before he left. He quietly walked towards his room and opened the door. He saw manvi sleeping on the bed. It was obvious she fell asleep crying. He tip toed inside and something sharp stabbed his foot. He was about to yell but he controlled himself because of manvi and the babies sleeping. He looked down and saw a piece of glass on his foot. He looked around on the floor and there was nothing. A piece from the broken mirror got left behind after tarun cleaned it last night.
He hops towards the chair and sits down and throws away the piece of glass. Virat ignored his bleeding and walked towards the babies cribs. He looked at both of his Angels sleeping so peacefully.
"I'm sorry. I'm sorry for everything!" He whispers and breaks down on the floor crying. Just then the babies started crying loudly and manvi woke up from the noise. Virat sensed manvi standing behind him. He stood up from the floor, his eyes red with tears.
"Tumhari himmat kesa Huwi mera bedroom mein Ana ki? Or mera bacho ko hath lagane ki?" Manvi yells in anger and picks up the twins. Virat closed his eyes and took a sigh.
"Manvi please ek or baar soch lo. Esa ristha kesa khatam kersakti ho? Humare bacho ka future ka bara mein toh socho! Kya asar perega divorced parents ka sath bera hona. Ek bache ka liya maa Bht important ha lekin baap bhi ha! Mujhe pata ha baap bagir bera hona kesa hota ha. Humara bacho ko esi zindagi mat do." He begs her.
Manvi looks him in the eye.
"Virat yeh ub tumhara bache nahi ha. Tumhara in sa ristha usi waqt khatam hogaya jub tum na in ka wujood pa ungli uthaye! Or mein bhi beri huwi thi bagir maa or baap ka! Zinda ho na? Kheri ho na yahan! Di ko dekhlo! Jiju ko dekhlo! Hum sub aj successful ha or khush ha. Haan tum kamina nikle but mein upne beta ko tumhara jesa kabhi nahi bane doongi. Mein in dono ko itna pyaar doongi ka inko kabhi koi kami nahi mehsoos hogi! " she yells.

"But Don't you love me?" Virat asks and manvi's heart aches with that question.

"No! I don't! Kyew ae ho yahan?" Manvi yells. " upna samaan lene"he says. Manvi gestures him to go towards the cupboard. Virat silently starts gathering his things inside a suitecase. As he was walking around the room manvi notices his foot bleeding. She wanted to run to him and help him but instead she pulled out the first aid box and threw it on the table.
"Khoon nikal raha ha. Pati laga lo" she says and sits down on the bed.
Virat nods and starts bandaging himself.
"Ek sawal ha " manvi says and virat looks at her while putting on ointment. "Yes?" He says.
"You slept with Maya two nights ago right? That is why you refused to sleep with me? And then yesterday when maya called you lied to me and you fought with me just because I threw away the sonography pictures and then at night you had the nerve to try to sleep with me? What kind of game is this? " she says.
Virat looks at her in guilt
"Manvi I swear this is no game. I just keep messing up. That night I was too guilty how could I be with you when I just was with Maya. The next day i felt bad for everything I said and did so I just tried so you would cheer up. I swear it all looks bad but nothing was intentional. " he says and wraps his bandage and walks towards manvi and holds her hand. Manvi starts crying.
"I'm sorry" he says and cries. Manvi's heart wanted to forgive him but her brain was not co operating. She was just crying as virat held her hand.
"I swear next time nothing like this will happen. Meri zindagi ki kasam!" He says and holds manvi's cheek. He then holds her shoulder and manvi felt a little uncomfortable and backed away.
"What are you doing? " she yells and stands up.
Virat was confused.
"Abhi 2 din nahi huwa Maya ka sath or tum mujhe? Itna cheap kub sa ho tum virat?" Manvi asks him. Virat was shocked by her misunderstanding.
"What? No! Manvi! I am not an animal. I swear I had no intention like that. We have always been physically close so I just held your shoulder. That does not mean I want to...!" He,says in his defense.
Manvi was not convinced.
" janwar ho tum! " she yells.
"Manvi! Didn't we have an abstinence after the miscarriage! We didn't do it for 2 whole years! You were right there every day right next to me. I controlled for 2 years just so your body could heal from cancer and the miscarriage!
And aj tumhe lagta ha mein ek awara cheap kism ka mard ho jis ko jism ka elawa kuch nahi chaya?" He asks in disgust.

Manvi did not have a reply for him but she had to say something!
"Haan samjhti ho mein esa! You gave me a strong reason to think like that! Ub jao yahan sa!" She yells.

Virat without arguing picks up his suite case and walks towards manvi.

"Never forget that I love you more than you could ever imagine. Take care of yourself and the babies. Bye" he says and forwards his hand for a hand shake.
Manvi looks the other way
"Bye" she says as she pretends to not care. Virat with disappointment pulls back his hand and walks out of the door.
Manvi's eyes start dripping tears like a flood.



Jab rulana hee tha tujhe, toh phir hasaaya kyun
Saath rehkar bhi hai juda, toh pas aya kyun

Kyun yakeen uth gaya dil se kahinwafaon kaa
Pyar mehsoos kyun hone laga gunaho sa
Kyun yakeen uth gaya dil se kahin wafaon kaa
Pyar mehsoos kyun hone laga gunaho sa
Pyar mehsoos kyun hone laga gunaho sa
Aaya apne bich me kisika saya kyun
Jab rulana hee tha tujhe, toh phir hasaya kyun
Sath rehkar bhi hai juda, toh pas aya ky

Precap: its a secret :p
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
amazing update feeling sad for both virman
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hmm very interesting and an super emotional update hats of to u dear for writing it u have written each and every line very well and without loosing the flow of story which is quiet tough and i bow down to u for that
y do i feel that night nothing happened like wat is seen in video this is a trap by maya am sure
do continue soon😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
omg wat hapnd with virman tat evil maya played a cruel game in virman lyf. bt hope virman ll cross over ths stone path lyk bfore n ll be becom together forever.
nice updat n emotions they n we had experiencd was really natural.
updat d nxt pt soon n tanq for d pm lov u n tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
FANTASTIC UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY SUPERB, MINDBLOWING AND EMOTIONS FULL UPDATE.
FULL OF MELODRAMA WAS THERE.
O MY GOD VIRAT WHOLE FAMILY TREATED HIM VERY BADLY.
WHAT WORDS MANVI USED FOR HER WERE REALLY CHEAP AND IT SHOWED HER PAIN TOO.
SO VIRAT FATHER ALSO DID SAME MISTAKE. POOR FATHER HA HA.
LOVES WHOLE FAMILY STAND AGAINST VIRAT AND IN FAVOUR OF MANVI.
EMOTIONS AND MANVI PAIN IS BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED BY U.
AGAIN VIRAT DID SAME MISTAKE BY USING WRONG WORDS FOR HIS KIDS. IN FACT HE CALLED MORE TROUBLES FOR HIM.
REALLY FEEL PITY ON VIRAT.
LAST SCENE WAS AWESOME AND HEARTOUCHING OF VIRMAN TALK.
NOW WAITING FOR MAYA TRUTH COMES IN FRONT OF ALL FAMILY.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Fantastic update dear...beautifully penned down...
loved the song...and your writing style...👍🏼👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Loved. It
Try to like bt getting error
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Interesting turn in events...loved it!!!
Thnks fr the Pm!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
so all now know what happened
manvi showin video when they didn't believe her
all angry on virat except VA
now manvi wants divorce n virat is kicked out of the room
im actually hoping virat goes after maya n finds proof of what happened
then maybe he can find a way to win back his love n his family
lookin forward to next update
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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